bizkit01 Posted May 23, 2007 Report Posted May 23, 2007 Great start........... I loved it !! Can't wait more Panda 4 ever
Stevie Posted May 24, 2007 Report Posted May 24, 2007 Thanks Chapter 3 Amanda opened a bottle of wine and poured herself a glass. With Ryan at Dan’s parent’s place, and Dan out with Peter, she had the house to herself. For the past half hour since Dan and Peter had left, Amanda had gone over and over the night’s events in her head. How could she kiss Peter? Where did it come from? Then she remembered. When they first met she felt something, and she was sure he felt it too. But she was already with Dan, so she pushed it to the back of her mind. It had taken a few months, after she’d married Dan, but she thought she’d put any feelings towards Peter behind her. Now suddenly those feelings were back. All she could think about was the kiss and how it made her feel. Words couldn’t describe it. It was incredible, he was incredible. ***** After he had dropped Dan off, Peter returned home to his empty apartment. All he had been able to think about all night was Amanda, and the kiss they shared. He felt something for her from the moment they first met. He could remember it vividly. Dan had invited him out for a drink to meet his new girlfriend. “Pete, this is Amanda,” he said, introducing him to the woman by his side. “Amanda, this is my brother, Peter.” “Nice to meet you,” Amanda said, putting out her hand. “Same here,” Peter replied, taking her hand. As soon as they touched, he felt something between them. He was sure she could feel it too. “But that was all in the past.” He told himself as he came back to reality. After Dan and Amanda got married he made sure to push all thoughts of her out of his mind. But suddenly, those feelings had come about again. How could he let that kiss happen? How could he do that to Dan? But that kiss, he thought to himself. It was incredible, she was incredible.
Stevie Posted May 25, 2007 Report Posted May 25, 2007 Thanks Here's a new update Chapter 4 She felt complete as she sank into Peter’s arms and he smothered her with kisses. At that moment she wondered why they hadn’t been together all along, it just felt so right. In a swift movement he picked her up and took her in his arms. He was strong and perfect in every way. As they reached the bedroom he gently lay her down on the bed. He began to whisper her name in her ear, “Amanda, Amanda…” “Amanda, Amanda.” She woke with a start. Hovering over her was her husband, Dan. It had been almost three weeks since their last fight, and they had been getting on a lot better. “Oh, hi, you’re home.” Amanda said as she was brought back to reality. “Wow, I can just feel your excitement,” he replied sarcastically. “Was it a good dream?” “What?!” She said, still in a daze. “Your dream, you seemed to be enjoying it.” He replied, grinning. “Oh yeah, it was fine. Where’s Ryan?” She asked, realising their son was not there. “Mum and Dad have got him,” he replied. “So we could have some alone time.” With that he put his arms around her and began to cover her neck with kisses. “Dan, what’s gotten into you?” Amanda asked. “Nothing, we just haven’t spent that much time together lately,” he replied, still holding her tight. “Is something wrong?” “No, nothing at all.” She replied as she unbuttoned his shirt and the two became locked in a passionate embrace. ***** Peter tried to get the thought of her out of his head. “She’s your brother’s wife, Peter!” He tried to tell himself. But no matter what he did, he couldn’t get her face out of his mind, her beautiful face. Why did he feel this way? How could he feel this way? Questions kept racing through his head, as he took a sip of his coffee. He sat in his police car, waiting for his partner to return with lunch. He turned the radio on and let out a sigh when he heard the song that was playing. It was Lonetar’s ‘Amazed’. This was their song. But we can’t have a song, because we aren’t together, he thought to himself. It didn’t matter, because this song always reminded Peter of Amanda. They had danced together to this song at Dan and Amanda’s wedding. He remembered the moment vividly. “Can you take over for me mate?” Dan asked him, “I’ve gotta use the little boys room.” “Uhh, sure mate,” Peter replied taking Amanda’s hand. They began to dance, as ‘Amazed’ played in the background. He remembered because he was amazed by her. By her beauty and by her confidence. “You look beautiful,” he said. “Dan’s a lucky man.” “Thanks, do you mind telling him how lucky he is?” She asked coyly. “He knows,” Peter replied. They both smiled at each other as the song finished. They pulled away from each other just as Dan returned. “Thanks for taking care of her Pete.” He said. “No worries mate.” Peter replied, watching his brother sweep her away. “Hey Pete! Ready to go?” He broke from his daydream and realised his partner was back. “Yeah, let’s go.” He said, leaving his dream behind.
Roccoluver Posted May 25, 2007 Report Posted May 25, 2007 Wicked update, poor Dan, thats what you get when you stand in the way of Panda More soon
Anastasia Posted May 25, 2007 Report Posted May 25, 2007 Not really a Panda fan, but it's very good. Good writing, it's always nice to see a fan fic about the Bakers
Traceve Posted May 25, 2007 Report Posted May 25, 2007 Dan is standing in the way of true love Damn him Love Amanda's dream. Update soon, please
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