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I loved your description of the old lady and her dog being two ladies growing old together! Poor Steven, poor Pippa, poor Tom. Another great chapter really understanding the characters. I've no idea how you are going to tie this all up when you finish it, though! I alway keep my characters to the absolute minimum because I can't cope with too many.

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I've no idea how you are going to tie this all up when you finish it, though!

Ha, me neither! :P The only thing I've ever known about this fic is what the last line will eventually be. I never plan out fics, I just rely on characters to take me wherever. I guess writing is a lot like dreaming, like when one dream just leads on to another so one scene leads on to another - I never originally planned for Mrs Martha to have a major starring role when I first wrote her in, for instance! :P

I do have a couple of later scenes in my head, but, to be honest, I've no idea what will happen next... :D

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:P I'm hovering because I can see your posting and I'm so impatient for another update of this that I'm hoping having my ugly mug around will make you hurry up!
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Wow! That was worth the wait.

Loved all the Kane, Milko etc stuff. The swapping of hats had me laughing but how could you let Kane run back home to danger? Shame on you :P

I loved the Carly stuff but somehow I think Steven's possibly your strongest point. I don't know why but I really feel his emotions, you write everything well but especially him.

Great chapter.xx

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Wow! That was worth the wait.

Loved all the Kane, Milko etc stuff. The swapping of hats had me laughing but how could you let Kane run back home to danger? Shame on you :P

I loved the Carly stuff but somehow I think Steven's possibly your strongest point. I don't know why but I really feel his emotions, you write everything well but especially him.

Great chapter.xx

I know what you mean. I've had plans for Steven for a while. I just needed to get Carly and Lynn off the beach because there were too many characters there already. :rolleyes:. I know who Zammo is and I know exactly where Sally is. Not sure about Kane yet, I'll have to wait for a picture to come into my head. :)

I love all of it!!! You write so well. And you nail all of the scenes !... :P

Thank you! Tho I think only you, me and Kat are reading this fic anyway. Quite an exclusive club really... :P

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Exclusive clubs are the best!

You're being paranoid anyway, just threaten not to write anymore and you'll be amazed how many people are reading but just not reviewing...it works for me anyway :huh:

And surely I'm a good enough reason to keep going anyway? Do you have any idea how scary the scouse hitmen can be? :P

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You can't stop!! This story and Kat's are basically the only ones I keep my teeth stuck into, and can really empathise with... I don't mind the wait, as long as there's a chapter eventually.

Sally is my favourite character (in case you hadn't already noticed) and I do prefer old style Home and Away story telling and the way you two write fits that brief exactly. . . .

So write away!!!... Both of you can always be sure of at least one avid enchanted reader in me, anyhow!!! :P:P:P

And Kat's right! Exclusive clubs really are the best ...

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Thank you! Tho I think only you, me and Kat are reading this fic anyway. Quite an exclusive club really... :P

Hey! I'm reading too! I've just been busy and haven't got onto the internet for a while. Fantastic chapter, as much as I like the other characters I'm glad you've come back to Kane. Great stuff about Steven as well, made me come over all emotional!

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