vale4eva Posted April 13, 2007 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2007 Great last few chapters! I like AJ now too ^^ He seems like hes turned a new leaf Poor Rebecca though, im sad for her.... More soon please!? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted April 13, 2007 Report Share Posted April 13, 2007 She calls Jack right?? Who else could she call. Great chapter. Martha is so stupid. Im glad Jess is gone Now Jacky can help Martha and look after his beautiful babies More please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted April 13, 2007 Report Share Posted April 13, 2007 Right Ok Poor Becky being stuck in all of this Stupid Cam for getting Martha hooked on those things in the 1st place Yayyy Jess has gone Poor Rebecca and AJ Update soon hunni xxxxxxxxxxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted April 13, 2007 Report Share Posted April 13, 2007 Jack! She rings Jack so he can be a superhero! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeavenForbid Posted April 13, 2007 Report Share Posted April 13, 2007 Teasers from the last few chapters - "Get you stuff and get the f*ck out of here!" - She was not able to drive under her current state. - "Call an ambulance" - "Follow me and I will show you exactly what I mean!" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted April 13, 2007 Report Share Posted April 13, 2007 - "Get you stuff and get the f*ck out of here!" - Martha to Cam or Becky - She was not able to drive under her current state. Becky or Jack or Luc - "Call an ambulance" some randomer - "Follow me and I will show you exactly what I mean!" the nurse? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted April 13, 2007 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2007 - "Follow me and I will show you exactly what I mean!" Thats Martha talking seductively to Jack Great chapter, but what is Martha doing! More soon please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted April 14, 2007 Report Share Posted April 14, 2007 (edited) lol i like that one Rachel. Martha to Jack an ambulance??? oh gosh i hope everyone is alright. Oh wait, ive forgotten what happened in this fic, wil go check EDIT: i remember now. you say last few chapters, this fic is finished???? Edited April 14, 2007 by jack4martha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeavenForbid Posted April 14, 2007 Report Share Posted April 14, 2007 EDIT: i remember now. you say last few chapters, this fic is finished???? No, It is not finished yet. I have the rst of the fic written though, so I decided to put in those teasers Another 9 chapters left.......... Chapter 28 “We will be over at 6 then” said a voice on the phone. “Thank you” Becky said and hung up. Becky went for a walk. She saw Martha on the beach. She walked into the diner and saw Lucas. “Hey! What are you still doing here?” he asked smiling “Change of plan! I am staying” Becky replied ***** Rebecca was on her third bottle of wine by the time 5 in the evening arrived. AJ came worried about her. She had not stopped drinking since she came home from the hospital. He went into the bedroom and talked to talk to her. “Get me another bottle” Rebecca said “Don’t you think you have had enough?” asked AJ “No! Get me another.” Shouted Rebecca again “No. I won’t. You can get it yourself.” AJ said Rebecca got up and walked out of the room. She came back a few minutes later annoyed “There is none left!” she yelled at AJ “Is that my fault?” AJ snapped Rebecca got back into the bed and AJ went out of the room ***** Everyone was in the Fletcher household at 6. Becky waited nervously for them to come. When Martha came home she didn’t say a word to Becky. She was furious at the way Becky spoke to her and saying that she was an unfit mother. Sally cooked the dinner. They all sat down. Sally noticed there was some tension between Becky and Martha and she wasn’t the only one that noticed. Alf and Morag did as well. “Where is Ric?” Martha asked “At Mattie’s” Sally said “So love, Why did you change your mind?” Alf asked Becky “Oh…Well…Me and Lucas are doing great so - ” There was a knock on the door. Becky’s heart skipped a beat. Sally got up and opened the door. Standing there was two women. “We are from social services” said one of the women. Martha looked around. She looked at Becky who was crying. “You b*tch!” Martha shouted “Martha! I am so sorry! But the kids need a good home and a safe environment to live in” Becky said “Don’t ever speak to me again. And you!” she said looking at the women “You! Will never take my babies away from me! I am a good mother!” “I am sorry. But we have to investigate that statement” said one of the women “What the flaming hell is going on?” Alf asked Martha ran out of the room and up to the kids. Becky filled everyone in. “What?” Alf said shocked “We have to investigate this…” one of the women interpreted Martha came down the stairs. The two women talked to everyone in the home. They agreed that Martha was not able to look after the children. They would be taken away from her. Martha ran out of the house. “Where will they go?” Becky asked “Well…In foster care for now” “Please. Can I look after them?” Becky asked “Becky - ” Morag started to say “Please! I will take such good care of them. I have basically been their mother since they were born” Becky begged “I don’t think that is such a good idea!” Sally said “Not if you are living here.” Said the women. “I can sort that out. Give me a half an hour” Becky asked Becky left the house and went over to Lucas’. He opened the door. “I need to ask you something” she said Preview: Will Becky get the kids? Will Martha clean up her act? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted April 14, 2007 Report Share Posted April 14, 2007 OMG they cant take Marthas babies away. ANd Jack should get the babies, he is their father. Poor Rebecca More please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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