Linger (by bay girl) - comments

[-ParaisGal-]

Good spotting. Come to think of it, wow maybe she is in a coma!

[Sam =)]

Wow this is really good

Martha in a coma

Hope she wakes up soon and it would make sense 'cos Jack said she just wants her back and Tony said we all do so I'm guessing a coma at the moment.

Great writing can't wait for a update.

Edited November 4, 2006 by Sam =)

[irish_angel]

Great start to what i'm sure will be another fantastic fic from you Amber. Looking forward to finding out where Martha is... And how cute was Lucas with little Alex

[SfanS]

Ahh, not a fan of J&M, but Amber, you make me like them. So far my fave character is Alexandria....she's SO cute!

[~Rosey~]

Sounds good. Please update soon =]

xxx

[Clair 247]

Didn't think it was possible but I am already loving this new story! Think it must be your brilliant writing! Can't wait to find out where Martha is and what's really going on! Alexandria seems like a cutie-pie! Looking forward to the next update!

[-Laura-]

Good start! Love all your fics! Hope Marthas ok where ever she is! And how cute are Lucas and baby Alex! Ahhh!

[~sarah~]

great chapter

i hope martha's ok

update soon

[Tasha]

Kah! I knew when she'd wake up she wont remember Jack But i guess with her not remembering it'll make a story. This is going to be one interesting fan fic. Great chapter.

Please update soon

[-Laura-]

Ah how could you leave us there!! Cant wait til the next update to see what happens! Great so far!