~Lynd~ Posted April 25, 2007 Report Posted April 25, 2007 I've just read the whole thing and love it!!Sally and Johnny are a unusual but brilliant pairing. And ladies,Johnny's mine so hands off!!
jessirhall Posted April 26, 2007 Report Posted April 26, 2007 I've just read the whole thing and love it!!Sally and Johnny are a unusual but brilliant pairing. And ladies,Johnny's mine so hands off!! No back off i saw him first
Sally_Fletcher Posted April 26, 2007 Report Posted April 26, 2007 I've just read the whole thing and love it!!Sally and Johnny are a unusual but brilliant pairing. And ladies,Johnny's mine so hands off!! No back off i saw him first Maybe we should all share him... I'll have him on Fridays... Thanks for the comments!
Sally_Fletcher Posted April 26, 2007 Report Posted April 26, 2007 I thought I already posted this part... turns out I didn't... Hehe... Thanks for all the feedback and...Here goes: Johnny takes a deep breath before knocking on the door. Alf opens it and glares at Johnny for a few seconds. "What the flamin hell do you want?" "I want to see Sally." "She's not here! You've messed up enough, just leave now." "Mr Stewart, please. I love her." "Right." He slams the door in Johnny's face. Sam looks at Sally, who is whimpering against the wall, shaking like a leaf. "You know, I can almost understand why Johnny fell for you. But see, we need him. And as long as you are around we come second. And we can't let that happen." Biting her lip nervously, Sally closes her eyes, hoping for a miracle. It doesn't happen. Sam pulls her up roughly, smacking her across the face violently. "When we first came here, Johnny wanted to get rid of you. Then he wanted to use you. Then he fell in love with you. Now we are going to finish his original plan - slowly and painfully." "I still can't believe she did it. Johnny of all people!" Cassie shakes her head angrily. "You'd think she'd know better. Look at how she was with me and Macca! She didn't trust him, but she trusted Johnny." Rocco shrugs. "This was one time she took giving second chances a little far." "A little?" Ric sighs. "I can't believe Sal would do something so stupid. What was she thinking?" "I'll flamin tell you what she was thinking. She wasn't thinking at all!" Ric shakes his head. "That's so unlike Sal." "Sally. Sally, wake up. Come on, Sal." Sally slowly opens her eyes. It's dark around her - she can't even see her hand in front of her face. She winces when she tries to sit up. Soft hands help her to sit up against the wall. The familiar voice speaks again. "Listen to me Sal - you're going to be fine. You just have to be very smart." Sally frowns, trying to back away - terrified.' "No... You? How can you be here?" "You need me now. I'm not staying. I can just quickly help you. Now don't move. Just listen." She nods slowly, still scared. "If you turn the bed on it's side to make it higher and drag it to the window and stand on it, you'll be able to reach the window. Pull yourself up and climb through. Now, Sal, I know you're afraid of hights, but you'll have to jump down. Can you do that?" "I don't know..." "I'll be there. Don't worry." "Okay... I can do it." "Good. Then run as fast as you can until you reach the road. Turn to your left and keep in the road. You're not far from the Bay. You can make it." "What if they find me?" "They'll come back to bring you dinner about six o'clock. Don't eat it, no matter how hungry you are. After they brought you dinner, you have three hours to get away. Use every second." She nods and he grabs her hands. "I love you, Sally." She looks at him, tears forming in her eyes. " He smiles, wiping a strand of hair out of her face. "Johnny isn't a bad guy. He really loves you too." He softly kisses the top of her head before disappearing into thin air. Sally moans softly, feeling a sharp pain in her back. She opens her eyes, slowly getting accustommed to the darkness. Remebering the earlier conversation she had, she frowns, looking around. "Flynn? Are you still here? Flynn!" She bites her lip and shakes her head. Then she sees the bed, not far from the window and smiles. "It wasn't a dream. She looks at the window, tears forming in her eyes. "Thanks Flynn."
sazcaz89 Posted April 26, 2007 Report Posted April 26, 2007 Love it! I can't believe flynn helped her. I hope she is going to be ok and that Johnny help her.
kaciexox Posted April 27, 2007 Report Posted April 27, 2007 FLYNNNNNN yay!! I have totally forgotten how everyone knew about Johnny and Sal though lol Oh well Jonhnny will save Sally .... Johnny loves her This just keeps getting better and better Update soon
jessirhall Posted April 27, 2007 Report Posted April 27, 2007 I just love this fic...when your done you both should get permission from H&A and publish it as a novel...i'd buy it for sure
Roccoluver Posted April 27, 2007 Report Posted April 27, 2007 I just love this fic...when your done you both should get permission from H&A and publish it as a novel...i'd buy it for sure Really? thanks and kaciexox thanks for you comments- Rocco found out b'cos he saw them Kiss and told everyone thanks guys for your awesomes comments and the next part will be up soon, Im also sure I've written it up
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