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Behind The Curtains - The Cameras Are STILL Off


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Wow, Chris is being a complete idiot. <_<

Everyone expects him to lash out because he's grieving but he's going too far, and being extremely selfish.

I've decided that I don't like him. :P

Please update soon! :D

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i hate chris

he is being verrrry selfish

i mean if kate wanted to walk off then there was nothing Jodi could do to stop her...

and poor Paul... hes so confused but Chris is just being so rude.... Jodi and Paul did not pull the trigger

and grieving is no excuse :P

update soon

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Ok, so I voted for Paulie to end up with Jodz, but can we still have a Kate and Paul affair on the side please :D (maybe just for a little while :) )

Im sorry, I shouldnt be saying all this! But you've made me become obsessed with KnP :ph34r:

Looking forward to more

Ps, hope Kate lives :)

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You left out an option in your poll. Kate dies and in grieving Chris gets confused and turns to Paul for comfort!!!

Kyle knew I would kill him if that was an option! :P

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Can i kill Chris??? I hate him, i hate him just as much as i hate Kate. And well, im starting to love Paul again :P, but i know that's going to go next chapter, since Jodi just found out how her feels about Kate <_< Jodi leave him i tell you, then i can hook up with him :) Jokes. And Jodi didnt shoot her you loser, it was your stupid one-night stand, its all your fault that Kate is in hospital. You suck Chris, you deserve this.

Ok i'll shut up. This is what happens when i dont have to pick up my cousin :)

More please

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Wow I have alot to catch up on I've been sick and havn't really bothered coming on that often.

Aww Paul is finally warming up to Jodi again, now he has to go save her from Chris <_< how dare he talk to her like that. :angry:

Kill Kate :D and Paul ends up with Jodi :D:D

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Here is a promo banner I made for the fic! :P

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PART 16

“Do you really think that helped?”

Ada looks at Chris reproachfully and he shrugs.

“Chris! Jodi is already going through hell!”

“It’s her fault that Kate is lying in there, Ada! I’m not about to forget it!”

“Clamp.”

“Here.”

“Blood pressure?”

“Still not stable.”

The doctor shakes his head, looking down at the small woman on the operating table.

“We’re losing her…”

“I wish they would just come out and tell us what’s going on!”

Chris shakes his head and Nic pats his shoulder.

“I’m sure they’ll come out as soon as they know something, mate. No news is good news.”

“What if she dies?”

“She won’t.”

“But what if she does? I can’t live without her, Nic… I just can’t.”

“I know, mate. I know…”

“He’s right… It’s my fault.”

Paul looks at Jodi seriously.

“You don’t believe that.”

“I do… Paul, if I had a gun today I would have shot her. And that makes me as bad as the person who did it. For one sick second after I heard… I was relieved in a sense… I thought that she deserved it. And then I felt sick about what I thought…”

Paul pulls Jodi close, resting his chin on her head.

“She’s going to come out of this, Jodi. You’ll see… Everything is going to turn out okay…”

“She’s arresting, quick… I need electricity.”

“Stand back…”

Kate’s body jerks when the electricity shocks through her, but she immediately goes back into her arrested state.

The doctor looks at the people standing around him and shakes his head.

“It’s not working. Turn it up.”

He holds it to her body again, repeating the routine. He frowns when nothing happens.

“What’s going on? Why isn’t she coming back?”

Chris stands up, shaking his head.

“I can’t take this anymore… How long are we going to have to wait?”

He turns to face the wall.

“This can’t be good… something’s wrong…”

He sits down again, tears streaming down his face.

“Please God… help her… I need her… Hayden needs her… Don’t let her die, please…”

Jodi sighs, staring out in front of her blankly.

“Chris is right. This is my fault. I let her go. I could have stopped her from running off, but I didn’t… I her go…”

She looks at Paul, tears running down her cheeks.

“Do you hate me now?”

“I could never hate you, Jodi…”

Mandy smiles maliciously, taking a cigarette out of a packet, before dialling a number.

“Carol. Hi. It’s Mandy. I did it.”

She laughs viciously when the other voice lets out a yelp of surprise.

“You doubted me?”

Carol laughs.

“I’d lie if I said that I didn’t have my doubts. Any news?”

“No… she’s still in hospital. But they don’t really have any hope for her to survive.”

Carol laughs gleefully.

“Good. Chris is going to pay… He loved her the whole time. Not me. And that ruined me… I swore the day I left him that I was going to get them back. And now I am. Oh, I wish I could have seen his face when he saw her lying there!”

There is a sound in the background and Carol sighs.

“It’s the kids. Ugh, I’m starting to wish I left them with Chris.”

“Why didn’t you?”

“Because he wanted them… And I want nothing more than to take everything he wants away from him…

Chris and co all look up when the doctor comes out of the theatre, looking glum. Chris jumps up, looking anxious.

“Kate…?”

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