-Laura- Posted February 21, 2007 Report Posted February 21, 2007 Oh my gosh that was the nicest surprise when i clicked on here and there was another update! Awesome stuff! lol Great chapter Amber! Lucas is so adorable! Bless him! But not so sure about Brett! Hmmm! Well hoping for another update soon because i feel its going to be a good one with more memories for Martha! Yay! lol Great writing Amber! Quote
*J&M* Posted February 21, 2007 Report Posted February 21, 2007 Lucas is hilarious. Great chapter bay girl! I hope Brett's genuine. Update soon. Quote
>>Emma<< Posted February 21, 2007 Report Posted February 21, 2007 Woo another update! Fantabulous! Lucas is so funny! Brett isn't genuine... Martha has memories, hopefully more about Jack! Update soon, great chapter! Quote
vale4eva Posted February 21, 2007 Report Posted February 21, 2007 (edited) Bless Lucas, hes so funny! Im guessing Bretts evil, anyone that pops up on your doorstep out of no where usually has something to hide! Great chapter. Im loving these regular updates! I hope you can keep it up *sweet smile* Yay- more memories for Martha! Hope its Jack related! Edited February 21, 2007 by vale4eva Quote
gawguss_tiff Posted February 21, 2007 Report Posted February 21, 2007 Chapter 15: Damn Martha god just tell Jack you like him no no wait LOVE him and get back together with him already lol ooo i wonder whos at the door lol Chapter 16 : LMAO Luc is hilarious OMG that was sooooo funny lol ... aw i hope that this brett guy is nice and doesnt go back to being a complete Jackass although ive never seen the episodes on home and away with him on there... or hasnt there been any? lol well anyways great chapters huni i LOVED THEM UPDATE ASAP xoxox Quote
phize Posted February 22, 2007 Report Posted February 22, 2007 PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!! I CAN'T LIVE WITHOUT THIS FIC!!!!!!! HA HA!!!!!!! PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE UPDATE V V V V V V V V V SOON!!! Quote
katie343 Posted February 26, 2007 Report Posted February 26, 2007 “The guy is boring. He wasn’t even wearing a suit,” he muttered to himself. He then stood up and excused himself from the table. “I need to be alone,” he hung his head low. Jack and Martha broke into a fit of laughter. “What is up with him?” Martha giggled. “He likes shiny pretty things,” Jack laughed “And then gets disappointed when they aren’t as shiny or as pretty as he had expected,” he added. “Strange boy,” Martha pointed out. “Hmm,” Jack nodded in agreement. I loved that myabe he's a magpie they like bright shiny things Can't wait for more Quote
Tasha Posted February 26, 2007 Report Posted February 26, 2007 Yay, another memory, and one of my favs too Jack is hilarious, Luc and his coco pops I wonder what Bretts hiding. Great chapter as alwayz More please Quote
Adia Posted February 26, 2007 Report Posted February 26, 2007 That was a really awesome chapter! she knew that it would get done quicker if she went without Miss Piggy and Wilbur; otherwise known as Jack and Lucas. The dialogue was great as well! I really like how you've written Jack and Martha's emotions, it just seems really realistic for the situation! Can't wait to see more! Quote
vale4eva Posted February 26, 2007 Report Posted February 26, 2007 Awwwww! I thought Martha would remember that kiss when she was up there! Yay! Whenever she found him watching her, she wondered what he was thinking about. Was he thinking about ripping her clothes off? Was he picturing her naked? Was he desperately wishing that he could make love to her? It drove Martha insane. She hadn’t been able to look him directly in the eye since. I loved that^^ It made me laugh There was also the fact that Martha wouldn’t mind if he threw her down and made love to her right there on the spot Im sure alot of people wouldnt mind that Excellent writing, cant wait for the next one Quote
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