vale4eva Posted February 7, 2007 Report Posted February 7, 2007 yet again another fantastic chapter! martha should just give in, you never know. if she does it might all come flooding back! yay- flashback time! i really hope it has something to do with jack. how funny would it be if she just randomly got a flash back of her nudie run, shed be like - what the hell! update when you get chance Quote
Adia Posted February 7, 2007 Report Posted February 7, 2007 That was just the cuteness! But the end! I felt so sorry for them both! My favourite bit was when Jack ate the baby food. There is such great chemistry between them, I love it! Great writing as always! Update soon! Quote
~Amy~ Posted February 7, 2007 Report Posted February 7, 2007 Ooooh I loved that! I can't stop thinking about how cute Alex would look. Martha smirked back. “In your dreams Jackie boy,” she exclaimed. “Thought I’d just try,” Jack shrugged.Great dialogue throughout it, alot of it made me go "awww!" And such humor too: “She totally wants me,” Jack said out loud to himself. He seems so arragoant yet adorable all in the one sentence! You've got me wondering about the flasback now, dammit its gonna bug me! Quote
baby gurl Posted February 7, 2007 Report Posted February 7, 2007 aaaaawww poor jack brilliant chapter amber....more soon please...xx Quote
phize Posted February 7, 2007 Report Posted February 7, 2007 AWESOME!!!!!! i just LOVE this its amazing! when will the next update be up???? Quote
purple fairy Posted February 7, 2007 Report Posted February 7, 2007 That was absolutely amazing I was almost crying at the end when Jack broke down. Martha really needs to hurry up and remember Jack and how much she loves him so that they can finally be happy. I cant wait for the next chapter so update as soon as you can. Quote
>>Emma<< Posted February 7, 2007 Report Posted February 7, 2007 Yay it's flashback time Poor Jack, I'm glad Martha feels guilty! Great writing as per usual, update soon Quote
-Laura- Posted February 8, 2007 Report Posted February 8, 2007 Well throughout most of the chapter you had me feeling abit annoyed by Jacks behaviour and i found him a bit arrogant even though i liked the interaction between him and Martha i just felt he was trying to push her too much and it was just going to make things worse and undo all the progress they have made! But, then when i read the end bit i nearly had tears in my eyes! I felt so sorry for Jack and just realised how much this is hurting him and eating him up inside which explains his behaviour! Glad Martha saw in a way because hopefully she will try and let him in more but also feel sorry for her because now she may feel pressured into feeling things she doesnt too soon which will just wreck things! Cant wait for the flashback to see what it is! Great writing Amber, i love this fic so much! Update when you can! Quote
phize Posted February 10, 2007 Report Posted February 10, 2007 AAAAAAAAAAAH! PLEASE UPDATE SOON, I'M JUST ADDICTED-I CAN'T STOP THINKING ABOUT IT!!!!! ITS AMAZING!!!! Quote
PINK Posted February 11, 2007 Report Posted February 11, 2007 Hey this is so good please update soon I really wanna find out what her flshback is!!! Quote
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