Final Destination - Summer Bay (by Reo) - comments

[victim-ofthenight]

Sounds interesting got me thinking

[Reo]

That's what i was trying to do

I have written 2 more deaths and both people are related to each other.

[victim-ofthenight]

The cast is becoming very limited you have already killed off many including 2 long standing characters one who served as a cast member for 19 years and one for 8

[Reo]

lol Yeah,I have 'taken out' alot of the cast

I also realized half way into the story after killing Jack,That I hadn't mentioned Martha,So she isnt in the story at all now

[victim-ofthenight]

LMAO i suppose it would be iilogical too add her in now if only the actual scriptwriters could take some of that advice and

kill axe sorry Not mention Martha again

[Reo]

lol I think i will put her in my next story though,Or at least try to remember to..Or try to try and remember to put her in it

[victim-ofthenight]

Your trying to confuse me so dont try and confuse a confused confusee while being the confuser , because you never know how confusing it could be to be confused back in confusing circumstances by the confusee

I hate martha one of the few chracters in 19 years i havent been able to like or warm too..

I will still enjoy your story though because I just know she will die hint hint lmao

[Reo]

lol I havent really decided who will die yet,Apart from one person right at the start,Who is a main character and the death will probably be cheered.

[victim-ofthenight]

Main character cheered mmmmmm....

" I havent decided who will die yet" Oh im sorry detective but thats the wrong answer............game over lmao

me a knuckle head lol

[Reo]

I just started writing Peter's big villian speech..Why he did it and everything..Its pretty good.