flyingwithoutwings Posted July 5, 2007 Report Posted July 5, 2007 OMG! What's happening with Amy and Nic? Awesome chapter, please update soon! I want Amy and Nic to get together!
bttb-rox! Posted July 5, 2007 Report Posted July 5, 2007 Jon reluctantly let go, giving Kate one last look before saying, “I wont give up” Awww this is my favourite line from the whole fic...a very cute line indeed . Nic coming along when Jon was trying to reason with Kate was good...then Paul showed up to cause more drama . Someone else dies?! Very intrigued to see who else 'falls under the murderers feet'...sounds very exciting . That was a great chapter Lil, filled with loads of heartache and drama...which we all love . Only carry on with it for however long you want to Lil, don't feel pressured into writing more unless you want to .
swfc Posted July 6, 2007 Report Posted July 6, 2007 Sorry.... I need to catch up so bear with me everyone else. Here goes: Chapter 3 I cannot believe you killed Claire! Trust you to have Lincoln Lewis in your fic lol. Loved how Paul really does care for Jodz. Love how the whole cast rallied to support Nickerz and to go look for him. And, Jodz is preggers but they don't know who the father is. Chapter 4 Poor Nic. I still cannot believe that you killed the love of his life. I want them together.... Nic and Claire are like Clete for me and Alli and Panda for you and every other Panda lover... How could you do a DB and kill one of them? *not impressed* Poor Cam.... Wonder what's up.... Hope it's not serious... But it'll probably be considering it has to do with the whole cast and all. Wow, Paul's so determined to find out who the father of the baby is.... I hope it's not him. But, his reaction shows one of surprise and shocked. Aw, Nic and the car crash scene was just so sad. Beautifully written. Altho, I'm not happy with you for doing this to him, Lil... [For that you just might have to wait for your fic... until i decide to forgive you for doing a DB lol]. Loved how Amy was the one to find him... You'd better not do what I think you're going to be doing, young lady.... Okay, Bobby is annoying me now.... He needs to see it from Cam's point of view. He has no say in the matter. If they have a problem with it, go deal with HQ. Don't go blaming Cam for doing his job. Chapter 5: Feeling very bad for Jodz now. Well, lesson learnt: Don't drink yourself to a stupor as you'll end up doing something taht you'll regeret for the rest of your life And Rhys as ther father of the baby is shocking and scandalous but funny... Oh the drama... “It’s like…. Nic he had his job and he had his friends but all the time he was working you could see that Clare was the one person he wanted to be with all day, he loved her so much.” Need I say more? lol... Love the Jon/Kate scene... Very touching. And, I really am this close to giving Bobby a smack in the head for being so immature about all of this. I really wonder how Shan puts up with him lol.... I bet you that the voice at the end was Holly's. Chapter 6: Trust you to make Panda happen in real life as well eventho not really. Nic and Holly as best mates... So not surprised at all about it. Kate/Jon scene getting interesting and intriguing as it comes along.... Lil, I really cannot believe that you're even going to go in that direction.... Poor Nic.... And, I agree with Alli... If you make Nic and Holly get together, you will definitely not get your fic. I can promise you that. Chapter 7: Rhys is being a jerk.... Tim's being a friend... Poor Cam... Why can't you people all see that it's not Cam's fault? Lol.... No, not being a Cam crusader here... Am not trading DB for Cam.... And, Bobby's still being a jerk. Lol, I can just imagine Nickerz, Tim and Holly having a H&A marathon... Should be weird watching themselves on TV lol... “Over the last few years I thought my life couldn’t be any better because I had the best friends I could ever dream of, I loved my job so much and I was loving life… Still my life seemed incomplete but that changed when I saw Clare’s beaming smile before my eyes” “Life seemed too strange until that moment Clare and I got together, we just seemed so perfect for one another. She taught me things that I never thought I’d ever learn and the most important thing I learnt from her was how to love and how’d to be loved. I love you so much Clare” Nic said as he blew a kiss in the direction of the coffin to the side of him. That just made me want to cry. Beautifully written. Cannot believe you broke up a perfect couple. Chapter 8: OMG. First you kill of the love of his life and he cheats on the love of his life with a cast member? I cannot believe you would make Nic do something like that. That baby better not be Nic's, I tell you. Aw, Kate/Jon so cute.... They're funny... Kate drunk is funny. Chapter 9: Paulie is going to be in trouble for blabbing lol... Lmao... Jon