Final Destination - Summer Bay (by Reo) - comments

[HeavenForbid]

:o

It's Zoe!!

That was a great Reo

Or maybe it is Peter, working for Zoe becasue when he killed Jack!!

Update soon!

[Reo]

lol Thanks

It explains more in the next chapter..I'll post that tomorrow

[victim-ofthenight]

Once again excellent nice to see Zoe around, i love the nursery rhyme, i used to love Zoe's notes

such as

" kabooomm so near yet so far peter"

" bang bang your dead"

and that text " how do you like my apartment" great stuff

i could imagine a funny scene " Tick Tock Tick tock here is a present for you detective"

Crap dont open it Peter it's from zoe

" Oh sorry I didnt mean to scare anyone It's a watch it was just a joke"

" Strike me flamin rich colleen keep your presents and jokes to your self"

Edited April 27, 2007 by victim-ofthenight

[Reo]

lol Lucky Colleen got killed first with the milkshake machine.

Who knows what she would of been doing throughout the whole story otherwise

[victim-ofthenight]

" making a meal" of things of course

[HeavenForbid]

This just gets better and better

I love it!

Update soon

[Reo]

Thanks

I have hit a dead end though I have used up all of my ideas apart from 2 deaths lol..So i have to figure out some more.

[Roccoluver]

Lol, So its Tracey and Peter?. love all the little twists, I hope they stop him before he kills again (but then again I kinda don't ) I really love this story

[victim-ofthenight]

Excellent good ol TT nice one Sweety excellent as always "jinx" I havent said that or heard that since i left school in 1999 lol wow

[Reo]

Thanks

I hope its not too confusing,But all will be revealed why at the end.

lol I havent head the word 'Jinx' since i was about 9