purple fairy Posted January 11, 2007 Report Posted January 11, 2007 That was amazing i laughed all the way through I hope they don't stick to the rules because I would love to read the flirting between Jack and Martha. I hope the flirting is a little like they where on the show becasue I loved it. Great chapter please update soon. Quote
puja Posted January 11, 2007 Report Posted January 11, 2007 Fantastic chapter; that was just hilarious! I loved how Martha took control and kept Jack at bay Even Lucas got in on the act. Please, please, please update soon- can't wait to read on! Quote
gawguss_tiff Posted January 11, 2007 Report Posted January 11, 2007 That was great and yay a chapter tomorro yay cant wait lmao lucas is soo great in this lol poor jack lol xxoxox Quote
baby gurl Posted January 11, 2007 Report Posted January 11, 2007 haha! soooooo funny! especially liked it when martha told jack he cant call her a bitch lmao!! update soon...xx Quote
Nicom Posted January 11, 2007 Report Posted January 11, 2007 (edited) Lmao!! I have a silent laugh right now, my mouth's just in a massive, open grin shape and my belly hurts. I'll edit this after I've been out. (And hopefully stopped with the silent laughter) EDIT: Great chapter. As you can see, it made me laugh. lol. Picture this. After I came on here, I went to the hospital. Because you're only allowed 2 visitors per bed, and there were 3 of us, I had to go sit out in the corridor for a while, on the worlds comfiest sofa. Well, as I tried not to fall asleep (I seriously was nodding off, i had my eyes shut and everything, then I opened them and tried to act natural when I heard anyone's shoes) and then this fic shot in my head... and I began to smile... and i got the same pain in my stomach. Silent- laughing pain. lol. I was cursing you, Amber. But then thanking you at the same time. I was out there all alone and lonely for over half an hour! So, it gave me some amusement - along with the nurse who couldn't get into the staff room. ANYWAY, as you see I'm in the rambling mood.. lol, I'll just say "Looking forward to the next update" Edited January 11, 2007 by Nicom Quote
beckyboo Posted January 11, 2007 Report Posted January 11, 2007 That was a great chapter and soo funny too Yeah an update tomorrow well hopefully Update soon Quote
>>Emma<< Posted January 11, 2007 Report Posted January 11, 2007 That was sooo good Amber, I loved it. Lets hope that Martha see's that she does love Jack after all, moving in will definitely help - one step at a time! Great chapter, Martha is so funny, I could see this happening on the show! Fab! Quote
-Laura- Posted January 11, 2007 Report Posted January 11, 2007 Awesome chapter Amber! Love Lucas hes so adorable but poor little Jack bless! Can't wait for the next chapter to see how closely to the rules him and Martha will be able to stay! lol So update when you can! Quote
loobieloo Posted January 11, 2007 Report Posted January 11, 2007 Fabuloso! Loved it! More soon please Quote
mrsbrody Posted January 12, 2007 Report Posted January 12, 2007 Great Chapter I'm so happy she moved back in. This is turning out to be a very funny fiction well done! Quote
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