looking at himself in the mirror admiring his ass is classic. Priceless, even. Poor Rhys.... Jodi really does get around a lot.... Nic had ran that far he was out of breath, he then switched the camera back on and started to film the scenery when he saw Clare heading towards him. Nic whispered into the camera, “There’s the woman I love!” Clare ran up to Nic, kissing him passionately before she took the camera and pointed at Nic and said, “I love this man so much, I don’t know what I’d do without him.” Need I say more? You write that they're perfect but you break them up *is upset* Poor Nickerz.... If he's the daddy of Jod'z baby, I'm going to say that he deserved it for cheating. Chapter 10: Aw, 3 guys and a girl and a pub... How nice... Ooo, Rhys and Jess.... Interesting.... Lol, Kate and Jon going shopping... Now that should be interesting... Bet it'll be more admiring his ass in front of the mirror again lol.... For some reason, I'm loving the Kate/Jon scenes. Rhys is a commitment phobe... Simple as that. Don't like cliffhanger ending. Chapter 11: Omg, someone killed Cam?!?! No..... *is upset* Maybe he was too upset about being hated that he killed himself. Who knows..... Lmao @ PC Castle and PC Lye.... Hahaha.... Chapter 12: Trust you to use Amazed by Lonestar.... And Nic and Amy slow dancing?!?! Interesting.... And, Kate/Jon.... Interesting..... Lol, talk about party poopers... Det. Greens and PCs Castle and Lye.... And, once again, not happy about cliffie ending. Chapter 13: They arrested Tim? For Cam's murder? What? How? Aw, go Nickerz. He's such a true friend. Kate has feelings for Tim?!?! *wolf whistles* Okay, really, first he cheats on his woman, then his woman dies, then his best mate gets arrested for murder and now the woman whom he cheated with is pregnant with his wife. Talk about complicated. And, well, it's karma, Nickerz... Chapter 14: Right, I take back everything I said about Nic. And, once again, Jodi, hope you learnt your lesson.... Aw, Kate/Jon kissed.... How cute.... Paul's hiding something....... I'm so confused right now.... Chapter 15: Ah, Bobby and Frankie are the new "it" couple. Jodi and Paul running away together? Interesting.... Love the Kate/Jon fluff.... Oh, and Mark has a stalker.... Nice... Okay, poor Nic.... At least he's letting it all out. And, he'd better not go and do something stupid. Chapter 16: Loved the Paul/Jodi scene about running away. It's so true. They're both just running away from their problems. Wait, is Paul the dad? What? Nic's committed suicide.... Okay, fine, I totally, totally take back everything that I said about him being a cheater. He loves Claire. He's meant to be with Claire. Heck, if he wants to kill himself to be with Claire, then, I 'm not complaining... lol... Chapter 17: “if he was a fighter why the hell did he try and kill himself…. He needed us and we weren’t there for him,” Tim hit it right on. But, they were all there for him. Nic just decided to close up and not say anything. Omg, this is even better than B&B I tell you. Jon's the father of the baby? Talk about hot and major scandal! I'm so hooked right now.... Good soap opera... *pops some popcorn* Chapter 18: Aw, they're such good mates. I'm glad Nic survived. He has his friends to help him get through this rough patch. Okay, whoever is Mark's stalker is crazy. Nothing better happen to Indi. Amy and Nic- the next "it" couple? Considering I know how much you want Rachel and Peter to be together lol.... Jon/Jodi scene was written really well. Loved it.... Ah, here comes PC Castle and Lye again.... This should be interesting. Claire just died and he's moving on? How insensitive. Chapter 19: The beginning half was so intense I tell you. You captured it very well. I'm glad that Indi's alive. Paul really cared about Jodi so much. Stupid Jon. Uh oh... Kate found out... Not good.... Chapter 20: Uhm, Chapter 20 was action packed. Loved it to bits. Go Paul for standing up for Jodi and he's leaving which sucks in some ways... Holly cheated on Paul? Wow... So like Amanda lol... Nic and Amy being kidnapped? That's so weird. And, I guess it's the end of Kate/Jon now... Right, that's it. I've caught up now. All in all, it's very well done and very well written. It has drama, it has scandal.... What can I say? Love it heaps.... Still not happy that you killed off Claire so that Nickerz can get with Amy. Not happy at all if that's going to happen. Anyway, update soon.
Lilone Posted July 6, 2007 Report Posted July 6, 2007 ^^^ Yay thank you Now your up to date, you can keep up Thanks everyone for the comments
ilovekateritchie Posted July 7, 2007 Report Posted July 7, 2007 Awe, poor Kate! Make it better! What a way to find out... What happened to Nic and Amy?? And if Holly didn't cheat, why did she get so upset? She's hiding something... LOVED LOVED LOVED it! A few more chapters??? I dare you to go up to 100...
