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Lol. Yes Sam, I actually do my assingments :P

You know what I think of the update. Its sad but at least I know whats going to happen :P

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Olivia stepped off the front porch towards the road she checked the road for cars just as she had seen her parents do a million times. Suddenly there was a loud screech. Olivia turned to her side and the last thing she saw was a big red 4WD heading straight at her she screamed and a tear fell from her eye what if she never saw her mummy, daddy or Lucy again. Then ………..

It's like that ad where the girl runs onto the road after her dog :( and she looks and there's a car and then she disappears. I really hate that ad. :(

Please update soon I hope she's ok Super Jack should save her run Super Jack run like the wind.

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Thanks Katie :) Next chapter is pretty much finished just got to wait for Rosey I need to send it to her and make sure she is ok with it before I post it.

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:( I hate sad chapters especially as I am doing coursework so it makes me even more depressed. :(

More please and make it better :)

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BLOODY 4Wheel Drive's!!!!! :angry:

Thats another reason why me and Paulie dont like them :P

Remind me agen why theyre so great Sam!? :P

Great chapter, although it made me sad :(

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Nooooooooo she cant be hit by a car :angry:

But she is so cute being protective of Lucy :P

It makes me sad ... she beter not die :(

That was great

Update soon :D

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Thanks for all your comments :D I havnt recieved the fic from Sam yet, but she sent me a pm with a question...so it will proberly be up this afternoon :)

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