Lilone Posted April 18, 2007 Report Posted April 18, 2007 Thanks for the comments..... Will update soon Quote
allibaz91 Posted April 19, 2007 Author Report Posted April 19, 2007 If you kill him and upset Lara I'll be so sad!! Awesome update as per usual - you make it hard to comment, you know that?! The description, the emotion - everything, was fabulously written, as ever, Lil. Loved how Lara cares so much about him, but so sad that he's this ill! He better be okay ..... Loved it, more soon Quote
allibaz91 Posted April 19, 2007 Author Report Posted April 19, 2007 Also posting Azza's chapter 7 review Chapter 7 Another good chapter. I really like Pitzy now, and wow didn’t Drew get a lot for his birthday? He’s lucky to get that much! Lol. Can’t wait for the party. Quote
aejdude Posted April 21, 2007 Report Posted April 21, 2007 Thanks Ali for that! Chapter 8 OMG. What a shocker that was. I feel really sorry for Drew, getting all that stuff the car and everything and then not living to see the end of the day not living to use any of it. Was Drew’s death not an accident? I wonder whether they wanted to kill them both of Peter and Drew. Glad Peter survived. I bet it has something to do with the Gillans. Chapter 9 Blimey, Pete’s injuries really are quite bad! I hope Pete pulls through. I’m starting to think that there won’t be many chapters left at this rate! I mean the fic is Peter centric and if Peter dies then it’s like there is no fic left. It would shock me though if Pete’s no 1 fan killed him off. Update soon. Quote
*~Abi~* Posted April 21, 2007 Report Posted April 21, 2007 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *cries* pete has to pull through he and lara can;t be seperated like that its taken them so long to get together and now he could die so sad I wonder what you will choose as Pete's fate??? more soon Quote
Mrs Bishop Posted April 21, 2007 Report Posted April 21, 2007 Aw lil you pished all the right buttons on that chapter more soon please. Quote
aejdude Posted April 21, 2007 Report Posted April 21, 2007 I swear that chapter number was 10. Great chapter. Loved Lara trying to make light of the situation by saying pete's go her stuck in there, although that's where she would be anyway . OMG She's pregnant! Did not see that one coming! Lol. Pete just has to make it through now. Update soon. Quote
allibaz91 Posted April 21, 2007 Author Report Posted April 21, 2007 Eeeeeee he's awake!! Thank God for that - awwww Pitzy baby Poor Belle, though - that's rotten for her And Leah too, come to that Loved the chapter, Lil (and you say I don't tell you about updates?!?!) More soon Quote
swfc Posted April 22, 2007 Report Posted April 22, 2007 Two brilliant chapters. Yeah, I know, I didn't comment on the one before when I read it but now I can't remember what happened. It was so sad.... Poor Pete in a coma. The poor guy. I don't know what he's going to do when he finds out that Drew's dead.... And, goodness.... What is it with Peter and getting women pregnant? He's going to be a dad which is way cool. Makes up for Drew being dead but still..... I'm happy that he's awake which is like way, way cool. Told you Lil would never kill Peter. Loved the latest chapter because it had so much sadness and then some happiness/ new hope towards the end. Nicely done, Lil. Loved it. Quote
Mrs Bishop Posted April 22, 2007 Report Posted April 22, 2007 Great chapter lil up date soon cant get enough good reading Quote
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