Bed Of Lies

[Jess]

That was awesome, guys.

I love "Chasing Cars" - so apt for her to have as his ringtone.

It's so nice to see a vulnerable side to Amanda, too. I really saw it when she said,

Pete, I thought I was going to die.

And then he says,

Kelli can't hurt you anymore. I will always be here for you, Amanda.

Update soon.

[allibaz91]

Good first chapter (despite Panda )

Hehe it's wrong, considering the fic, but I'm glad she pulled away

But aside from that, it was really well written, and came across as almost real, and I'm impressed

[aejdude]

Great first chapter. It was great, very descriptive. I bet it was Lil who wrote about Snow Patrol As she tries to fit them into fics alot.

Anyway back to the story, i think it's great that you started the fic after all the kelli sh!t because it just means that there love for one another is stronger than it was in the beggining because they've been through so much.

I'm intrigued by the title, Bed of Lies it sounds like it isn't going to be plain sailing for them and that they are both going to realise things about each other they would rather not want to know!

Also, it could also mean that there were lies in the past and they don't stop even though Kelli has gone.

Can't wait for more, shame there's no promo though!

Update soon.

[Roccoluver]

I loved this chapter Poor Peter and Amanda, Chasing Car is perfect for Amanda's ringtone of Peter. I hope that they overcome this problem soon, but not to soon. Update soon.

[kaciexox]

wow that first chapter was so well written

I can't wait to read more

Panda

Update soon

[Lilone]

Thanks for all the comments, me and Chrissie really do appreciate it

Here's a teaser for Chapter two:

She sank down towards the ground, wishing, that for some reason, the floor would open up and swallow her. Clearly, facing Peter again after so long had taken so much of her energy. She was tired. Tired of everything- Kelli, Peter, losing her son, nearly losing her life. Truth be told, Amanda Vale just wanted to be alone for a while. She didn’t need any of this in her life.

[Guest [x]whacko[x]jen[x]]

I love it! Awesome! Please update more soon.

[Stevie]

she pulled away

Great first chapter

and the teaser for the next one looks great

loving it... and Panda

[Oxidizer]

I'm sorry, have I come to the wrong forum? Chrissie co-writing a Panda fic? I must be tripping!

That aside, this fic is very good. Can't wait for more! *shrivels up in shame and dies*

[Traceve]

^ I know, I think everyone is in shock about Chrissie co writing a Panda fic.

Brillant first chapter Lil and Chrissie. I'm impressed. Although Amanda pulled away *sniff* But I think she still likes him..

That is one intense teaser! Update soon!