xsianx Posted July 19, 2006 Report Posted July 19, 2006 WOW just so wow!! Omg! Ididnt think Martha would die that was a good twist but then you put Jack in the loony bin. They were such good twists in the storyline and I must admit Ihad teary eyes when Martha died and when Jack told his dad to keep his side of the deal. I was really hoping for a happy end but that is such a good ending and you handled the whole rape storyline really well and with sensitivity. This has been an ecallent fic thank you for writing it xxx Quote
Jamey-Maria Posted July 19, 2006 Report Posted July 19, 2006 (edited) I'll go through the good first Your writing has been amazing througout the whole story and you certainley kept me on my toes. You handled very sensitive issues extremley well and you made me cry after some particular chapters. Now...... what the hell are you thinking?! Putting ME Jack and Martha through that!!! I wanted to hit Jack, i seriously wanted to slap him across the face when he was asking Martha for another chance, all he was talking about was himself, and i thought how selfish! But then..... then you go and make him a loony, but he's not really, he just misses the love of his life. :( *sobs* I should of known that the title was going to come back. *sobs* I hope you write more fics as you are very talented but please, don't let them end like that. Otherwise that was brilliant! Edited July 20, 2006 by jacknmarthaluver Quote
linzie_mac01 Posted July 19, 2006 Report Posted July 19, 2006 This fic has been sensitively written right from the beginning, you did great to control and lead such an intense storyline! The ending was completely unexpected and in a sad way it fitted the rest of the fic, even though I am now falling into the depths of depression, it was good to have a unique change from all the happy endings. Quote
Jacksthehottest Posted July 20, 2006 Report Posted July 20, 2006 wow. i would have never expected that, omg i can't believe Martha died, poor Jack, even though i don't like sad endings that was well written and i have to say you are a great writer, not just for the last chapter but for the whole fic, i hope you write more fics because you are talented and i enjoyed reading it Quote
lollipop_lover11 Posted July 20, 2006 Report Posted July 20, 2006 Wow! That was an unexpected ending, not bed just unexpected. The story was very well written but it was sad to see Jack go crazy. Brilliant story. Quote
katie343 Posted July 20, 2006 Report Posted July 20, 2006 I don't want it to end *sniffs and shuffles over ot the corner to cry* Good work it was great. Quote
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