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ha i love this fic so much

go kate for slapping chris...he was asking for it :P

Jodi and Paul :wub:

They are like Jack and Martha....they need to hurry up and admit their true feelings for each other

Update soon :)

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And I loved this.

Paul and Jodi need to be together they love each other.

But if they get together too soon, then what is the fic about lol!

Just be patient with your favourite couple! I'll update soon!

Thanks for the comments everyone!

Edited by ilovekateritchie
Posted (edited)

That whole Paul and Jodi scene was adorable and she called him Paulie

“Heartthrob O’Brien!â€

Indiana looks at Paul.

“Arrogance O’Brien is more like it.â€

Jodi laughs.

“Make it Paul.

Thant made me laugh but it's true

Edited by Sam =)
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Brillient :D

Just one thing though, it might be just me but sometimes I get confuused to who is saying what because there are loads of people talking in the fic :)

Maybe try and make it a bit clearer to who is talking? and who that person is talking to :)

Edited by Lilone

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