Lilone Posted June 11, 2007 Report Posted June 11, 2007 Here's a teaser for you: Paul was sitting in the corner being quite when he saw Jodi walking towards him, “Jodi” Paul said sounding surprised. The music in the room was pretty loud, Jodi leaned towards Paul as she said in his ear, “I’m so sorry about the other day, I know who the father is but I want him to know first…” Paul slightly smiled as he looked up at her, “But Jodi I love you so much”
ilovekateritchie Posted June 11, 2007 Report Posted June 11, 2007 Ooooookay... UPDATE! As in NOW! As in BEGGING YOU!
beckyboo Posted June 11, 2007 Report Posted June 11, 2007 another Podi I want an update!!!!!! Acts like a baby I want an update now Update now LIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lilone Posted June 11, 2007 Report Posted June 11, 2007 Becky.... Calm down LOL Blame my proofie Thanks for the comments, keep them coming lol Here's an update Chapter 12 “This is getting stupid,” Bobby said furiously as he stormed into the café, “Bobby calm down!” “Why the hell should I, there questioning everyone like were all murderers.” Bobby quickly sat down angrily as he couldn’t believe the police would think one member of the cast was a murderer. “Tim, do you still want to go ahead with the party?” Mark asked. “I don’t know… I mean do you think it will be a good idea?” “Maybe this is what we need, the whole cast to have a good night out” Lyn suggested. “Sure Saturday night it is then!” Tim smiled. “Are you free Saturday night?” Indi asked looking over at Frankie and Lincoln. “You’re welcome to come as long as I get a birthday kiss off the both of you!” Tim said laughing at Lincoln and Frankie. Detective Green and PC Lye entered the room, “Forensics have just finished in the office and there are no more interviews today but this is not the end… we will do anything to catch the killer, nobody leave town.” Detective Green said deadly serious before leaving with PC Lye. “Do you think that worked?” Lye asked Green. “I know that at least one person in that room knows more than they’re letting on.” Amy, Holly and Kate walked towards the hotel’s function room where Tim’s party was being held. “Holly have you seen Nic today?” Amy asked, “No not since this morning when I saw him crying in his bedroom.” “That video really hit him hard.” Amy said concerned. “Yeah it’s really hard to know what to say.” Mark, Bobby, Frankie, Indi, Lincoln and Sharni all arrived at the same time and made their way inside where they saw Nic, Tim, Rodger and Paul all standing drinking a beer, Jon jumped out of his taxi and ran towards Kate, “Hey” he said smiling to the rest of the girls, and Holly smiled at Amy as they watched Kate blush at Jon’s arrival. Ada arrived a few seconds before Jodi who was looking really tired, “Jodi” “Ada I don’t need another lecture!” “Are you going to tell Nic?” “I’m not getting rid of the baby and as for Nic he will find out but only when I want to tell him.” The party was in full swing, everyone was having a great time, and Tim was showing his off his moves on the dance floor with Mark. “Does it feel wrong to be having a good time after everything that’s happened?” Jess asked Holly. Holly looked over at Nic who was laughing and joking with Amy, “If we didn’t I think Nic wouldn’t be like he is now, he needs to have a laugh and realise his life will get better” Jess agreed as she poured more punch into her and Holly’s glasses. “Fancy a dance?” Jon said as he stood up smiling at Kate. Kate stood up as she put her hand in Jon’s and made her way to the dance floor. Paul was sitting in the corner being quite when he saw Jodi walking towards him; “Jodi” Paul said sounding surprised. The music in the room was pretty loud, Jodi leaned towards Paul as she said in his ear, “I’m so sorry about the other day, I know who the father is but I want him to know first…” Paul slightly smiled as he looked up at her, “But Jodi I love you so much.” “I love you too but we have tried before and it didn’t work, with the baby and everything it wouldn’t be fair on you.” Jodi leaned further forward and softly kissed Paul’s cheek before walking away not even looking back. Amy ran over to Nic, dragging him away from the bar as they both started to dance, “Nice dancing!” Amy said laughing at Nic. “Hey you have got to love my moves!” The song come to an end as Lonestar Amazed came on, Nic grinned and started