Boy Meets Girl, Girl Meets Drugs (by Cal) - comments

[Eli]

:o

This is just getting better and more intruiging for every chapter, your best fic by far!

I can imagine the dilemma for poor Belle, having to choose between Che and her friends.

Looking forward to the next update

[Cal]

Thanks!

My writing skills aren't the best. So the full ....umph? of the story isn't really there, but I'm trying my best.

Edited May 19, 2007 by -Cal-

[Liska]

Great chapter! I'm so looking forward to the next chapter! I wonder what is going to happen with Belle...

[Roccoluver]

Thanks!

My writing skills aren't the best. So the full ....umph? of the story isn't really there, but I'm trying my best.

I know what you mean, my writing isn't the best either but your story is great and at least your achieving it and letting us all read it. (BTW that was a compliment) still can't wait for more

[Traceve]

I hope Che doesn't hurt Belle! Awesome chapter Cal

Update soon

[Oxidizer]

Your writing's fine! It definitely gets better with each fic.

I can't freakin' wait to see what happens to Belle!

[aejdude]

I like your writing style it's different from the others i read which is a nice change.

Great chapter, even though your chapters are quite short they still manage to be descriptive.

Hopefully Belle can defend herself.

Can't wait for next chapter.

[Cal]

Thanks!

I'm going to do the end which I think fits perfectly.

Promo: Who is in Belle's house? Will she be able to escape her attacker's grasp?

Edited May 19, 2007 by -Cal-

[aejdude]

Think that's the best chapter yet storyline wise - it kept you wondering plus you added a few paragraphs at the beggining as well as the script and that was good too get's you thinking more about the character.

Update soon.

[Traceve]

I hope they get to Belle in time Che is so darn evil

Update soon, please