Home and Away Always!!! Posted September 4, 2006 Report Posted September 4, 2006 (edited) And then something terrible happened. Something so heartbreaking that I wish I didn’t have to tell you but this is Sally’s story and not mine. Milko turned and he looked straight at Sally. “Rack off!” He spat at her, his face contorted with hate. NO MILKO NO!!!!! Oh no Milko please come back to Sally *cries* oh I'm so upset!!! Edited September 4, 2006 by Home and Away Always!!! Quote
Skykat Posted September 4, 2006 Author Report Posted September 4, 2006 ILM you've got me crying again! And then something terrible happened. Something so heartbreaking that I wish I didn’t have to tell you but this is Sally’s story and not mine. Milko turned and he looked straight at Sally. “Rack off!” He spat at her, his face contorted with hate. I loved the way you wrote that, I felt like a child being read to at school. Poor Sally! Milko you get away from those Philips boys and go back to Sally now! *pulls sternest face*. Seriously good chapter, the Sally/ Philips stuff was fantastic but I also liked Carly's backstory. I always got the impression on the show that Carly was the most messed up of the Fletcher kids but that her backstory was touched on a lot less than Steven and Frank's. Poor Carly. Some seriously good description as always. Lynn managed to elbow herself upwards and, half sitting, half leaning, looking like she was imitating some puppet doll, she rocked unsteadily back and forth, smiling a broad smile at Carly, her eyes blank. I could see that playing out in front of me. The night air hit Carly like a cold kiss and yellow lamplight streaked through the lullaby music of gently falling rain. Beautiful. You know how much I seriously love this story ILM, please update soon.xx Quote
-Tess- Posted September 4, 2006 Report Posted September 4, 2006 Oh no! Milko's turned! *Bursts into Tears* But great anyway! Quote
Annette Posted September 5, 2006 Report Posted September 5, 2006 Ditto with the Milko thoughts! How could he do that to Sally? I liked the bit about Lynn thinking you could get pregnant just by sleeping in the same bed as a guy, because when I was young I thought that too! Quote
I love music Posted September 5, 2006 Report Posted September 5, 2006 Thanks for your lovely reviews, great to know someone's reading! I haven't had much writing time lately - and I'm afraid one of my fave programmes Supernanny is on shortly so I won't be on the computer much longer - but I HAVE begun the next chapter and I'll get back to it asap. Quote
Skykat Posted September 17, 2006 Author Report Posted September 17, 2006 That was lovely! I suspect you have far more Pippa/Tom stuff in store for us. It's so sweet to see them working as a couple together and to see them as just humans. Also I love how genuine they are towards each other, how Tom drove women away except Pippa. Great chapter ILM, can't wait for the second half.xx Quote
Sunny Girl Posted September 17, 2006 Report Posted September 17, 2006 It was beautiful and really well written. I'm like SKYKAT - great to see Tom and Pippa being so genuine together. Keep up the brilliant writing ILM - I don't want this story to ever end ... Quote
Annette Posted September 18, 2006 Report Posted September 18, 2006 Ah bless. It's easy to forget how much hard work it must have been for Tom and Pippa, and to see then as Superhuman. No child ever breezed through this world yet, fostered or otherwise, packaged and perfect That's a great line, and very true. I remember Little House on the Prairie! Should I feel old? Quote
I love music Posted September 18, 2006 Report Posted September 18, 2006 Ah bless. It's easy to forget how much hard work it must have been for Tom and Pippa, and to see then as Superhuman. No child ever breezed through this world yet, fostered or otherwise, packaged and perfect That's a great line, and very true. I remember Little House on the Prairie! Should I feel old? Yes. Very. I don't know if it ever aired in Australia, to be honest. I used to love the series and I had a crush on the guy who played the Ingles Dad - think he was called Michael Landon...? Oh, and who could ever forget Nellie and Willie? *sigh* I wish they'd show it again actually, especially the very early episodes. Quote
Annette Posted September 19, 2006 Report Posted September 19, 2006 Ah bless. It's easy to forget how much hard work it must have been for Tom and Pippa, and to see then as Superhuman. No child ever breezed through this world yet, fostered or otherwise, packaged and perfect That's a great line, and very true. I remember Little House on the Prairie! Should I feel old? Yes. Very. I don't know if it ever aired in Australia, to be honest. I used to love the series and I had a crush on the guy who played the Ingles Dad - think he was called Michael Landon...? Oh, and who could ever forget Nellie and Willie? *sigh* I wish they'd show it again actually, especially the very early episodes. He had some great 80s curly hair, if I recall correctly. Quote
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