~Rosey~ Posted April 25, 2007 Report Posted April 25, 2007 Lol. Yes Sam, I actually do my assingments You know what I think of the update. Its sad but at least I know whats going to happen
katie343 Posted April 25, 2007 Report Posted April 25, 2007 Olivia stepped off the front porch towards the road she checked the road for cars just as she had seen her parents do a million times. Suddenly there was a loud screech. Olivia turned to her side and the last thing she saw was a big red 4WD heading straight at her she screamed and a tear fell from her eye what if she never saw her mummy, daddy or Lucy again. Then ……….. It's like that ad where the girl runs onto the road after her dog and she looks and there's a car and then she disappears. I really hate that ad. Please update soon I hope she's ok Super Jack should save her run Super Jack run like the wind.
Sam =) Posted April 25, 2007 Report Posted April 25, 2007 Thanks Katie Next chapter is pretty much finished just got to wait for Rosey I need to send it to her and make sure she is ok with it before I post it.
Zetti Posted April 25, 2007 Report Posted April 25, 2007 I hate sad chapters especially as I am doing coursework so it makes me even more depressed. More please and make it better
HeavenForbid Posted April 25, 2007 Report Posted April 25, 2007 Last two chapters were great! I hope Olivia is ok Please make her be ok..... Update soon
vale4eva Posted April 25, 2007 Report Posted April 25, 2007 BLOODY 4Wheel Drive's!!!!! Thats another reason why me and Paulie dont like them Remind me agen why theyre so great Sam!? Great chapter, although it made me sad
kaciexox Posted April 25, 2007 Report Posted April 25, 2007 Nooooooooo she cant be hit by a car But she is so cute being protective of Lucy It makes me sad ... she beter not die That was great Update soon
~Rosey~ Posted April 25, 2007 Report Posted April 25, 2007 Thanks for all your comments I havnt recieved the fic from Sam yet, but she sent me a pm with a question...so it will proberly be up this afternoon
beckyboo Posted April 25, 2007 Report Posted April 25, 2007 And You Samantha you told me not to hurt Ava Look what you did to Olivia xxxxxxxxxx
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