rachel&kim Posted June 17, 2007 Report Posted June 17, 2007 Cute chapter! Noah is the most adorable kid ever. Poor Amy What's wrong with Kate?! Update soon!
vale4eva Posted June 17, 2007 Report Posted June 17, 2007 Awww, isnt Noah just a total cutie pie More please
beckyboo Posted June 17, 2007 Report Posted June 17, 2007 Thanks guys. PART 20 “Noah… how would you like to come and live with me and Paul?” Noah looks at Jodi and Paul with a small frown. “Will that make you my mommy?” Jodi nods. “It sure will!” He looks at Paul. “And will you be my daddy then?” ”I sure will.” Noah grins and climbs onto Paul’s lap, throwing his arms around his neck. “Then I love you too, daddy!” All that was sooo Awwwwwwwwww Noah is going to be an O'Brien Update like now Kyle
sazcaz89 Posted June 17, 2007 Report Posted June 17, 2007 how cute, jodi has decided to adopt. update soon
Tasha Posted June 17, 2007 Report Posted June 17, 2007 awwww...i love Noah <33 Soooooo cute. Poor Amy. Whats wrong with Kate?? Isnt Ava like less than a year old or something in real life? Or is she older in this fic? Great chapter More please
ilovekateritchie Posted June 18, 2007 Report Posted June 18, 2007 Ava is about 4/5 here! Noah is 5 as well. Hayden is a little over 6 months already. Thanks for feedback. PART 21 Chris looks at the doctor with a concerned frown. “Doctor, just tell us. Please.” Kevin sighs and looks at Kate. “While in surgery… we found that you were six weeks pregnant. The fall, the gunshot and your unstable blood pressure… it's resulted in a miscarriage. Your daughter died ten minutes into surgery. I wish I didn’t have to tell you this, that we could have let you go without knowing. But it wouldn’t have been fair on you.” Kate looks at Chris, her face a mask of pain. “Chris…” He climbs onto the bed, wrapping his arms around her and resting his face in her hair. He can’t bear to look at the doctor and just nods. “Thank you for telling us…” Kevin nods and walks out, leaving the couple alone. Kate looks up at Chris, tears forming in her eyes. “We… we were meant to have a daughter…” She starts sobbing, pressing her face against Chris’ chest. Chris looks up, tears storming over his cheeks. “A baby girl…” Kate buries her head in his shoulder, her body jerking with sobs. "Why can't everything work out for me just for once?" “Hey, Ava!” Nic sits down on the ground next to Ava and she looks at him with a smile. “Hi, daddy!” “Look, do you know why Aunt Amy was upset? She cried and she won’t tell me why?” Ava shakes her head. “No. I don’t know.” Nic nods. “Okay then. Thank you, sweetie. Have you been good today?” “Very good.” Nic laughs, stroking her head. “Then you deserve a treat. Let’s go out to dinner.” “Just me and you?” “And aunt Amy…” Ava pouts, looking up at her father. “Why does she have to come?” “Because she’s my wife, Ava. I love her.” Ava sighs and looks away. “Fine. She can come too. And I’ll be good.” “That’s my girl! You go take a bath now! We’re leaving in an hour.” “We’ll be able to sort this out in the next two weeks. There is just some paperwork that needs to be done and then you can take your son home with you.” Jodi grins. “Thank you, Peter! You have no idea how happy this makes me!” Peter smiles, looking at the couple happily. “Oh, I think I do. Just… bring him back to visit every now and then.” “I promise I will!” Kate cuddles up to Chris, their hands carefully entwined. “What would you have liked to name her? If she lived.” Chris thinks for a minute. “I don’t know… I like Caitlyn.” “Me too.” She looks up at him, her eyes shining with tears. “I feel so guilty. If I hadn’t stormed off… our daughter would have lived. But I put her life in danger…” “Kate, you didn’t know you were going to get shot!” “Still… I shouldn’t have stormed off. Jodi had a right to be angry. But… when she said that Callan was lucky to be dead… I lost all logic. I just wanted to get away… then… I remember talking to someone else… and I told her to go… and then it was black…” She sighs deeply. “Caitlyn Sadrinna… she would have been so perfect… Our baby.” She looks up at him. “Why would someone do that?” Chris shakes his head. “I don’t know… I really don’t. But you’ll remember who it is. And then we’re going to put that person away. Forever.” Kate nods sadly. “But that won’t bring our baby back.” “No. It won’t.” “Hi mommy…” Ava looks at the door carefully, making sure that her father can’t hear her. “I’m fine. No, they’re okay. We’re going out to dinner. Yes, I did. Love you too. Bye mommy.” She puts the phone down and returns to the floor where all her doors are lying around. She looks up when Amy enters her room. “Ava… you have to pick up your dollies, we are almost leaving.” “I don’t want to pick them up.” Amy sighs and kneels next to Ava, starting to pick up the dolls. “Don’t touch my dollies!” “Well you won’t pick them up! And they’re not going to lie around here! So either you pick all of them up right now or I give them all away.” “You won’t do that!” Amy glares at Ava angrily. “Try me.”
Sam =) Posted June 18, 2007 Report Posted June 18, 2007 Noah's mine! not Paul and Jodi's Naww that chapter was so cute but there is no way you would let Paul and Jodi be that happy is there
Sam =) Posted June 18, 2007 Report Posted June 18, 2007 Noah's mine! not Paul and Jodi's Naww that chapter was so cute but there is no way you would let Paul and Jodi be that happy is there
Tasha Posted June 18, 2007 Report Posted June 18, 2007 No Sam, ive already shot gun Noah, Kyle gave him to me yages ago so haha *sticks tongue out* Great chapter. Poor Kate They had a baby girl Stupid Mandy and Carol, ruining everything. And Kyle im sorry about the other fic, When cameras stop rolling or something like that, i still love you fic, just not the idea of Paul and Kate. Please forgive me More please
ilovekateritchie Posted June 18, 2007 Report Posted June 18, 2007 You made me cry for a full ten seconds there, Tash.
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