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This chapter changed 4 times lol it had a mind of it's own

I brought in a new character - Riley Scott who is this guy? you will find out soon enough

enjoy the update!

CHAPTER 22

The beach

Martha stops her car; she takes another look at the letter the reaches in underneath the passenger seat of her car. She pulls out a bottle of rum; she stares at the moon then watch as it shines over the bay. Switches of her engine, forgetting to take the keys from the ignition she leaves the car door open and heads down to the beach

MARTHA:

Finds a place on the beach that’s high enough to be dry at high tide

Why?

A tear rolls down her cheek as she asks herself

NO…

Takes a huge gulp from the bottle

AMANDA!

She exclaims as she stares over the ocean, Please you c…

She gets up and runs toward the water

As she reaches the water she stands in the waves completely oblivious of the presence of a figure lurking in the dark, she takes another huge gulp from the bottle. As a wave crashes down on her she loses her footing and goes under. He runs towards the water ripping his shirt of and dives in to find her, as he gets hold of her beneath the crashing waves he scoops her up and run towards the dry sand cradling Martha in his arms

RILEY:

While preforming CPR

Come on breath

Gives her another breath

Come on…

Martha Starts couching she opens her eyes and stare into his big brown eyes, eyes she has definitely seen before, but not his someone else also has the exact same eyes

MARTHA:

Who are you?

Her voice doesn’t sound like hers

RILEY:

Smiles at her

Welcome back

Rubs some sand from her cheek

I thought you were a goner

MARTHA:

Smiles at the stranger cradling her head in his hands

You haven’t answered my question yet

Waits in anticipation

RILEY:

Riley Scott at your service mam

He jokes

No my turn to ask a question

He pauses for a moment

What were you thinking?

MARTHA:

Looks surprises

Where is my bottle of rum?

RILEY:

That’s what I mean

Shakes his head

You were getting drunk on rum then dashed into the waves

Gives her a slight smile

Why?

MARTHA:

I never saw you, where did you come from

Still looking in his eyes, this time for answers

How did you know I was here?

RILEY:

Saw the car, and then I heard you screaming

Frowns

Who is Amanda?

Smiles

You were screaming her name

MARTHA:

I’m cold

She rubs her arms

She was my best friend

Starts crying

RILEY:

Looks troubled

Was as in past tense?

MARTHA:

Looks at him with her eyes full of tears

She died in an accident a few hours ago

Rubs her arms and start shivering

RILEY:

Smiles at her

I’m very sorry for your loss

Wipes the tears away

Let me take you home

Smirks

You’re in no condition to drive yourself

MARTHA:

Looks down

I don’t want go home

RILEY:

Stands up, he picks her up and smiles as she laughs

You can come home with me

The sun rises over Summer Bay, while the sun is shining outside a dark cloud hovers over the residence

Fletcher residence

Sally is busy making breakfast, Brad is getting little Pippa dressed and Cassie and Rick heads down Stairs for breakfast

SALLY:

Morning sleepy head

She teases Rick

RICK:

Morning Sal

CASSIE:

Where is Martha?

Looks around

She is usually up before we are

RICK:

I never heard her come in last night

SALLY:

I’m sure she is still at the hospital

Looks over her shoulder as a worried Brad walks in

Is everything fine Brad?

BRAD:

Martha is not at the hospital

Walks towards Sally

She left before we did

SALLY:

What?

Looks at Brad

Are you sure

BRAD:

She found a letter on her car seat and sped of before I could ask her what was written in it

Reaches for his phone and makes a call

Outside the beach side diner

JACK:

Peter we have looked at all her usual spots

Shakes his head

Is Brad even sure she has gone missing?

PETER:

Looks at Jack

Mate she didn’t come home

Sighs

Where could she be?

Looks at jack again

You were married to her where would she go?

Before Jack could answer Peter they see her car parked at the entrance to the beach not far away. They walk closer to investigate only to find the keys still in the ignition and the door wide open

PETER:

Reaches for his cell phone

Fits its Peter put a bolo out on Martha Steward she has gone missing

Walks in a circle

Oh and send a team down to the beach at the diner we found her car it’s been abandoned

Hangs up the phone

JACK:

Are you sure she is missing Pete?

