bay girl Posted December 31, 2006 Report Posted December 31, 2006 That was amazing. I love it Krys. Quote
Jamey-Maria Posted January 3, 2007 Report Posted January 3, 2007 Thanks for the reviews God you're brilliant. Seriously, wow! I'm never going to let you forget saying that Quote
puja Posted January 11, 2007 Report Posted January 11, 2007 Wow, that was amazing! The description of Martha's feelings were brilliant; I really felt like I knew what she was going through. Just, fantastic! Quote
baby gurl Posted January 11, 2007 Report Posted January 11, 2007 i thought it was ash that she was talking about! any was really god chapter loved martha t the end! xx Quote
-Laura- Posted January 12, 2007 Report Posted January 12, 2007 Aww that was really good! Poor Martha! Great writing! Quote
Barbara Posted May 22, 2009 Report Posted May 22, 2009 That was a dark but very well written one shot! I understand why she feels dirty but how was she to know Ash was married to someone else and had children with her? You don't expect your new boyfriend to cheat on you. She shouldn't be so hard on herself. It's good to know she still loves Jack. Technically, their marriage ending wasn't all her fault. Okay, she gave up really quickly but if Jack had spent a bit more time with her and not at work, they still might have been together. Quote
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