to dance slower as did Amy. Bobby was on the dance floor with Frankie, slow dancing as he said, “Would you like to go for a drink sometime?” “Yeah sure.” Frankie replied smiling at Bobby. As the song continued to play, Kate and Jon moved closer to each other as Jon wrapped his arms around her waist and Kate’s arms were wrapped around him. As they moved to the song, Jon whispered, “You look stunning!” Kate pulled slight away and raised her head looking at him, “You don’t look to bad your self,” she said smiling warmly. “Nic come on let me show you how to dance” Tim said grinning as he took Amy’s hand. “I don’t mind putting up with your dancing.” Holly said smiling at Nic. Jess walked over to Rhys and handed him a drink “here you go” “Thank you.” Rhys said as he took the drink. Kate and Jon were still dancing when the song came to an end, “I’m just going to use the little boy’s room” “Thank you for everything Holly.” Nic said smiling as they moved of the dance floor. Nic walked away from Holly as he saw Jodi looking at him from a distance, “Are you okay?” Nic asked Jodi. Jodi just kept looking at Nic unable to say the words that she had to say. PC Castle, Lye and Detective Green walked straight towards the DJ and the music was quickly turned off. Everyone looked up confused as the detective spotted and walked straight over as he said, “I am arresting you on suspicion of the murder of Cameron Welsh.” Preview: Who has been arrested? Will Jodi finally tell Nic?
beckyboo Posted June 11, 2007 Report Posted June 11, 2007 Becky.... Calm down LOL Blame my proofie Paul was sitting in the corner being quite when he saw Jodi walking towards him; “Jodi” Paul said sounding surprised. The music in the room was pretty loud, Jodi leaned towards Paul as she said in his ear, “I’m so sorry about the other day, I know who the father is but I want him to know first…” Paul slightly smiled as he looked up at her, “But Jodi I love you so much.” “I love you too but we have tried before and it didn’t work, with the baby and everything it wouldn’t be fair on you.” Jodi leaned further forward and softly kissed Paul’s cheek before walking away not even looking back. Everyone looked up confused as the detective spotted and walked straight over as he said, “I am arresting you on suspicion of the murder of Cameron Welsh.” Ok so im guessinf there was Podi but theres not anymore!!!!!!!!!!! I want to know whos been arrested!!!!! Update ASAP!!!!!!!!!! Proofie get the next chapter back to Lil ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mrs Bishop Posted June 11, 2007 Report Posted June 11, 2007 Come on Lil up date soon pleaseeeeee,s you cant write a fic and leave us hanging.
ilovekateritchie Posted June 11, 2007 Report Posted June 11, 2007 HOW can you end it there you evil person? UPDATE! PLEASE!
bttb-rox! Posted June 11, 2007 Report Posted June 11, 2007 Jon jumped out of his taxi and ran towards Kate, “Hey” he said smiling to the rest of the girls, and Holly smiled at Amy as they watched Kate blush at Jon’s arrival. “Fancy a dance?” Jon said as he stood up smiling at Kate. Kate stood up as she put her hand in Jon’s and made her way to the dance floor. As the song continued to play, Kate and Jon moved closer to each other as Jon wrapped his arms around her waist and Kate’s arms were wrapped around him. As they moved to the song, Jon whispered, “You look stunning!” Kate pulled slight away and raised her head looking at him, “You don’t look to bad your self,” she said smiling warmly. Kate and Jon were still dancing when the song came to an end, “I’m just going to use the little boy’s room” Awwww Lil you are so great at writing fluff between Jon and Kate!! Who's been arrested?? Awesome chapter .
Tasha Posted June 11, 2007 Report Posted June 11, 2007 Arrest Paul Nah joking. Arrest Bobby Paul and Jodi were once 1? What happened there? Great chapter. Good to read Nic smiling again Is there are Mr Holly Brisley, aka, Mr Paul Ford, in this fic?? More please
Lilone Posted June 11, 2007 Report Posted June 11, 2007 Arrest Paul Nah joking. Arrest Bobby Paul and Jodi were once 1? What happened there? Great chapter. Good to read Nic smiling again Is there are Mr Holly Brisley, aka, Mr Paul Ford, in this fic?? More please There was a certain reason why Holly came back to Oz but you will find out more about it in up coming chapters
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