southsrock_123 Posted July 15, 2007 Report Posted July 15, 2007 No, it’s not,” Martha interrupted, “You have been here for me so much lately. Even before that with Corey. I have been selfish but you always hang around. I mean, I left you for your best friend. I never listened. Every time you warned me and every time I ignored you and told you to **** off. Every time you were right and every time I was wrong. And every single time, Jack you have been there for me and at the end I always swear that next time, next time I will listen to Jack and every time I end up making the same mistake again. And you make one tiny mistake and I get so mad at you. I’m sorry Jack.” That is quite right Martha you apologise for everything you put poor Jacky through. And now martha and Jack shall get together
vale4eva Posted July 15, 2007 Report Posted July 15, 2007 Great chapter Kacie. Aw, Jack and Martha are getting closer Theyll share a bed now Squeeeeeeeeeee lol Poor Geoff and annie More please
Tasha Posted July 17, 2007 Report Posted July 17, 2007 I thought there was an update I hope soon is very soon
kaciexox Posted July 17, 2007 Report Posted July 17, 2007 and update!!!!!! CHAPTER 7 Martha held open the door to her apartment and Jack, Geoff and Annie all walked in. Everyone was silent, no one felt like speaking. Martha motioned for Jack to go and get the spare mattress from under his bed and then she walked to the cupboard and pulled out some blankets. “Geoff you can sleep on the lounge,” Martha said softly, breaking the silence, “Annie, I’ll make a bed up for you on the floor. Annie and Geoff nodded sullenly. Jack emerged from his bedroom lugging the spare mattress over and plonked it on the floor next to the lounge. Silently but quickly Martha and Jack made up the beds while Annie and Geoff watched with blank, empty looks on their faces. “There you are,” Martha said gesturing to the beds. She gave each one of them a quick hug and told them she was there if they wanted to talk. Annie didn’t say anything but Geoff managed a small ‘thank you.’ Jack put his hand on Geoff shoulder. Jack and Martha said goodnight to them and started to walk to their own bedrooms. Suddenly Martha stopped and turned around. “I think your very brave,” she whispered. Geoff nodded at her, too upset to talk. Jack put his arm around Martha and Martha gave him a quick hug. “Thanks,” she whispered into his ear. “What for?” he whispered back. “For everything. I don’t think I could have done without you, I don’t think I could of watched those kids break down if you weren’t there.” “I’ll always be there,” Jack said softly, pushing a stray strand of her hair behind her ear. Martha shivered at his touch. “I know,” she said, “I know.” ****** Brad jumped out of his car and was about to run into the house when his heart fell. There was her car, parked across the street. She still had the same car, even after 6 years. It had changed a bit but he still recognized it. He took a deep breath and entered the house. There sitting on the lounge was Sally, Jenny, Pippa (who was sitting on Sally’s lap) and another child who looked alarmingly like brad himself. “Brad,” Sally said jumping up and giving Brad a quick kiss, “Where have you been I was worried sick.” “Um, just down the bar,” Brad replied taking Pippa from Sally’s arms and giving her a quick kiss on the top of her head. “Jenny has been here waiting for you, I told her to stay because I thought you’d be home soon.” “If I’d known she’d be here I would have got home earlier,” Brad said throwing Jenny a dirty look which Sally thankfully did not see. Sally turned to Jenny. “I’m sorry to be rude, but who are you?” Jenny raised an eyebrow at Brad, he glared at her. “Maybe Brad would like to tell you,” Jenny hinted. Brad rolled his eyes. “Maybe I would like, you to leave and never come back,” Brad said. “I told you that’s not going to happen,” Jenny said, “If you don’t tell her I will.” Brad shook his head. “Get out!” Sally looked from Brad to Jenny. “Would someone care to tell me what’s wrong?” Sally said. Brad remained silent, this wasn’t how he wanted Sally to know. “Brad!” Sally exclaimed. “Brad is,” Jenny spoke up, “my ex-husband and this is my son,” she stopped, “our son.” she corrected herself, “Corey. And I’m leaving him with Brad.” PLEASE RATE AND REVIEW
Alicia-jade Posted July 17, 2007 Report Posted July 17, 2007 That update was really good. I want to read another!! 10/10 Hopefully you will be able to update sooonnn
vale4eva Posted July 17, 2007 Report Posted July 17, 2007 Corey? Great chapter But I wanted Martha and Jack to sleep in the same room Kacie Pleeeease update soon
kaciexox Posted July 17, 2007 Report Posted July 17, 2007 DOn't worry Corey is a completly harmless 6 year old and Martha and JACk........... stay tuned
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