beckyboo Posted July 13, 2007 Report Posted July 13, 2007 LIL We have not had an update for agessssssssssssssssssssssss lol Update soon xxxxxxx
Lilone Posted July 14, 2007 Report Posted July 14, 2007 Sorry for the lack of updates Here's Chapter 21 Chapter 21 Jodi stared at the letter, hesitating weather or not to open it. She knew that didn’t want to read it because all she wanted was to say sorry to Paul. She looked up at the door and shoved the letter in her pocket before running after Paul, searching the studio’s but he was gone, no where to be seen. He had just vanished. She ran from his dressing room to the café then ran to the car park but came to a halt when she knew he had left, his car was gone and so was Paul. That’s when she walked to the bench, slowly sitting down and opened the letter. Jon was sitting on the beach wondering what his life had become; he had lost the only thing he loved. He was the only one to blame and he hated himself, only if he had gone home instead of going to Jodi’s. “Holly you left with the man you loved, you told everyone that you had to leave Home And Away to spend more time with Paul. The writer’s wrote Nic out because they wanted Peter and Amanda to be together forever!!!” Tim said angrily. “Tim, Nic wanted to leave anyway, he wanted to go to the UK and try new things!” Holly told Tim. “I still can’t believe you would cheat on Paul!” “Tim it’s not what you think!” “Well Holly, I’m all ears!” “Tim I had to come back here. I was in the UK, sitting watching Home and Away and all I could think about was coming back here and seeing you guys!” “So you thought you would cheat instead of telling Paul the truth, Holly it feels like I don’t even know you anymore” “You know what Tim, I don’t know myself either. I thought I would never have feelings for another man again but I did and I can’t stop thinking about him!” Tim looked at Holly shocked as he asked, “Who?” Holly hesitated weather to speak but she stopped herself, “I have to go!” Holly said sharply before racing out of the house. Jodi, It’s hard for me to do this but there is just no point in hanging around. Work was fun for the first few years but with everything that has happened with Cam etc I just can’t bare to be around anymore. I hid the baby’s father from you but you have to know that I only did it for you; you mean the world to me. I wake up everyday thinking about you, I dream about us being together and then I see you at work, it’s ripping me apart not being with you. I just have to go away, I don’t know if I can come back, I wish we could be together. Only if circumstances were different… Tears were falling onto the paper as she stared at the letter. Bobby and Mark were talking with Lincoln and Indi when Mark asked, “Bobby where’s Frankie?” “Erm, I don’t know she was going to meet me here over an hour ago” “Awww Bobby been stood up” Lincoln said laughing. Bobby laughed it off as they headed towards the post boxes in main reception, Bobby collected his huge bunch of mail, mostly fan mail but there was a green envelope with Bob! Just written on the front. “What’s that?” Indi asked “I don’t know!” Bobby ripped the letter open as he caught sight of some photos. His eyes stared at them and he couldn’t bring himself to say anything, “OMG” Indi screamed as she grabbed the photos from Bobby. Bobby sat still holding the other pictures, not able to say anything, Lincoln grabbed the letter that was in the envelope, “You forgot about me didn’t you, well these two sure know about me now!!” Indi looked at Mark as they looked at the photos of Amy and Nic tied together. “We have to find them!” Mark yelled as he tried to get through to Bobby, “I, I just don’t get it…. Why Nic and Amy!” Bobby stood up and ran outside as he yelled, “Why…. Why the hell are you doing this!” into thin Air. “Jon, we need to call the police,” Indi said frantically as she ran over to him. Jodi had been driving for over an hour, all she could think about was Paul, she couldn’t stop thinking about him ever since they split last month. She was driving down a long road when she stopped as she saw a an ambulance and a fire engine and she saw what looked like Paul’s car on the side of the road. Her heart suddenly started to beat faster as she ran from the car and raced over to Paul’s car. Nic’s eyes flickered open slowly, adjusting to the light of the room, he tried to stand but his arms were tied behind him. “Amy!” Nic only just managed to mutter. He started to move his hands, frantically trying to get out of the rope but it was useless. He managed to say Amy’s name again but she was tied across the room unconscious. Indi stood hugging Bobby who hadn’t said anything, he couldn’t believe what was happening, “where’s Nic?” Tim said running over to them. Bobby looked up, handing him the picture. Preview: Is Amy ok, will they be found before it’s too late? What’s happened to Paul? Who does Holly have feelings for?
Tasha Posted July 14, 2007 Report Posted July 14, 2007 Oh my lord, what have you done to my Paulie Please let him be alright, dont kill him Poor Jodi too Poor Amy, dont kill her either. And Niccy. Who does Holly like Great chapter More please
beckyboo Posted July 14, 2007 Report Posted July 14, 2007 The letter so sad Omg Paul Nooo way!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please dont kill Him Update soon xxxxxxxx
Mrs Bishop Posted July 14, 2007 Report Posted July 14, 2007 I told you It,s the stalker, But why Amy? And who is Holly in love with? got a good idea.
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