Roccoluver Posted June 15, 2007 Report Posted June 15, 2007 Don't kill Kate or else I will stop reading, do you heard me I don't care if Paul and Jodi end up dead you can't kill Kate
beckyboo Posted June 15, 2007 Report Posted June 15, 2007 You cant leave it there Kyle!!!!!! Im going to work in a min So I hope there are some updates when I get home Seeya xxxxxxxxxx
Sam =) Posted June 15, 2007 Report Posted June 15, 2007 Paul and Jodi are cute again Now just get rid of Kate and things will be back to the way they were
Tasha Posted June 15, 2007 Report Posted June 15, 2007 haha i didnt know there was an update, whoops. Oh well. Poor Jodi, she shouldnt be blaming herself. I still dont know why its a big deal to let Kate go on her own, gosh, i go out on my own all the time. Its not like they knew someone was out to get her. Why is idiotface Chris blaming my poor Jodi And why isnt Jodi angry at Paul for having feelings for Kate She has to go back to the retreat and be with Noah now. I dont care about anyone else Great chapter though. So Carol's kids are Chris's?? She made up the other guy thing?? More please
kaciexox Posted June 15, 2007 Report Posted June 15, 2007 Oh well. Poor Jodi, she shouldnt be blaming herself. I still dont know why its a big deal to let Kate go on her own, gosh, i go out on my own all the time. Its not like they knew someone was out to get her. Why is idiotface Chris blaming my poor Jodi i agree If kate wanted to go then she would still go if Jodi had asked her...DONT BLAME JODI awww podi are sooo
rachel&kim Posted June 15, 2007 Report Posted June 15, 2007 Oh my god Carol! I'd forgotten who she was for a bit. A conspiracy! Did not see that one coming. Great stuff - like the banner too. More soon please!
ilovekateritchie Posted June 15, 2007 Report Posted June 15, 2007 Thanks for the feedback, stop hating Chris, stop hating Kate, stop hating Paul! Here's the next part. PART 17 “She’s still critical… but stable.” Chris closes his eyes for a few seconds. “Thank you.” He opens his eyes again, looking at the doctor seriously. “Can I see her?” “Sure. But only five minutes… and only one person.” Everyone looks at Chris and he nods. “Thanks guys.” He follows the doctor, hesitating at the door. The two men look at each other for a while and the doctor puts his hand on Chris’ shoulder. “She doesn’t look well, mate… just so you’re warned.” “Thank you…” Nothing could prepare him for the shock though… Chris takes one look at her small body, surrounded by pipes and tears well up in his eyes. He walks closer nervously, taking her hand. “Kate… Who did this to you?” He sits down slowly, his eyes fixated on her face. “You can’t die Kate. I forbid you. You have to be stronger than this, do you hear me? You have to fight… Please, Kate…” Mark stands up when Chris comes out. “And?” Chris shakes his head, his eyes full of tears. “I… I just need to go home…” Ada puts her hand on his arm. “Come on… I’ll drive you.” “Thanks Ada…” Just before walking out, Chris turns to face Jodi and Paul, who are sitting next to each other. “Congratulations. I hope you’re happy.” He shoots them a furious look before storming off. Ada bites her lip, looking as though she wants to say something. Instead, she rushes after Chris… leaving Jodi and Paul by themselves. Jodi shakes her head. “I need to get back to the retreat…” “Surely they’ll let you stay.” Jodi pulls away when Paul touches her arm. “You know, Paul, I don’t want to stay. Because I need another drink. So just take me, please?” “Okay…” “Thank you.” She stands up, looking at him coolly. Paul frowns. “Jodi? What’s going on?” “Nothing.” “Yeah right.” “Chris said that you have feelings for Kate. Is it true?” Paul looks down, closing his eyes. “I care about her. And I’m not going to deny that there is certain chemistry between us. But you’re the one I love, Jodi. I promise.” “Did you sleep together?” “What?” “You heard me.” Paul sighs. “No. We never slept together.” “Promise?” “Jodi, I promise. We just kissed. That’s all. “ Jodi nods and takes his hand. "I love you." "I love you too…" "How is she?" Becky and Tasha both look at Jodi sympathetically and Jodi shakes her head. "Well she's still alive. But barely… And Chris blames me." Becky frowns. "Why do you say that?" "He told me." Tasha bites her lip. "I'm sure he didn't mean it…" "Oh, he did…" "I want to see Kate Ritchie please." The nurse looks at Paul with a frown. "I'm not sure that's such a good idea…" "Look, please? I need to see her." He looks at the nurse desperately and she sighs. "Five minutes!" "Hey Kate…" Paul sits down next to her bed, looking at her with a frown. "I don't know if you can hear me… but there is something that I need to say. I… I care about you a lot, Kate… and I thought that being in love with you was justified… because of how things were going for me and Jodi. And for you and Chris. But the thing is… when we found you lying there today… I've never seen him like that. He loves you more than anyone ever could. Please wake up, Kate. For Chris…" Chris and Hayden. You belong with them. I realize that now…” He looks at her still figure before sighing and standing up to walk out. When he reaches the door he looks back at her sadly. “Please fight this Kate…”
rachel&kim Posted June 15, 2007 Report Posted June 15, 2007 Yes! go paul, doing the decent thing. thank you, update soon!
Tasha Posted June 15, 2007 Report Posted June 15, 2007 Right, second try If i were Jodi i wouldnt trust Paulie. Because he is still no telling the whole truth. He forgot to mention their make out session on the beach, and the fact that she has feelings for him too. But whatever, i dont like them now. Im glad Jodi is going back to Noah Chris is still a butthead. I hate him. oh wait, Paul was in love with Kate?? Gosh, now Jodi really has to leave him More please
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