Zetti Posted June 14, 2007 Report Posted June 14, 2007 Dont you dare hurt Jack *warning look* Make him safe or else now!!!
Roccoluver Posted June 14, 2007 Report Posted June 14, 2007 Is it time to say bye bye to Jack? Great update, poor Rachel, Kim, Jack and Martha
bttb-rox! Posted June 14, 2007 Report Posted June 14, 2007 Thanks, guys! Chapter 10 Tony: Jack, what are you doing?! Tony runs after Jack Beth: Tony! Tony: Don’t worry, I’ll be okay. I love you. Beth: I love you too. Beth starts to cry Matilda: Hey, don’t cry. Everything is going to be fine. INT. THE BACHELOR PAD – NIGHT Tony: Jack, get out of here! Jack: Dad, I’m fine. Something falls on Jack Tony: Jack! Jack! Tony rushes over EXT. THE BACHELOR PAD - NIGHT Martha: Where is he? I’ve got to do something. Kim: Hey, Jack will be alright. Rachel: And his probably got the ring. Martha: I don’t care about the ring. All I care about is Jack! Martha runs over to where Jack was, but before she can Kim and Lucas pull her back. Lucas: Just stay outside. Jack will be out any second. Martha: Come on, Jack! INT. THE BACHELOR PAD – NIGHT. Tony: Jack, can you hear me? Jack: Yes! What happened? Tony: Some debris fell down on you. Look, we’ve got to get out of here. The flames are getting worse. Jack: Okay, okay. Jack and Tony make there way out of the house. However, Tony is struggling behind Jack. EXT. THE BACHELOR PAD – NIGHT. Martha: Jack? Jack: Yeah, I’m here. Martha runs up to hug Jack Martha: I thought I’d lost you! Jack: I love you too much for that to happen Martha: Where’s Tony? Jack: He was right behind me a second ago. I’m sure he's okay. Martha: I love you more than anything. They kiss INT. THE BACHELOR PAD – NIGHT Tony is inside the living room. Flames are trapping him from all sides. He tries to climb out of the window, but that doesn’t work. So he tries to cut through the flames. EXT. THE BACHELOR PAD - NIGHT Beth: Where is Tony! Matilda: Mum, he’ll be alright. He's a fighter. Kim: Guys, guys, the wall’s going! Firemen: Everyone, stand back! The wall is going to go any second. Beth: This can’t be happening. Tony! Jack: Beth, dad will get out. Beth: But what if he doesn’t? Matilda hugs Beth INT. THE BACHELOR PAD – NIGHT With Tony still trapped by the flames, the wall suddenly crashes down on the house.
Roccoluver Posted June 15, 2007 Report Posted June 15, 2007 You can't kill Tony, I much perferred it when Jack was in danger. Great update, don't leave us hanging long
bttb-rox! Posted June 15, 2007 Report Posted June 15, 2007 Thanks, Roccoluver . That's about as far as as I have got so far in the fic, so I'm going to have to get writing...alot! I'll hopefully update tomorrow . From now on the updates will be shorter but there will be more of them .
bttb-rox! Posted June 15, 2007 Report Posted June 15, 2007 Thanks, Zetti! I'm writing a very important part of the story at the moment, so here's a little teaser for you guys: someone very unexpected turns out to be Ollie's mother!
Roccoluver Posted June 16, 2007 Report Posted June 16, 2007 Thanks Roccoluver!! That's about as far as as I have got so far in the fic, so i'm going to have to get writing....alot! I'll update tomorrow hopefully . From now on the updates will be shorter but there will be more of them . Mmmm, shorter.. but more often, I can live with that. -waits for update-
Zetti Posted June 16, 2007 Report Posted June 16, 2007 I bet it is Hannah! I bet it is or Martha You wouldnt do that to me though would you! I will hunt you down.
Roccoluver Posted June 16, 2007 Report Posted June 16, 2007 I bet it is Hannah! I bet it is or Martha You wouldnt do that to me though would you! I will hunt you down. Or maybe its Sally
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