Traceve Posted May 16, 2007 Report Posted May 16, 2007 Ouch! My girls Love the teaser, I hope this means there is going to be an update soon!?
allibaz91 Posted May 16, 2007 Report Posted May 16, 2007 If she's making me update LAT before I go, she'd bleedin well better update Awesome teaser, Chrissie Makes me think ..... sickness = food poisoning? Update soon!
Lilone Posted May 16, 2007 Report Posted May 16, 2007 No, NO, NO, NO, NO!!! She is making a brand new one shot of Panda and I can tell you now that its going to be very explicit
Oxidizer Posted May 16, 2007 Report Posted May 16, 2007 Ooh! Have they been drugged and the breaks cut or something?
Traceve Posted May 17, 2007 Report Posted May 17, 2007 She is making a brand new one shot of Panda and I can tell you now that its going to be very explicit I know!! I can't wait! eeeee!
swfc Posted May 17, 2007 Report Posted May 17, 2007 Lil, stop spamming my thread with Panda stuff. This fic has nothing to do with Panda. It's got to do with SP, MOHF and Clete goodness. Don't pollute it with Panda, please. Andy- Good guesses. You'll have to wait to find out.
Traceve Posted May 17, 2007 Report Posted May 17, 2007 This fic has nothing to do with Panda. It's got to do with SP, MOHF Can't wait for an update!
swfc Posted May 18, 2007 Report Posted May 18, 2007 Right, here's the promised update so enjoy. Chapter 6: Eve didn’t stay long at the hospital. She decided to go out and take a fresh air and decide where she would go now. Which direction would her revenge go? She didn’t know. She needed to think. Tracey and Rachel dying wasn’t what she had planned for.... The moment the engine was revved up, it came. Slowly, Eve’s contraption came to life. Letting out slow small wisps of air. Not just any air. Poisonous air. Inhaling too much of it could cause death. Yet, none of the felt it. That was what was so deadly about it. It was small enough to kill but undetectable. A silent killer. Just like Eve herself. “Trace, stop the car!” “What? In the middle of the road?! Are you nuts?” “I don’t feel good.” “What do you mean?” “I don’t know. I just feel sick. I think I need to throw up.” “What? You’re not throwing up in my car, missy!” “Well, then stop the car!” “I would if I could. There’s no where to stop. And I can’t stop in the middle of the road, Rach!” “Tracey! Watch out!” And with that, Tracey Thompson turned and stared at an on-coming car heading directly towards them. It was too late. Before any of them knew, the car had headed towards the ditch and they were unconscious. It was really bright and her head was hurting. She tried to move but felt something holding her back. It was as though she was being pinned down by something hard. She felt something in her throat but couldn’t for the life of her get rid of it. She started to panic. And it was then that Tracey Thompson opened her eyes. Peter Baker had a restless night. Truth be told, he hardly slept a wink. He looked towards his left and looked at Clare, her breathing so peaceful and she slept ever so soundly. He was grateful for her. If she weren’t here, who knows what would’ve happened. He owed her a lot. After the pain that he had caused the last time round, her giving him a second chance was a blessing indeed. Peter let out a deep sigh, not loud enough to wake Clare up but loud enough to be heard, since the room was so quiet. His thoughts started to wander and he thought back about the night before and his encounter with Tracey’s cousin which she had somehow failed to mention to him. He knew all of Tracey’s family members and he knew Tracey really well. Considering that they were best friends, after all. Yet, something about Maxine Trood really got to him. He wanted to know why. No, he needed to know why. There was something unsettling about her. Something about her that was familiar to him. he was so lost in his thoughts that he didn’t hear Clare stir until she said, “Should I be jealous?” “Huh? What?” “She must be something to have kept you up all night long.” “I’m sorry. I should have slept on the couch.” “No, not to worry. Your tossing and turning didn’t really bother me. I’m used to it.” “I really am sorry, Clare. I just... I’m just worried about Tracey and Rachel.” “That’s understandable. But I think what has you more intrigued is Tracey’s cousin.” “Yeah, you’re right.” He said whilst giving her a kiss on her forehead. “Which brings me back to my first question, really.” “What was your first question?” “Should I be jealous?” He chuckled and planted a big, fat slobbering kiss on her lips. She got her response. Just as things were starting to get interesting, however, both their mobiles went off. It was Murphy. Each looked at the other, wondering who should pick their phone up. Peter gave Clare his best puppy dog eyes look. She rolled her eyes and picked hers up. “Clare Brody.... hey, boss.... yes, he’s here..... What? We’re on our way.” As soon as Clare put down the phone, Peter looked at her anxiously. “What?!?” “Murphy says that the hospital rang. Tracey’s awake.” Peter sat down there in stunned silence. Preview: Will Tracey remember what happened? Will she tell Peter and Clare what happened? Will Peter find out that his arch nemesis is still alive?
Traceve Posted May 18, 2007 Report Posted May 18, 2007 He chuckled and planted a big, fat slobbering kiss on her lips. Where is my kiss from Pete? lol. Awesome update Chrissie, that was defiently worth the wait! Love my Evie, . I really do hope Tracey remembers what happens and that Rachel will wake up soon. Update Soon!
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