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Another teaser and because I am very, very evil, it is is very, very small :wink:

"I think I'd better her get her back to the station."

"Hey, I'm standing right here!" Zoe protested but was ignored. Again.

"Yeah, go, get her out of here." Peter said in disgust. He didn't know what he'd do if he had to look at Zoe's smug face any longer.

"You." Tracey said to Constable McLaren as he passed by. "Come with me."

""What?" Zoe licked her lips and looked Tracey up and down. "Afraid to be alone with me?"

Tracey gave Zoe a slow smirk and raised an eyebrow. "I thought you would've worked it out by now, Zoe. Nobody is afraid of you. Not anymore."

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Hey the first bit was wicked is that the only one you have posted. And the rest teasers?

When will the next bit be up I hate teasers :(

Loving it soooooo much though :P

Pete :wub::wub:

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Teasers were hot stuff. When's the update going to be? Can't wait for the full chapter. Gawd, please don't kill off Zoe or Tracey or Pete... :P

Tracey unafraid of Zoe? :wub: Wow! Gawd, I'd kill to have that scene acted out!

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