vale4eva Posted June 13, 2007 Report Posted June 13, 2007 Im loving this Kyle I always love a bit of sexual tension Keep it up It makes me happy, And dont worry about everyone else, like Tasha, im already mad at her and she knows why More please
rachel&kim Posted June 13, 2007 Report Posted June 13, 2007 Thank you Kyle!! Yay Nic and Amy got custody...although why do I think that's not the last we've heard of it. It's all so great! Thank you, update please
rising-flame Posted June 13, 2007 Report Posted June 13, 2007 I think i know why Jodi wanted Kate (nearly said Sally) there. She's gonna ask Kate to be a surrogate mum like Leah was for Sally, and then real life is gonna follow fiction as Kate and Paul get close and get together, leaving a heartbroken Chris and Jodi to get together, only to discover that Jodi doesn't have the ovarian failure thing and she'll get to pregnant to Chris (also finding out Paul has made her pregnant) at the same time that Kate discovers not only is she carrying Jodi and Paul's baby, but hers and Pauls, and hers and Chris'. Which i think is a medical impossibility, but would certainly make things interesting! 5 babies.
ilovekateritchie Posted June 13, 2007 Report Posted June 13, 2007 Wow rising flame, the guess is almost better than what actually happens... Lol! Thanks for all the feedback and here is the next part: You all can stop hating Paul and Kate now. PART 12 “Why are you doing this?” “Doing what?” “Trying to make me jealous?” Paul looks at Kate angrily and she rolls her eyes. “I am dating Chris, Paul. I’m not trying to do anything.” He grabs her arm and she yanks away. “Do you want Chris to hit you?” “You told him?” “Of course I did.” Kate backs away when she sees the glint in his eyes. “Paul, don’t tell Jodi. Now is not the time, she’s going through enough…” They back away from each other when they hear a cheerful voice. “Hey guys!” Jodi rushes forward when she sees her friends, grinning happily. ”Chris, there’s someone I want you to meet… You too, Kate. I told him about you!” Chris nods slowly. “Okay…” “Come on, follow me! All three of you!” They follow her silently and she comes to a halt in Noah’s room. “Noah! This is the guy I told you about! Chris!” Noah looks up at Chris, his eyes wide. “Wow! You really are a giant!” He looks at Kate, whose shoulder basically reaches Chris’ elbow. “And you’re so short! Are you the giant’s girlfriend?” Kate kneels down, smiling. “Yes, I am… And who are you?” “I’m Noah.” “Hi Noah. I’m Kate.” He takes her hand, shaking it happily and then walks up to Chris. “Mr. Giant man… are you friendly?” Chris grins, bending down to stroke over Noah’s head. “Yeah… I think I’m pretty friendly!” Paul takes Jodi’s arm, motioning with his head for her to follow him. They walk out, sitting down on a large rock. “Jodi… there is something that you should know…” “I’m never going to forgive you for this.” Amy turns around when she hears an angry voice behind her, facing Clare. “For what?” “First you stole my husband, and now you stole my child. You’re going to pay.” “Is that a threat?” The two women stare at each other for a while and Clare smirks. “Prove it.” Amy shakes her head. “You don’t scare me, Clare. There is nothing you can do to get between me and Nic. And you should just accept that.” Amy sneers at Clare and walks off, her chin lifted. “How dare you?” Jodi glares at Kate, grabbing her arm and pulling her outside. Noah looks at them with confusion. “Mr. Giant? Why is Jo angry?” Chris picks up Noah with a sigh. “Because she’s a lady, my boy. And women are impossible to understand.” Noah nods, looking at Chris seriously. “Even for giants?” “Even for giants.” “I thought you were my friend!” Jodi glares at Kate angrily, stepping back when Kate reaches out to touch her arm. “Jodi… I am your friend!” “Really?” “I didn’t want to hurt you!” “You should have thought about that before sticking your tongue down my husband’s throat!” “Jodi, it wasn’t meant to happen! We weren’t thinking straight!” Jodi shakes her head. “You just can’t keep your hands off someone else’s husband, can you? First you make out with Chris – while he’s still with Carol and you’re still with Callan. And now Paul. My husband. You’re just a home wrecker.” Kate looks at Jodi, tears forming in her eyes. “Jodi, please don’t be like this! It was an accident!” “Accident? Yeah right. You’re such a scrag! Callan is lucky to be dead, at least now he doesn’t have to deal with his cheap wife!” Kate steps back, looking as though she’s been slapped in the face. Then her face turns white, her eyes shooting fire. “How dare you say that? I understand that you’re hurt and you want to hurt me, but talking about Callan like that… it’s pathetic, Jodi. And you know what else? Don’t blame me if you can’t hold on to your husband. It’s not my fault.” She swings around, walking off angrily, tears running over her cheeks. “Fancy seeing you here.” Kate looks up when she hears a malicious voice next to her and turns to face Mandy. “What do you want?” “I decided to cancel our little appointment. So I heard you were hear to visit your crazy little friend and I came to tell you that.” Kate sighs. “I don’t have the energy for this.” Mandy sneers, looking at Kate silently, a strange light shining in her eyes. “You’re not getting Chris. He belongs with me.” “Just go.” Mandy nods and gets back in her car while Kate starts walking off again. She doesn’t notice Mandy reaching in her handbag and pulling out a gun. Mandy lifts the gun, pointing at Kate’s back. “Bye bye Kate…” There’s a shot and Kate gaps in pain when the bullet hits her. She closes her eyes, slipping away and feels her body hitting the hard ground before a merciful darkness sucks her in.
vale4eva Posted June 13, 2007 Report Posted June 13, 2007 I hate you Not only have you screwed up my idea of the sexual tension, but youve gone and killed Kate!!! *shakes head in annoyance* You better make it better Kyle! Otherwise.....
tasha7905 Posted June 13, 2007 Report Posted June 13, 2007 Poor Kate I cant belive Mandy shot her. I cant believe Paul told Jodi. I cant believe you ended it there. More soon please.
rachel&kim Posted June 13, 2007 Report Posted June 13, 2007 oh my GOD! I so wasn't expecting that! More please soon soon!
sazcaz89 Posted June 13, 2007 Report Posted June 13, 2007 OMG!!!! I can't believe you killed kate! I was not expecting that. update soon
beckyboo Posted June 13, 2007 Report Posted June 13, 2007 1st update of the day - Rach I hate Sexual tension between you no who:P 2nd - Is Paul purposly trying to **** Jodi off :( Kyle you shot Kate, now she can keep her hands off Paul Update soon xxxxx
vale4eva Posted June 13, 2007 Report Posted June 13, 2007 1st update of the day - Rach I hate Sexual tension I LOVE sexual tension 2nd - Is Paul purposly trying to pidd Jodi off And I believe you mean **** there, not pidd Make it better Kyle! (I want more sexual tension )
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