Lilone Posted June 20, 2007 Report Posted June 20, 2007 Thank you for the great feedback Here's a teaser. Jodi and Paul sat watching the TV quietly as Jodi looked over at Paul, “Why did you want to run away?” “Jodi were running away now, even you…. Your running from your problems just as much as me” “I only came because I knew you wouldn’t want to be alone and I definitely don’t want to be back at work as i went over and over in my head about the baby’s dad” Jodi said placing her hand on her stomach.
beckyboo Posted June 20, 2007 Report Posted June 20, 2007 Thank you for the great feedback Here's a teaser. Jodi and Paul sat watching the TV quietly as Jodi looked over at Paul, “Why did you want to run away?” “Jodi were running away now, even you…. Your running from your problems just as much as me” “I only came because I knew you wouldn’t want to be alone and I definitely don’t want to be back at work as i went over and over in my head about the baby’s dad” Jodi said placing her hand on her stomach. :( Update!
Lilone Posted June 20, 2007 Report Posted June 20, 2007 Chapter 16 Mark stood with his hands shaking as he held the pictures, he turned suddenly as he heard a noise from the back door. Jodi and Paul eventually arrived at an old cottage that Paul’s parents owned in the country. Jodi didn’t know what to say, her life was in a mess but at that minute she wanted to be around someone she could trust… Jon sat on the sofa with Kate in his arms, sighing with relief as he only just realised how good his life was and how much he had been longing to be with Kate. Mark couldn’t believe the package and the weird photo’s he had been sent but for all he knew this could be a prank by Rhys or even Bobby. It didn’t matter who because he was beginning to get really freaked out. Frankie and Bobby were outside on the beach having a picnic, looking lovingly into each other’s eyes. “You have beautiful eyes,” Bobby said looking at Frankie… Frankie started to go red, slightly smiling as she said “thank you” Bobby leaned over Frankie grabbing the drinks but as he moved back his eyes caught sigh with Frankie’s eyes. Bobby looked at her for a few seconds and moved back but Frankie placed her hand on his cheek as she kissed him tenderly. Jodi and Paul sat watching the TV quietly as Jodi looked over at Paul, “Why did you want to run away?” “Jodi were running away now, even you…. Your running from your problems just as much as me” “I only came because I knew you wouldn’t want to be alone and I definitely don’t want to be back at work as i went over and over in my head about the baby’s dad” Jodi said placing her hand on her stomach. “Jodi it’s still running” “Paul maybe so but I know what I’m running from and from how you are acting I think you want to run and not turn back” “Jodi just leave it” Paul yelled angrily as he stood up and walked away. Jodi stood up as she said, “Paul don’t be like this with me, you know you can tell me anything” Paul froze on the spot not knowing what to say, “Paul please tell me what is going on!” Paul looked away but Jodi walked towards him as she yelled, “Paul I’m not going to drop this” “you really want to know do you?[i/] Jodi looked at him deadly serious, "yes Paul I do" she screamed angrily. Paul shot his head up angrily as he blurted out, "I know who the babys dad is!" Jodi looked at Paul stunned. “What the hell?” Jodi said shocked. “I’m sorry” Paul said virtually in tears. Jodi started to hit Paul and shove him backwards as she cried and yelled, “How could you keep this from me!!” Paul slowly raised his head looking at her tearfully as he yelled, “How can you blame me? Is it so wrong to wake up every morning tearing myself into pieces, at night crying my self to sleep wishing more then anything in this world I was the baby’s dad!” Tim and Holly had gone to the studios when they saw Ada with Jon and Kate who were smiling happily at each other as they held hands. Tim started grinning as he looked at Jon, “Have I missed something?” Jon looked at Kate happily as he said, “No Tim this should have happened months ago” “I’m having a BBQ at my place tonight, would you like to join us?” Kate asked smiling. “Yeah sure why not…” Tim and Holly replied smiling. “Do you think Nic, Amy and Rodger will be able to come?” Jon asked. “Yeah I will give Amy a ring, she is with Nic at my place. I think it’s just what Nic needs” Jon, Kate, Holly, Ada and Tim sat outside in the back garden of Kate’s house sitting round a table talking, “What time did Amy said she was coming?” “She said, Nic was going to grab a shower then they would be straight over” Tim said. “I might just give her a quick call,” Holly said as she took her mobile from her pocket. “Amy where are you?” “Sorry, Nic is just finishing off getting ready we will be over soon” For the past 15 minutes, Nic had been in the bathroom, Amy automatically thought Nic was still in the shower when she could hear the water running but Amy had been starting to become really worried after not hearing any noise from the bathroom for nearly 15 minutes. She slowly made her way to the bathroom and cautiously opened the door as she saw Nic sprawled out across the floor. “Nic!” Amy screamed as she raced over to his lifeless body slumped on the floor. Preview: Paul tells Jodi who the father is! Will Nic survive? Mark’s starts to become really worried when he receives another scare from his stalker!
beckyboo Posted June 20, 2007 Report Posted June 20, 2007 “How can you blame me? Is it so wrong to wake up every morning tearing myself into pieces, at night crying my self to sleep wishing more then anything in this world I was the baby’s dad!” Lil you made me cry :( Poor Paul I wonder who the dad is! I though Paul was going to say "its me" lol Update soon xxxxxxx
~Lynd~ Posted June 21, 2007 Report Posted June 21, 2007 The father's not Paul...You know how happy i am about that! Update Soon!
bttb-rox! Posted June 21, 2007 Report Posted June 21, 2007 Poor Nic . He hasn't had an easy life so far in this fic has he?? I hope his okay, although I would highly douht that you would kill him off Lil, considering what a huge Peter fan you are ...then again I have almost killed Tony off in a fic i'm writing at the moment and you only have to visit the HotDad appreciation thread to know what a big fan I am of him!!!
ilovekateritchie Posted June 21, 2007 Report Posted June 21, 2007 Awe Kate and Jon are adorable, I hope Nic is okay... I don't think you'll kill him though... You love him too much! Can't wait to find out who the daddy is!!!
Tasha Posted June 21, 2007 Report Posted June 21, 2007 Poor Paulie Awww...he needs a hug Niccy cant die PLease dont let him die. Poor Mark too More please
Lilone Posted June 23, 2007 Report Posted June 23, 2007 Thanks for all the comments: Here's a few teasers: “How dare you keep something like this from me!” Jodi said angrily. “Jodi is it so hard to believe that I only wanted what was best for you” Holly reached into her bag looking at her mobile phone’s missed calls. She quickly glanced at them before deleting all the messages.
beckyboo Posted June 23, 2007 Report Posted June 23, 2007 “How dare you keep something like this from me!” Jodi said angrily. “Jodi is it so hard to believe that I only wanted what was best for you” Ohhh Slangging match is on Update soon Lil!!!!
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