Roccoluver Posted March 23, 2007 Report Posted March 23, 2007 /\ /\ Thanks y'all! And thanks to you too Roc... I wasn't too sure about this one, but my partner likes it and I trust her judgement! So here goes: Ahhh, put the spot light on me , nope its good Quote
HeavenForbid Posted March 23, 2007 Author Report Posted March 23, 2007 Great chapter! update soon! Quote
Lowi Posted March 23, 2007 Report Posted March 23, 2007 Sally looks up when a foot softly rubs against hers. Rocco is looking at her with a shadow of a smile on his face... Great update, I really like that part ^^ though..it just kinda struck something inside of me and I can imagine Rocco doing that lol. Update soon! x Quote
Inactive User Posted March 23, 2007 Report Posted March 23, 2007 Wow like the last previous parts. Um...I vote for Rocco. But he seemes a bit young for her. But I don't mind if they end up together like Kim and Rachael did. Quote
QUIET ACHIEVER Posted March 24, 2007 Report Posted March 24, 2007 /\ /\ Thanks y'all! And thanks to you too Roc... I wasn't too sure about this one, but my partner likes it and I trust her judgement! That was a wonderful chapter and I liked it too! It should be interesting how this unfolds between Brad and Rocco. I hope that Rocco will take advantage that only he and Sally are in the house and that he should clear the air with Sal before she continues to get the wrong idea about what had happened when that girl kissed Rocco. Please update soon... the suspense is unbearable. :cool: Quote
clarky24 Posted March 24, 2007 Report Posted March 24, 2007 I have just read this story from the beginning. To start off with i wasn't too sure about what to think about Sally and Rocco but i have to admit that even though it is wrong in many ways i actually think they are good together. It will be interesting to see how Brad fits into the story now as it is pretty clear that he likes Sally a lot. Keep up the good work guys. Quote
Roccoluver Posted March 24, 2007 Report Posted March 24, 2007 thank you, you're all to kind, heres my part hope you enjoy Part 12 Sally sighed and relaxed into her bed, Brad liked her, really liked her. She glazed over at the photo of her and Flynn, He had always said she’d find some one new, he never said it would be the wrong person. Checking her watch, she made up her mind to head to bed, clear her mind. Her mind of Rocco, he strong arms, his heart melting smile, his pure innocent that dragged you in, Rocco naked….. Stop Sally! She yelled to her, No not there, rubbing her eyes she tried to clear that picture out of her mind, It wasn’t right he was a student, a kid and he had hurt her, she didn’t love him anymore, she was over him. After all he had only wanted to get in her pants, she had more respect for herself than that. She rolled on her bed and stared out to the night sky, There was a soft knock on the door. “What” she called out, Rocco’s head poke in, “Sal” She glared at him and he looked away. “Sal, please…” Rocco started again, “It was a mistake, I dint want it to happen”. Sally feels the tears build up, “I don’t know what you’re talking about Rocco, but its time for bed” she said in a fake happy tone, forcing a smile. “Sally, you can’t deny…” Rocco said, why can’t she see he loves her, Everything about her, her eyes, her hair, her smile, her smartness, her caring ness, her willingness. To him she perfect, flaws and all. She glares at him but it lacks backing, she can’t stay mad, Before she can back down, she points to the door, not daring to speak, Rocco slouches in defeat and stagers off, head bowed in hurt. Brad picks up the phone, he starts to dial Sally number, but glazing over at the clock, placing the phone back down, he rubbed his temple. He picks up the phone again and dial Sally, he needs to tell her how he feels…. The phone rings in the hallway, Rocco look around before making his way to the phone…. Quote
Inactive User Posted March 24, 2007 Report Posted March 24, 2007 Good part. Welll Sally seemed torn between two guys, eh? Update soon Quote
Roccoluver Posted March 24, 2007 Report Posted March 24, 2007 Good part. Welll Sally seemed torn between two guys, eh? Update soon LOL, thanks Sarah, there should be an update soon, my partner in crime is on the case Quote
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