Linger (by bay girl) - comments

[Tasha]

Wow, great chappy Amber And yay, Martha got a happy memory

More please

[*J&M*]

Aww that was a great chapter bay girl Martha finally got a happy memory Update soon.

[beckyboo]

That was such a good chapter

But I cant believe you left it there

"It was only a memory, but it was a memory of which she craved more of……"

I loved that line. I mean come on who would not crave Jack Holden!

Update soon

[vale4eva]

Woohoo! That was a- may- zing!

I really love your fics, youve got a way of making it seem so real!

And Marthas finally remembering what is was like to be with Jack! Thank god! But what will she do now, im guessing shes going to do the whole 'pushing it to the side' routine. Why cant she just tell Jack so that he can give her a demonstration of what shes been missing!

I love their relationship at the moment, they have their really funny moments, but they also have those moments where its awkward. This makes really great reading!

I cant wait for the next chapter

And damit Martha, just give in already

[~Amy~]

She wants him bad, we all do. No Joey in that chapter. LOL.

Update soon.

[~Amy~]

She wants him bad, we all do. No Joey in that chapter. LOL.

Update soon.

[~Amy~]

She wants him bad, we all do. No Joey in that chapter. LOL.

Update soon.

[-Laura-]

Awww that was such a good chapter Amber! Im so glad Martha had a good memory! She definitely wants Jack bad now! Cant wait to see what happens next! Awesome writing! Update soon!

[puja]

I'm glad it was a good memory. Now; all we need is for Martha to act on this memory... prefably soon

I love Jack

More soon please!

[Nicom]

I actually have nothing to say.

It's just all and

Update soon! Hopefully next time I'll have words.