xsianx Posted January 3, 2007 Report Posted January 3, 2007 Aww! That was great! I don't have much to say.. too busy chomping through an apple. lol Only - don't people have school to attend? Loads of people have posted since 11am... please don't say I was the only one who went back to school. I agree that was great Aw poor people who went back to school today lol I go back next tuesday Quote
linzie_mac01 Posted January 4, 2007 Report Posted January 4, 2007 Yay!! Finally a cliffhanger that actually ends the chapter in a good way, i can't wait to see what Mac has in store for Jack. If he wasn't already gobsmacked that she turned up at his house, after what had happened earlier, then he will be soon (he he he) Quote
foxychic99 Posted January 5, 2007 Report Posted January 5, 2007 (edited) Aww you cant leave it there thats mean lol well that was great yay she moved back in all thats left now is for jack and martha to get together update soon Edited January 5, 2007 by foxychic99 Quote
zzazzb Posted January 5, 2007 Report Posted January 5, 2007 *GASP!* i've been away.. *GASP* She's Moving in ! *GASP* you left us a cliffhanger-y thing..meanie Quote
Clair 247 Posted January 5, 2007 Report Posted January 5, 2007 I am loving this story! All your work is amazing so I don't know why I'm sounding surprised! I'm not! Brilliant plot in this one though I'm so glad that Martha has decided to move back in with her husband and daughter even if she doesn't recognise them as such. Something tells me it's not going to be an easy ride though! Great chapter as always, can't wait for the next! Quote
xsianx Posted January 11, 2007 Report Posted January 11, 2007 Martha smiled and lowered her finger. “I like you. The other day you basically called me a bitch to my face. You were the only one who had enough guts to do it. I like that,” she told him. Lucas started to smile. “Did you hear that Jack? She likes me. She probably likes me more than she likes you,” he tormented his brother. Jack looked over at Martha. “I’ll call you a bitch if you want me too,” he exclaimed. “Your life will end if you ever call me a bitch,” Martha warned him. Haha! loved those comments I can just see that taking place. Jack's right she is a bit bossy! but funny. Superb writing Quote
Clair 247 Posted January 11, 2007 Report Posted January 11, 2007 Loved it! You write the characters so beautifully! Love all this banter between Jack and Martha, just like old times! And you've given Lucas lines and a character that the show never has! It's brilliant, please update soon! Quote
[.jessa-belle.] Posted January 11, 2007 Report Posted January 11, 2007 Ha Awesome Chapter. Funniest in the whole fic Love the rules. Even though I think Mac won't abide by some Cant wait for the next update Quote
Adia Posted January 11, 2007 Report Posted January 11, 2007 Martha and Lucas were so funny! That was great. Martha was being a bit bossy, but I hope it's building up that *romantic* tension between her and Jack! I can't wait to see the next chapter either! Great writing! Quote
-lolly- Posted January 11, 2007 Report Posted January 11, 2007 I think that's the best chapter i have ever read Loved how Jack offered to call her a bitch and she just cut him down straight away. Awesome chapter and writing Amber. I hope you do put the next part up tomorrow Quote
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