ilovekateritchie Posted June 13, 2007 Report Posted June 13, 2007 Kyle you shot Kate, now she can keep her hands off Paul I believe that he was the one who couldn't keep his hands off her... Thanks for the feedback guys... “Where’s Kate?” Paul looks at Jodi curiously when she returns and the latter shrugs. “I don’t know. She left.” “Left? You mean you just let her walk out?” “Yeah.” “Jodi!” “What? She’s a little scrag, who cares?” Kate moans softly, a blinding pain shooting through her body. “Chris…” She tries to get up, but falls back down again, the darkness still surrounding her. Will Kate be found? Will it be too late? And which couples decides to call it quits?
-Jade- Posted June 13, 2007 Report Posted June 13, 2007 You meany... you can't leave us with that! Update update! Pretty please? Awesome chapters Kyle - I love how you constantly subvert the dynamics of all the friendships and relationships - makes it really interesting.
beckyboo Posted June 13, 2007 Report Posted June 13, 2007 “Jodi!” “What? She’s a little scrag, who cares?” Well said Jodz But Oh My God Jodi may be accused of shooting her!!!!
rachel&kim Posted June 13, 2007 Report Posted June 13, 2007 Please please update! I have an exam tomorrow and need to take my mind of how badly I'm gonna fail!! *smiles winningly*
vale4eva Posted June 13, 2007 Report Posted June 13, 2007 Jodi may be accused of shooting her!!!! Some how I doubt Jodi would have a gun lying around the 'rehab' centre with her
beckyboo Posted June 13, 2007 Report Posted June 13, 2007 Some how I doubt Jodi would have a gun lying around the 'rehab' centre with her But ya never know!!!!!!! She was the last one to see her!
flyingwithoutwings Posted June 13, 2007 Report Posted June 13, 2007 I hope Kate's alright! If that couple that decides to call it quits is Nic and Amy, then a few of us will have something to say!
Tasha Posted June 13, 2007 Report Posted June 13, 2007 Wow, Kyle killed Kate Im shocked. IM late again, so i'll make this short. Im glad Jodi knows. Now she has to leave Paul, and run away with Naoh More please
ilovekateritchie Posted June 14, 2007 Report Posted June 14, 2007 Nope, Jodi was with Paul around the time Kate was shot. And your worry about whether Kate (or shall we say Kate's body???) will be found amazes me. Thanks for the feedback though and here is the next part: PART 13 “Where’s Kate?” Paul looks at Jodi curiously when she returns and the latter shrugs. “I don’t know. She left.” “Left? You mean you just let her walk out?” “Yeah.” “Jodi!” “What? She’s a little scrag, who cares?” “Chris for one!” “What about you? Do you care?” Paul sighs. “Jodi… I told you – the kiss was a mistake. I love you, you’re my wife and that is how I want it to stay. But I care for Kate… she’s one of my best friends. And letting her walk off when she’s probably very upset is hardly a good idea.” Jodi bites her lip. “Okay, I know I shouldn’t have let her walk off like that. But I was just so angry.” Paul sighs, kissing his wife softly. “I know, sweetie. I know.” “Amy? What happened?” Nic frowns when Amy walks right into his arms, her arms circling around his waist. “I just had a run in with your ex.” Nic looks down at her worriedly. “Did she say something?” Amy shakes her head. “Nothing that I can’t handle… I just… I just needed you to hold me.” Nic nods, resting his chin on her head. “Okay… Well you know me, I’m always up for that.” Amy smiles, pressing his face against his shoulder. “I love you Nic.” “Rhys… can we talk?” Rhys looks up when Indiana sits down next to him and takes her hand. “Sure…” “It’s just… well, the reason why I’ve been so weird lately… it’s my dad. He left my mum for her best friend… and she’s going to have his baby. I just felt… rejected. And I took it out on everyone.” Rhys puts his arms around her, pulling her closer. “Indi! I had no idea.” “I didn’t want to tell anyone… because I thought that if I ignored it… it would just go away. But it didn’t.” She shakes her head and looks at Rhys, tears shining in her eyes. “I’m sorry, Rhys.” “It’s okay…” She looks at him seriously. "This... It's not about you, but... with everything that's happened... I don't think I should be in a relationship now. Please don't be mad at me..." Rhys smiles, taking her hand. "I'm not mad. Friends?" Indiana shakes his hands with a smile. "Friends." “Mommy! I want to go to this audition, I want to be an actress!” Little Kate jumps up and down, waving a paper in her mother’s face. “See mom? See?” ---------------------- “I love you Kate.” “I love you too.” Nervously, Callan reaches into his pocket and takes out a small box. “Kate Ritchie… will you marry me?” --------------------------------------------- Callan grins, stroking the side of Kate’s face. “My wife… I love you.” “And I love you.” -------------------------- Kate struggles to get loose as Chris drags her out of the kitchen. “Let me go! I want to be with him! Let me go!” ----------------------------------------------------------- Kate curls in pain as another pain rips through her stomach and Jodi looks at one of the hostage takers nearby in tears. “You have to get her to a hospital!” --------------------------------------------------------- Kate looks at the strange blonde woman in Chris’ bed silently. “Sorry… where’s Chris?” ------------------------------------------------------ “You’re a sleaze. And a jerk. And I hate you.” Chris kisses Kate again. “I hate you too.” Kate laughs, kissing him softly. “No you don’t.” ------------------------------------------ Chris picks her up, kissing her hungrily. Kate encircles his neck with her arms, pressing her body against his with force. They slide down to the couch, their bodies tangled together, their hands grabbing onto each other for dear life. ------------------------------------------------------------ Chris smiles down at her and she smiles. “Promise you’ll never let me go…” “I promise…” ---------------------------------------------------------- “I love you, Chris.” “I love you more.” Kate laughs, pulling her fingers through his hair. “No you don’t. I love you more.” Kate moans softly, a blinding pain shooting through her body. “Chris…” She tries to get up, but falls back down again, the darkness still surrounding her.
Tasha Posted June 14, 2007 Report Posted June 14, 2007 OMG die already Actually no dont die, then Paul will be all depressed and he'll neglect Jodi again, and Jodi needs him especially when she takes Noah home with her Great chapter. Indi and Rhys, how sad. Oh well More please
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