PETER:

Frowns

Better safe than sorry mate

Thinks for a moment

We don’t want two missing persons in the bay

Puts his hand on Jack’s shoulder

We are doing everything to find Val; we will do the same for Martha

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Here is my next update

please comment so that i can know what you think

enjoy :whistling::wink:

CHAPTER 23

THE CITY

Riley’s apartment

Riley has been up for hours he walks up and down in front of the window of his bedroom, then he looks over to his bed and smiles. Martha looks so beautiful in her sleep her bare body is covered with a white sheet. The phone rings he answers quickly and walks out to the hall not to wake her up

He re-enters the room after the call and rushes over to the bed

RILEY:

Martha

He whispers

Wake up sleepy head

MARTHA:

Opens her eyes slowly and looks into his eyes

What happened last night?

She teases him and laughs

RILEY:

You don’t remember?

He looks puzzled

MARTHA:

I do silly

She removes the sheet exposing her bare body to him

RILEY:

WOW!

Smiles

You still look even prettier than last night

He forgets the reason why he woke her up, then takes his boxers of and jumps in the bed next to her and pulls the sheet over them

Summer Bay police Station

PETER:

I have spoken to the police in the city they will send a detective to assist with the search

JACK:

Peter isn’t it a bit drastic?

Looks at Lara

FITZY:

Peter…

PETER:

He should be arriving soon

Puts his hands on his waist

When he does call me I’ll be in my office

He walks into his office and slams the door shut

JACK:

Looks at Peter’s door then turns to Lara

I think Amanda’s death hit him harder than we thought

FITZY:

Shakes her head

I have never seen him like this before

Frowns

He didn’t even take her cheating on him so hard

JACK:

Nods at her

He still loves her

Frowns

Now I start wondering about Martha

FITZY:

Smirks

Peter’s moods is rubbing off on you

Shakes her head and turns to her desk as her phone rings

Lara Fitzgerald

She politely answers

Are you sure?

Starts getting a frown on her face

Okay thanks I’ll tell Detective Baker

JACK:

What is it Fitz?

FITZY:

That was a policeman from the city

She frowns

He saw Martha!

JACK:

What…

Waits for her to elaborate

FITZY:

She was…

She stops mid-sentence when Peter’s door flies open

PETER:

Is he here yet?

He looks angry

JACK:

Who Peter?

Looks puzzled

PETER:

Detective Scott

His cell phone starts ringing

Peter Baker

He answers

No he has not arrived yet

Listens to the other person

Excuse me…

He stutters on his words

He did what?

He heads back to his office and again the door slams shut

The City – Riley’s apartment

Riley’s phone rings again, he sits on the side of the bed and answers

RILEY:

Detective Scott

He says in his masculine voice

What?

He frowns

Another missing person in Summer Bay

He smirks

Who is it?

He goes pale

Martha Steward…

He looks at her

Tell detective Baker I’m on my way

Shakes his head

Okay Larry I’m leaving in 10 min

Listens

Tell him I found Martha Steward

Laughs

Oh you told him

Smiles at her

She is here with me; do you want to chat with her?

Smiles

Okay mate bye

He hangs up the phone and rolls over and lies on top of Martha

Apparently you are a missing person

He kisses her

We have to go to the bay; I have been requested to assist with the search for you and my sister

He gets out of bed, and looks over to Martha

Get dressed sexy

MARTHA:

Laughs

Who reported me missing?

Wonders who could have done it

RILEY:

Your car was found abandoned on the beach

Smiles

Let’s go sort it all out

Smirks

And then you’re coming back with me

MARTHA:

Why?

She teases him

RILEY:

So I can have my way with you every day

Smiles and passes her pants to her

MARTHA:

Oh detective Scott

She smiles

RILEY:

Raises his eyebrow

I could have my way with you again before we leave

Smiles

MARTHA:

No Riley we have to leave

RILEY:

Okay beautiful

He folds his arms around her and kisses her

Summer Bay

Summer Bay High – Main Corridor

All the students are talking about what had happened the night before

BELLE:

I wish everyone would stop looking at me

She says to Drew

DREW:

Everyone knows about Amanda

Sees Cassie, Matilda and Lucas walking towards them

Hey guys

He greets them

CASSIE:

Have you guys heard?

She asks them

BELLE:

Heard what?

She ask

CASSIE:

Martha has gone missing

DREW:

When?

LUCAS:

Apparently last night

Looks at the rest of the kids staring at Belle

You should be ashamed of yourselves

He shouts

Leave Belle alone

AIDEN:

Walks up to them

I’m sorry about your mother Belle

BELLE:

Thank you

She gets her books from her locker and walks into class

DREW:

Nice going dude

He says to Aiden who is just standing there

AIDEN:

I was being polite

He snaps and goes to class

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