Tasha Posted May 19, 2007 Report Posted May 19, 2007 haha Martha. Sorry i had to say that. Jack is so sweet Mattie is lucky GPK is awesome, love that restaurant Great chapter. Cant wait for Kim and Marthas date More please
Sam =) Posted May 19, 2007 Report Posted May 19, 2007 Aww Jacky is a cutie. Martha's gonna be jellous
Zetti Posted May 19, 2007 Report Posted May 19, 2007 Aww Jacky is a cutie. Martha's gonna be jellous Hes my cutie!
vale4eva Posted May 19, 2007 Report Posted May 19, 2007 Aww Jacky is a cutie. Martha's gonna be jellous Hes my cutie! NO hes mine Great chapter, FINALLY Martha has realised she likes Jack! Now we just need Jack to realise he likes her and then they can both get together More please
Zetti Posted May 19, 2007 Report Posted May 19, 2007 Hes my cutie! Laineys turn next so if she wants them together then they will be.
Zetti Posted May 24, 2007 Report Posted May 24, 2007 Chapter 5 Lainey has let me update because I am bored and I have updated my other fics. "Lets go home now Jack" said mattie as she broke off from him "Lets go" He signalled to the waiter sorted out the bill and walked out with Mattie hand in hand. Martha was fuming but was trying her hardest not to show Kim as she didnt want to hurt him at all. "Are you sure you are ok?" Kim asked for the millionth time "Yes" she smiled to make it more reassuring Later on that evening, Jack was sat on the porch after kissing Mattie on her doorstep and watching her go in "Jack, you coming in?" "Not at the moment" "Good Night?" "Awesome night, I think I might be falling for her and its only been one date" "thats weird" "Why?" "Because when we moved, everyone saw the chemistry between you and Martha and now you are with her best friend" "I never liked Martha" "Dont kid yourself Jack" "Eh" "Just think about who you care about before you lose them" "Ok, thanks Dad" Next day, Jack was walking along the beach and he saw Martha lying in her bikini and he admired her from a distance. "You like her dont you?" Mattie said as she appeared from behind him "Mattie! I just..." "Dont worry, I know you do, its obvious, shes your soulmate. You think you hate her but underneath that hate there is love, dont let it go" "You are right but I dont know if she likes me" "There are no guarantees in life but I know a life without love is no life at all. Next Chapter: Jack tries to talk to Martha.
Tasha Posted May 24, 2007 Report Posted May 24, 2007 Jack shouldnt talk to her, because she's as stubborn as a mule, if he wants to get her attention, he should just lay one on her, and then she'll kiss him back, and then they can admit whatever love they have for each other Great chapter though. Mattie was nice More please
Zetti Posted May 25, 2007 Report Posted May 25, 2007 You lucky people I am updating yet again! Chapter 6 Jack approached Martha on the beach who was lying there and Jack stood in the way of the sun "Get out of my way" "No, I need to talk to you" "About what" she sat up and Jack sat next to her "About something important" "Ok go for it" "First I have to do something" He leant in and kissed Martha, she was stunned but kissed him back bringing him closer to her body and exploring him. He broke away from her and placed his hand on her face. "That felt right didnt it Jack?" "Yes it did" "What about Kim. I cant hurt him" "You havent" came Kims voice from behind her "What?" "Everyone apart from you too knows that you are made for each other" "Its that aparent?" "Yes!" "Wow and we never noticed at all" "Well now you know that you can be together" "Can we?" Jack asked Martha who seemed to be a bit daunted by Kims speech "Yes we can, you have to take me on a date" "I will" "You arrange it and then ring me" "Ok then" He leant in for a kiss but martha said "No kiss till at least the second date" "Why?!!!!" "Its more fun" "Fine see you later" Next Chapter: The date happens will it go well?
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