hege1986 Posted June 25, 2007 Report Posted June 25, 2007 I would like you to write the wedding and about their life after that Great update, she said yes
Liska Posted June 25, 2007 Report Posted June 25, 2007 She said YES!! Do you know that you made my day?? Anyway, great great chapter and keep it coming. Can't wait to read about the wedding
bttb-rox! Posted June 25, 2007 Report Posted June 25, 2007 She said YES!! Do you know that you made my day?? I'm glad I made your day!! Thanks alot both of you. I will update tomorrow...hopefully .
-Karen- Posted June 25, 2007 Report Posted June 25, 2007 Let's face it, who wouldn't say yes to the HotDad!? I would love to see this fic carry on to the wedding and their life together!
bttb-rox! Posted June 25, 2007 Report Posted June 25, 2007 I would definately say yes to the HotDad!! Thanks for your lovely comments everyone and I have decided *drum roll* ....I will carry on with this fic . I'm also writing another script-fic at the moment called 'She Must Tell'...check it out , but that's an undecided short fic that I might get back to after I have posted the chapters I have already written. I would like to carry on with 'She Must Tell' though as its a carry on from what I entered in the scriptwriting competition . I have loads of ideas for this fic though so set yourself up for lots and lots of drama!!
bttb-rox! Posted June 26, 2007 Report Posted June 26, 2007 Chapter 16 Jack: Errmm... wow dad thats...amazing Lucas: Yeah, but isn't it a little soon? Tony looks at them both Tony: Guys, me and Beth love each other and we want to spend the rest of our lives together, so why wait? Jack: Well congratulations Jack gives Beth a hug Beth: Oh thank you Lucas gives Beth a hug too Tony goes into the kitchen to get some drinks Beth: I just want to say that even though im marrying your dad, I don't want you to think you have to forget about your mum or anything like that, I would still like it if you could think of me as being your mum, but I wouldn't want you to feel like I was taking her place...okay Jack: We'd like that Tony comes in with the champagne, and hand a glass to Beth, and Jack Jack: I would like to make a toast to you guys, now i'm not very good at this kind of thing but never the less, you two, You've been through so much together, and always at the end you have been there for each other, and that is love, so i make a toast to.... family Jack, Lucas, Matilda, Beth and Tony: To family Lucas: Jack you could have thought of something a bit better than that Tony then kisses Beth again Tony: I love you more than anything Beth: I love you too Tony A few days later, Beth knocks at Jacks door, Tony answers, she has come over to start wedding plans. Tony isn't quite himself, but he pretends that everything is fine, and goes to sit by the table Beth: Hellooo gorgeous! Tony: Hi Beth: Jokingly Don't I even get a kiss? Tony: Ha, sorry. Tony reaches up and kisses Beth passionately Beth: Okay, I meant a kiss not a snog but hey i'm not complaining! Tony laughs. Beth puts the wedding plans down on the table Tony: Wow, planning well in advance I see Beth: Well we are getting married so we cant leave everything until the last minute can we? Tony: I agree Beth: So how are Jack and Lucas doing? Tony stares into space Beth: ...Tony Tony: Oh, sorry Beth: Are you sure your okay? Tony: Yeah, Yeah im fine, why wouldn't i be? Beth: I dont know your...not getting cold feet are you? Tony: No, dont be silly, im just a bit tired thats all , its been a hectic couple of days to say the least. Beth: Yeah it has...but anyway wedding plans! Tony: Yes, excellent. Beth: Awww thats more like it She kisses Tony on the cheek Beth: Okay now this sheet here has a list of all the important people you need at a wedding you know, best man, bridesmaids Tony: What about the bride! Beth: That would be a good start! For bridesmaids I was thinking obvoiusly Matilda and Kit, but what about Tasha? Tony: doesn't sound too interested, Do you have to have bridesmaids? Beth: Of cause I do and I want Mattie and Kit to feel as though they have a part in the wedding Tony: Yeah, I should have thought of that sorry Beth: I'm making some tea, want some? Tony: Sounds perfect Beth : Ermm, were are the teabags? Tony: Oh, in my room actually Beth: Your room? Tony: Yeah I got a tea maker thing in there Tony and Beth head for his room Beth: Looks like you've got everything set up round here? Tony: Yeah, at least its liveable Beth: Yeah Beth walks over to Tonys bed side table, she sees a photo in a nice frame, its a blonde woman and Tony Beth: Awwww, you look very handsome in that one with the blonde girl Tony just nodds Beth: Who is she? Tony: Thats me and... Beth looks at Tony Tony: Me and kate A tear strolls down his eyes Beth: Hey, oh i'm sorry Tony starts crying and lays on his bed Beth sits next to him on the edge of the bed Beth: Its okay to cry Tony: I miss her more than words can describe Beth Beth: I'm the same about Jack my first husband, I think about him everyday even though he probably wasn't the nicest man you could meet Tony: Thankyou Beth: For what? Tony: Just being here Beth: Your my fiance thats what im supposed to do Tony: Yeah Beth: How about I get you that cup of tea? Tony: Yeah i'd love one They both look at each other Beth: I'm always here to talk to Tony: Thankyou They both get up Beth walks out but Tony reaches out his hand and pull her back in Tony: You know I love you don't you? Beth: I do, now would you stop worrying please Tony: I'm sorry I just want everything to be perfect Beth: Everything is going to be perfect They kiss and leave Tony's bedroom Outside Jack's place their is someone standing outside looking at his house
hege1986 Posted June 26, 2007 Report Posted June 26, 2007 Great update I`m wondering who is looking at his house
bttb-rox! Posted June 26, 2007 Report Posted June 26, 2007 Thanks hege!! The person who was looking at the house will be revealed a bit later in the story . I'll give you a teaser though...they do already know Beth...
Roccoluver Posted June 27, 2007 Report Posted June 27, 2007 yay, Beth said yes, what do you mean its going to be a rocky road. Why cant they just be happy?
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