Linger (by bay girl) - comments

[[.jessa-belle.]]

Martha is being such a cow!!!! I know I know, its not her fault but I can't help feeling that she is being such a cow!!!

Maybe she does go home with Jack. ohhhhh

Great Update!

[gawguss_tiff]

Lucas is hilarious lol everyone else is being all nice to her and he was the only one to pull her up lol it was soo funny lol

aww poor jack shes being WAY too harsh on him its not his fault she lost her memory i get why she told him she couldnt be with him but whats with her being bitchy with it lol but it is soo how martha would have acted towards him if all the other stuff hadnt happened lol if that makes any sense at all lol well EXCELLENT update. oo and maybe she goes and lives with jack and alex that would be great maybe Alf should tell her shes not aloud to go home with him lol:P

UPDATE ASAP

<3 Tiff

Edited December 27, 2006 by gawguss_tiff

[Nicom]

Awww. Poor Jacky.

Okay, I'm either really tired, or a complete freak. I feel really sad now.

Damn you Amber.

And how come you use the word "alright"? When I try to flippin' use it my Word Processor tells me off. I knew it was a word! Stupid ass computer...

Update soon!

Edited December 27, 2006 by Nicom

[Adia]

Great chapter. This fic is awesome, I love it!

The three Holden men looked to the ground; clearly hurt by Martha words. They didn’t expect her to be so rude.

The Holden men are so sweet. That bit just showed how cute and sensitve they are.

Poor Jack, I wish that Martha wasn't being so mean to him. I liked how he was talking about how Alex repreented their life together, brilliant. Can't wait for the next update!

[>>Emma<<]

Amber that was great but really sad I can't believe their marriage is just over like that, it's a good thing that she hasn't given up on Alex, but still poor Jacky I hope they sort everything out.

Please update soon, can't wait to read more!

[baby gurl]

FINALLY!!! u updated!!! that was brilliant....martha is soooooooo funny...poor jack loved it at the end when he told her that alex is staying with him!!!!

[-Laura-]

Aww poor Jack he just wants his family back together but Martha isn't even giving it a chance! Grr! lol Hopefully they will do some bonding over Alex! Great chapter and update soon!

[JM_stuchers]

just read the whole thing and its really good

update soon please :D

[linzie_mac01]

Thankies for the update it was excellent as per usual

[mrsbrody]

Great chapter if Martha doesn't want him I'll have him and never leave him poor Jack its so sad. Keep up the good work.