Because You Loved Me (by beckyboo) - comments

[vale4eva]

You no, that was actually a really good chapter. Who ever the genius was who wrote it, bravo!

Your welcome though! But you owe me! You owe me BIG!!!

Hopefully the next one you'll be able to write youself

More please (from YOU, not me lol)

[beckyboo]

Hey I did wrote some of it

xxxxx

[Tasha]

Martha deverses to be unloved. HOw dare she give up such a beautiful baby like that. Maybe if you gave him a cuter name jks Poor Jacky. I just want to hug him Jacky is too nice to Martha, if i were him, i would be giving her the cold shoulder

MOre please

[kaciexox]

omg! fantastic chapter

please let it get better

update soon

[katie343]

  beckyboo said:

“Its ok daddy, don’t cry” she said as she gripped onto him tightly.

Aww she's so cute!

Can't wait for more

[Sam =)]

Your evil and mean and I hate you!

Go away never talk to me again.

Whay did you do that? They could have ben happy now the are both going to get depressed and everything is ruined

Great writing, but I still hate you

[vale4eva]

  beckyboo said:

Hey I did wrote some of it

xxxxx

Yeah, only like the first 10 lines

[Zetti]

I am gonna cry, Martha is a butt head, Jack is so gorge. Ava is cuter and Lewis is even cuter.

Cute chapter from whoever wrote it

[-ParaisGal-]

I am seriously not liking Martha atm. She's just making me go grrr! lol.

Keep going.

Make Jack leave her, and take Ava and Lewis.

I really don't like her in this fic.

[puja]

Awww, that was so touching

Jack is such a sweetheart. He still has the sensitivity and understanding to try and help Martha; even if it means being away from his beloved son

That was written excellently. I could see it from both Jack and Martha's perspective; very heart wrenching.

Great, now I have to go revise feeling all emotional and glum; thanks Becky and Rachel

Hope they all become a cute, little family soon. Update when you can!