Tasha Posted June 28, 2007 Report Posted June 28, 2007 I hate this. Wheres my Jacky. I dont want a fic all about Martha moving on. I want my Jacky back
loulou170388 Posted June 28, 2007 Report Posted June 28, 2007 i'm really liking this! Look forward to an update soon
vale4eva Posted June 28, 2007 Report Posted June 28, 2007 Im not too sure whether im happy about this Im glad Martha's found someone, but I miss Jacky Update soon Bex
puja Posted June 29, 2007 Report Posted June 29, 2007 Aww, Tony's great so sweet. It still should be Martha Holden In a way, i want the date to go well because Martha does deserve to be happy but...what about Jack?! And yes, i know he's dead, but still... More soon please.
HeavenForbid Posted June 30, 2007 Report Posted June 30, 2007 Fab chapter! Love seening Martha happy :D Update soon
beckyboo Posted July 3, 2007 Report Posted July 3, 2007 Thanks guys! Martha and Rhys had been for a romantic dinner in Yabbie Creak. Martha had found out that Rhys had two daughters from a previous marriage, called Elle and Erin. Martha had explained to Rhys all about Jack’s death; whilst Rhys explained about his marriage breakdown; so far it looked like they were getting along really well. Martha was for once actually enjoying herself without the added guilt. “Well we’re here” Rhys said as he walked Martha to the door “So, are you going to come in for a night cap” she asked him “Nope, because I don’t want to rush this, but I really like you and want to see you again, if you agree that is” he said shyly “Me to. And yes, you can see me whenever you want” she smiled Rhys and Martha both leaned in for their first kiss; letting it linger for a while before breaking it off. “I’ll call you” he said grinning widely “Bye” she said biting her lip happily Martha opened the door walking inside; closing it behind her she rested her back against it, sighing contently. The next day Martha was wandering along the beach, ending up at Jacks grave “Hey, im sorry I haven’t been for 2 weeks, you no what the kids can be like” she sighed “Look, iv met someone Jack, and he’s a really nice guy, but I meant what I said I wont stop loving you until the last rose dies, and it never will Jack. But I also have to move on” she said as she got up and walked away Ava was sitting in Rachels apartment reading a magazine, when she saw an advertisement for a contest “Ohhhh Auntie Rach, I want to enter this” Ava said excitedly shoving the paper in her face “Australia’s biggest talent?” Rach said laughing “Yes I can sing” Ava said dreaming happily “Well, best to ask your mum sweetie” Rach said “Ask your mum what?” Martha said as she walked in “Hello mummy” “Hello sweetie” Martha replied kissing her eldest daughter “Well you see I want to take part in a competition, but I would have to sing for them to let me in, see, hang on” Ava said as she went to get the magazine “Ok here it is, I would have to sing for, Simon Cowell, Sharon Osborne and Leyton Hewitt” “You really want to do this” Martha asked her one last time “Oh yes mummy so much” “Ok then, you can” Ava ran to her mum hugging her tightly “Thank you, thank you” Ava kept repeating ……………………………. Rhys was sitting in his office on the phone talking quietly “no, she doesn’t know the real reason im here” he said down the phone “And she must never find out” the person on the other end said “Oh she wont, I can assure you of that” Rhys said as he hung up to ring Martha “Hello” she said “Hey babe, you want to meet up for lunch” “Oh I cant sorry, I have Ava” she replied regreatfully “Oh, ok bring her with you” he said “I can’t really, but how about you come over tonight for a drink tonight when their in bed” she said smiling down the phone “Perfect! See you at 8” Rhys said happily Preview…………. Whats Rhys secret?
puja Posted July 3, 2007 Report Posted July 3, 2007 Interesting choices of judges' Becky! What were you on about not being happy with the chapter; it was really good! Ava is a mature youngster isn't she? Hope she does well in her competition Rhys and Martha seem to be getting on quite well...not sure if i like that or not... This is getting really interesting; can't wait to read on! xx
Tasha Posted July 4, 2007 Report Posted July 4, 2007 Becky you suck I want Jacky Stupid Rhys. He is up to something and i dont like it. Die Rhys Die Ava in Australians Biggest Talent but Simon Cowell? You got 2 British celebs and only one Aussie? How does that make sense? You should have Dicko, Marcia Hindes and Mark Holden, the Aussie Idol Judges Or at least Dicko instead of Simon Cowell More please.
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