The Plan That Has Come To An End!

[Roccoluver]

yay an update, poor Amanda why did she sign her stuff over to Kelli? will Belle save her in time, I hope so

update soon

[Stevie]

This is great Loving every bit of it

The Pete and Belle stuff is cute I hope they figure out what Kelli is up to and warn Amanda.

And of course I hope that Panda reunite

Update soon

[Traceve]

Lil! Update!

[swfc]

I can't believe I actually forgot about this.

What can I say? Peter/Belle scenes were cute. Kelli's plans are definitely going to go up in smokes and then Panda will reunite as much as Alli and I are against it.

Anyway, love the descriptive writing and I love how the scene went back and forth from Peter/Belle to Amanda. Nicely done.

Update soon.

[Traceve]

Please let Panda, live happily ever after, you know you want to

[aejdude]

Great chapter.

That was really good, i wonder what Pete and Belle will find out in their investigation and i bet that was Ethan on the phone. Maybe Kelli can get killled on the way to meeting him.

I bet Kelli has tampered with the letters in some way, why else would she be looking at them?

Hope it's not too late for Amanda.

Update soon.

[Cerise]

If your continuing this could you please fill out the Index Form and if not please let us know so we can move it? Thanks

[Traceve]

Lil, update now!

[Lilone]

I will update tonight but for now heres a teaser!

“But what about the pictures?” belle asked Peter.

“For all we know that could be Kelli’s new boyfriend?” Peter replied.

“Ok if she is her new boy friend what’s with the brown package?” Belle shot at Peter.

“Look I don’t know Belle I just don’t understand any of this!”

“I not just going to stay here why mum is being fooled by her” Belle shot at Peter walking towards the door.

“Ok, ok we will go over and make sure she is ok but if Kelli is there do not let her suspect anything,” Peter said sharply.

[Traceve]

Your going to update *faints*