Tasha Posted March 1, 2007 Report Posted March 1, 2007 That bumhole. Its all his fault. I hate him i hate him so much. Poor Martha -big hug- Jack needs to give her a hug, he never does Great chapter though Amber More please Quote
-lolly- Posted March 1, 2007 Report Posted March 1, 2007 Wow. I really didn't see that one coming. What a creep i hope he gets thrown back into prison for what he's done. Great writing Amber, i love it how Jack's so protective of Martha, it's sweet Quote
Martha_Jack Posted March 1, 2007 Report Posted March 1, 2007 Thats was great how Jack kicked him out for Martha And now they know who did it to her. Update. Quote
Nicom Posted March 1, 2007 Report Posted March 1, 2007 Even I, the brilliant Nicole, did not see that one coming! So great though! I wonder what Jack's going to do... He won't be a happy chappy... Quote
puja Posted March 1, 2007 Report Posted March 1, 2007 Oooh, nice twist! Certainly didn't see that coming. Brett is a horrible, horrible man- and that's just putting it nicely. I wonder what happened??? I like an assertive Jack So, so cute! Please update soon. Quote
vale4eva Posted March 1, 2007 Report Posted March 1, 2007 Excellent chapter, totally didnt see that coming! What a pig! How dare he do that to Martha, or to anyone! He needs to be locked up! Im sure Jack will sort him out though! I really hope Jack comforts her and they get caught up in the moment and kiss! Pleeeeeeeease Amber *smiles sweetly* Looking forward to the next one Quote
linzie_mac01 Posted March 1, 2007 Report Posted March 1, 2007 Those last two chapters were absolutely fantabulous! I really loved the first kiss flash back *sigh* it seems like it was only yesterday when that happened, but yet they have both gone throught so much since then! I cannot believe you dropped that bomb shell on us about Brett so wasn't expecting it to be him, the creepy slimeball, and the cheek of him to come round and expect her forgiveness that he's changed! Urgh, didn't he realise that she would remember sooner or later? Please update soon, i'm actually really mad at Brett for this! Quote
-Laura- Posted March 1, 2007 Report Posted March 1, 2007 Well did not see that coming Amber! Am totally shocked and horrified at Brett! Grrr! What a horrible man! Poor Martha! As if things werent bad enough, now she has to deal with the fact that her own father put her in the coma which left her with severe memory loss! Grrr! Hope this brings her and Jack closer together though! Update soon Amber, tis awesome stuff! lol Quote
baby gurl Posted March 1, 2007 Report Posted March 1, 2007 That was great...Glad Jack wasn't being an idiot for once! (not like he is in this fic but in others he is!) Great chapter...update soon xx Quote
Martha_Jack Posted March 5, 2007 Report Posted March 5, 2007 How sweet that jack is there for her but how can Brett do that to her. Quote
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