Muffins of Love (by Nicom) - comments

[Jess]

I loved, loved, loved this fic. so much! My stomach hurts from all the laughter. The funniest bit had to be,

Her world turned black, her body lay limp and her heart beat began to slow down. The only thing that kept her connected to the world was the plate in her right hand, and her determination to stop his muffin touching the floor.

That is such a Colleen-like thing to do; see the importance in the little things.

Through all the humour, however, I did feel a little bit sorry for Colleen when he says,

Jack nodded, “Yea, but I wanted to buy a certain special woman a drink this morning...Martha."

And then Colleen's heart breaks.

Peter coming in at the end was a twist of pure comic genius!

Great work, Nicole!