Linger (by bay girl) - comments

[kaciexox]

Yay can't wait

[kaciexox]

Yay can't wait

[Sam =)]

Working on the next chapter now. It should be up soon.

Do we really want it?

I'm not liking the sound of Corey's mum.

[Nicom]

Working on the next chapter now. It should be up soon.

Do we really want it?

I'm not liking the sound of Corey's mum.

What are you talking about!? She sounds great!

Hush hush.

[Sam =)]

Omg I knew I didn't want to read this.

You can't kill Martha or put her in another coma.

Damn you Karen atleast Jacky will go looking for her and save her.

You can't leave it there, it's to mean.

[Tasha]

:o

Whats with everyone and wanting to kill Martha Please let her be ok, she doesnt need to be in hospital again

More please

[beckyboo]

Why

Why!!!!!!!!!

Poor Martha!!!!!!!!

I bet she dies and that was the last time Jack ever spoke to her!

Update ASAP

xxxxxx

[Nicom]

That was flippin brill! I loved it! I really did! I don't even get why! lol.

Your writing is just as great as usual... but I could really imagine what was going on. That was great Amber, really great.

The way she added "I love you"... straight away I knew that something bad would happen. It was like watching TV or a film.

Love it! That was great! She better not die though... Then it'd be crap. Maybe the crash will knock all her memories back into her. lol It may not be medically possible, but it is quite logical. One knock to the head took her thoughts away, the other put 'um back. lol. Could happen...

Update as soon as possible, please!

[*J&M*]

OMG! Martha That was a great chapter, update soon.

[vale4eva]

MMMMAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRTTTTTTTTTTHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAA!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

^^Becky stop being so negative! (just cause you like Jack and Sam )

Poor Martha I hope Jack saves her in time

More please