Roccoluver Posted April 9, 2007 Report Posted April 9, 2007 Amanda and Martha?, I misseds much, this story is awesome
Amanda Vale Posted April 9, 2007 Report Posted April 9, 2007 Amanda and Martha?, I misseds much, this story is awesome Thanks for the feedback Jane I added Rocco to the story spesially for you There is more about Martha and Amanda that 's on the way
Tasha Posted April 9, 2007 Report Posted April 9, 2007 hehe great chapter. Poor Val Peter stop bugging Mitzi. I hope she wakes up soon. Martha and Amanda. I love those two. I wish they'd team up on the show. Awww...i love them Great chapter More please
vale4eva Posted April 9, 2007 Report Posted April 9, 2007 ^^If Amanda and Martha teamed up together in hna, can you imagine how much trouble theyd cause! Not to mention getting through every single man in summerbay It would be awesome Great chapter, poor Val though why cant Johnny just go away Update soon (bring Jacky back in pwweeease!)
Amanda Vale Posted April 9, 2007 Report Posted April 9, 2007 If Amanda and Martha teamed up together in hna, can you imagine how much trouble theyd cause! Not to mention getting through every single man in summerbay It would be awesome That would be quite nice he he Great chapter, poor Val though why cant Johnny just go away Mmmm nope sorry he is there for a reason he will eventually Peter stop bugging Mitzi Mmmm let's hope you like what i have in stall for those two he he Thanks for the feedback guys PS. I am moving from one country to the other He he Mozambique back to South Afrika(though we are onley an hours drive away He he he ) So if i dont post regurarley dont be upset it is becouse i wount be able to get anywhere near the internet But ill try to update promise Regards
Amanda Vale Posted April 10, 2007 Report Posted April 10, 2007 Hey guys here is my next update enjoy!! Chapter 13 Just outside Summer Bay (Sam and Rocco drive down the road when Jack and Fitzy stop them) SAM: Good day officers Smiles at them and takes off his sunnies JACK: Where are you off the mate? Looking very closely at the truck SAM: I’m taking Rocco to school he is already late! Nods with his head to Rocco JACK: And what do you have in the back of the truck? Looks at the back of the truck were Johnny and Val is lying behind all the stuff they are taking with them SAM: Moving all my stuff from the City Gets out of the truck and opens just a little part of the back JACK: All right mate have a safe journey Helps Sam to close the back of the truck SAM: Thanks officers take care Nods to them politely, gets back into the truck and drive off into town to drop Rocco at school ROCCO: That was close Gives a smile of relieve SAM: No that was anything Laughs (Jack and Fitzy standing on the side of the road talking) JACK: There was something weird about that guy! Thinks FITZY: I think I’ve seen him before but I’m not sure! Thinks back JACK: No it’s not that, Rocco was nervous the entire time we were looking at the back of the truck! FITZY: That was because he is late for school Thinks for a moment I know I would be nervous if I wanted to make a new start like him JACK: You’re probably right Stares down the road at the truck as it disappears around the bend FITZY: What are you staring at? Looks at him JACK: Nothing… He looks unsure of his choice to let Sam drive away FITZY: You made the right choice Jack! Thinks about how hurt Jack was when Martha cheated on him JACK: About what? Looks at Fitzy with questions in his eyes FITZY: To let go of Martha Looks at Jack in a funny way JACK: I wasn’t thinking about her! Thinks at Val’s beautiful smile FITZY: We will find her Jack Pats Jack on the back JACK: I know… Sounds a little unsure of his statement Summer Bay High – main corridor (Cassie sees Rocco walk past the class she stands up and go into the main corridor) CASSIE: Rocco! ROCCO: Looks behind him Hi Cassie CASSIE: Where are you off to? Looks at Rocco as if she wanted to say you’re late for class ROCCO: To Mr Armstrong’s office Seeks her pity by dropping his head CASSIE: Leave it come into class Sally is with Brad in his office Grabs Rocco by his hand and leads the way into class (In the class room things gets worse for Rocco as he has to lie about where he was and what he was doing) DREW: If it isn’t the gangster nice off you to join us He sais very sarcastically ROCCO: What’s your problem mate? He says standing next to Drew staring down at him DREW: Drop the act ROCCO: What act? DREW: Don’t act like you don’t know! BELLE: Shut up Drew your annoying every one DREW: You shut up He wispers something and Rocco hears it ROCCO: Take that back DREW: No I’m not scared off you! ROCCO: Take it back or else DREW: What????? Tries to scare Rocco off ROCCO: Picks Drew up by his shirt and shoves him up against the wall I’ll make you Curtis BELLE: That’s enough Rocco he isn’t worth it Looks at Drew and smirks at him DREW: You’re a SLUT and you’re just like Amanda like mother like daughter ROCCO: Stop it Curtis (As Drew speaks her doesn’t notice Dan standing at the door) DREW: No she is not just like Amanda she is far worse then her at…. DAN: Cut it out Drew that’s enough DREW: Bu… DAN: I said that’s enough Speaks very strict to Drew Now tell her you sorry DREW: I’m sorry Belle He says it but pulls eyes at her DAN: Good now take your seats and sit stil until Ms Fletcher gets back He knows this isn’t going to happen Cassie your in charge here CASSIE: Yes Mr Baker Smiles at Dan DAN: If anything happens come and call me Tries to look strict CASSIE: No problem Mr Baker everything will be fine Stares at Drew and goes and sit at her desk The Hospital – Mitzi’s room (Martha enters) MARTHA (speaking to Mitzi) Why can’t you just get better? She starts crying I know the people of the town hasn’t been kind to you Wipes a tear of her cheek It is so unfair that people judge one another Takes Mitzi’s hand in her own I want to get to know you! Tears rolling down her cheek Please wake up! She cries heavily Even though your Josh’s sister I want to have a chance to know you better She lays her head on the bed Please Mitzi She cries on until she falls asleep
vale4eva Posted April 10, 2007 Report Posted April 10, 2007 ........ Poor Jacky! Poor Val Poor Martha Poor Mitzy Poor anyone else ive left out Grrr to Sam Grrr to Rocco Grr to Johnny Great chapter! But Jacks gotten over Martha! Damit! More please ps. This chocloate moose im eating tastes vile
Sally_Fletcher Posted April 10, 2007 Report Posted April 10, 2007 I can't wait for you lot to finish moving! Man, that's going to be great! Anyway, good updates!
*~Abi~* Posted April 12, 2007 Report Posted April 12, 2007 *hugs them all (except johnny and whoever acttacted mitzy)* hope pete and jack work out who did it soon wicked adds hun more soon xx
Tasha Posted April 13, 2007 Report Posted April 13, 2007 awww...poor Martha Poor Jacky Poor Val Stupid Drew Great chapter More please
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