Mrs Bishop Posted July 3, 2007 Report Posted July 3, 2007 O.M.G hope Drew was pleased? poor Peter wiping the sweat from his brow aww poor baby. up date soon pleaseeeeeeee !!!!!!
mwm4life Posted July 4, 2007 Report Posted July 4, 2007 Omg! I Cant Wait For A Reaction From Peter Seeing His Son For The First Time.. And What Drew Is Going To Think!
Lilone Posted July 5, 2007 Report Posted July 5, 2007 Sorry was ill thats why I didn't comment earlier! Update soon, I'm on the edge of my seat loving it
Stevie Posted July 6, 2007 Report Posted July 6, 2007 ^ (not about the ill part ) Thanks everyone Chapter 24 Peter and Andrew sat on a bench in the garden outside. They hadn’t said a word to each other since the principal had advised them to take a walk outside. Peter had no idea what to say to his son, but he had to make the first move. “So Andrew…” He began. “It’s Drew!” His son snapped before he could finish. “Ok, Drew,” Peter corrected,” what do you like to do?” As soon as he said it he felt like an idiot. Couldn’t he think of anything better to say? He could see from the look on Drew’s face that he didn’t want to be there. He only hoped that he would give him a chance. “I don’t know,” Drew shrugged, “nothing much.” The silence returned, with neither of them game enough to look at each other. Drew didn’t want to be there, but he decided to break the silence. “What do you do?” Drew mumbled. Peter turned around in surprise as he felt a rush of happiness. He was going to make the most of Drew’s co-operation. “Umm…. I’m a policeman.” Peter replied with a smile. Drew nodded at him as he gave a look that made him seem impressed, but also wary. Drew looked down at the ground and didn’t say anything, so Peter decided to keep talking. “I used to live here in Australia, but now I live in Los Angeles.” Peter added as the sweaty palms returned. Drew just nodded as his eyes never left the ground. Suddenly a young boy came running over to them and Drew finally looked up. “Hey Drew!” The boy called out, “I’ve been looking for you.” “Hey!” Drew replied, looking much more cheerful. “So is this your friend Drew?” Peter cut in. Drew’s smile faded as he looked angrily at Peter. The other boy noticed Peter sitting next to Drew and introduced himself. “Hi, I’m Jules,” he said. “Hi, I’m Peter.” Peter replied, shaking his hand. “I’m Drew’s…” “You’re not my father!” Drew yelled, storming off. Peter got up and quickly ran after him. “Hey, Drew, wait up.” Peter said as he caught up with him. “Leave me alone!” Drew yelled, refusing to stop. “Stop!” Peter yelled, grabbing his arm. “Get off me!” Drew replied angrily, pushing Peter away. “Look, can we just talk about this?” Peter pleaded. “Talk about what?” Drew snapped, “you haven’t been around the last twelve years, and I don’t need you now!” Peter was hurt. How could his own son have so much anger towards him? “I didn’t know about you,” Peter replied, “if I had…” “If you had…what?” Drew replied abruptly. “You would’ve been there for me, we could have been a family, save your breath.” “Drew, I’m sorry you feel this way,” Peter began, “but I really do want to get to know you.” It looked as though Peter was wearing Drew down. The anger in his eyes seemed to disappear. However the next words he said really hurt Peter. “Look Dad,” he said coldly, “read my lips. I don’t want anything to do with you.” With that Drew walked away, and Peter could only assume that it would be forever.
Lilone Posted July 6, 2007 Report Posted July 6, 2007 LOL trust Jules to ruin the moment lol Aww feel really sorry for Pete.... Update soon
Mrs Bishop Posted July 6, 2007 Report Posted July 6, 2007 Aww Poor Pete but hes not to give up. up date soon pretty please
Roccoluver Posted July 9, 2007 Report Posted July 9, 2007 Its not Jules fault hes a pain, will he fixed it? I missed so much, great updates, When will Amanda learn about Belle. update soon
Stevie Posted July 10, 2007 Report Posted July 10, 2007 Its not Jules fault hes a pain, will he fixed it? I missed so much, great updates, When will Amanda learn about Belle. update soon Well actually (although I don't want to give stuff away) this fic goes on before what has happened so therefore she doesn't find out (just like what has actually happened on the show) sorry to disappoint Anyway next chapter Chapter 25 “Come on Amanda!” Dan called out. “Are you ready yet?” Dan stood waiting at the door with a suitcase next to him. He was constantly checking his watch as he became increasingly impatient waiting for Amanda. “Yeah, yeah, hold your horses!” Amanda called out from the bedroom. Dan was about to go in and get her when she finally emerged, carrying two suitcases and two bags. “What the hell Amanda?” Dan asked, looking at her luggage, “we’re going for three days, not three weeks.” “A girl has got to be prepared Dan,” she replied. “Ok, whatever,” he surrendered, “let’s just get this stuff in the car.” “I’m worried about leaving Ryan,” Amanda said uneasily as Dan picked up her luggage. “He’s fine at my parents place, you have no reason to worry.” He assured her, trying to get her out the door. “Now let’s go!” “Have you got money?” Amanda asked. “Yep,” Dan replied, patting his pocket. “Now come on!” With that they gathered their luggage and headed out the door. ***** As Dan walked through the doors of the Caesar’s Palace Casino, he felt as though his life was complete. It was like, at that moment, everything was perfect. “All checked in.” Amanda said as she walked up behind Dan. “Yeah, ok,” Dan replied, not taking his eyes off the casino. “Look, I’m really tired, so I’m going to go up to the hotel and rest.” She told him. “What are you going to do?” “Umm… I think I’ll just stay down here for a while,” he replied. “Ok,” she said as she gave him a kiss and headed off to their hotel room. Dan watched as she left, then his attention focused back on the casino. Where to start? He thought to himself. He saw a card table only a few metres away, so he went over to it. “Are you in?” The dealer asked him. “Yeah, I’m in.” Dan replied.
Roccoluver Posted July 11, 2007 Report Posted July 11, 2007 Well actually (although I don't want to give stuff away) this fic goes on before what has happened so therefore she doesn't find out (just like what has actually happened on the show) sorry to disappoint Anyway next chapter *Smacks head against wall, duh* anyways Dan don't make me smack you lol at Amanda taking so many bags for a three day trip
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