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I think we need this to be more than 2 parts long

I was thinking about this earlier and the final scenes would probably be as long as Part 1 as a whole, so I might post it as a short trilogy instead. That way you can have an extra update with a cliffhanger. :P

*smirks deviously* I'll see what I can do.

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:D Update!!

Loved it sooo much - Pete running away was classic lol! And I've officially decided I hate Luke and Isaac <_<

Lol, Drew being cheeky to Rice was great - he's a smart kid!

Hope Pete doesn't actually get hurt though! :o

Can't believe the next one's the last <_<

More soon! :D

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I cannot believe you just did that :angry:

You killed him!! :(

And, god damn it, I can't even get furious cause it was too friggin awesome!!

Completely shocked me here - Drew and Pete both dead; Gillan not even involved; Tracey and Eve fabulously explaining everything ..... I think I'm officially jealous :P

I totally loved it - wish there was more of it :wink:

It was completely fantastic from beginning to end, and I wish I could think of more words to say about it, but I'm still reeling! Awesome, dude. Totally awesome!! :D

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Two brilliant chapters, Andy.

What can I say? Luke and Isaac are morons. Useless morons.

I loved the explanations. They were more believable than the ones given to us by a certain SP :P

Am not at all happy that you had to kill Peter/Drew so fast. I was waiting for for an instant kill for Drew and Peter being tortured by Tracey/Zoe.

Ah well...

I see Ali managed to bully you into giving us a trilogy instead. :P

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