Revenge And The City (by Cal) - comments

[*caitie*]

eeeek!!lucas please be alright!!!what if lucas isn't there, what if she like, took him to ummm, paris, while he was asleep (or unconcious, whatever you would like to call it) and thats where he woke up

"now, for a little bit of fun..." that doesn't sound too good, whats she up to

[Oxidizer]

That might just be what Psycho Sarah's plan is - harm Luc to get back at Ric - after all, he was present when the car went over the edge. Maybe she saw or something?

Ooh! I just came up with my first theory.

[Cerise]

Ee! This Fic is awesome. Even more so that it's Ricas. Yay Love the Song btw.

I wonder what Sarah's up to. Update very soon Cal

Oh ****, breaks over. Gotta get back to my Exams

[Cal]

Thanks, Guys!

I just noticed a line that made NO sense whatsoever. "Luc's speech successfully spoke. " Fixed.

[Oxidizer]

I made a similiar typo like that once myself. I was like WTF?

[Oxidizer]

Sarah looked at them being cuddly, "God, get off him! You've got a gun pointing at you and all you can do is be horny!"

That was a crack up!

Awesome, awesome chapter. Seriously can't wait to see what Psycho Sarah's up to next - especially with her scalpel throwing antics.

[Roccoluver]

Sarah must hurt or kill any of them, okay

Great update, Poor Ricus

[Oxidizer]

I like how Ric's protective and caring over Luc. Why can't the writer monkeys make them a couple? It's completely doable.

[-Andrew-]

WOW, fantastic fic and its a rarity that I am compelled to read on, thanks

[Cal]

Thanks, Guys.