You Look, But You Don't See

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How many distasters did they have on the way to that prom!

Billiant as usual!!

Jack in a tux

Kim helped them!

Hmmm is he feeling alright...?

More please

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[Barbara]

Chapter 29

Jack and Martha are back together. They finally had a perfect date even if Jack ruined the lasagna.

Tasha and Robbie's date was perfect too.

Glad Jack finally told Kim he didn't want to be friends anymore.

Chapter 30

Love Macca and Martha's relationship. Giving her their mother's dress was so nice of him.

Poor Jack and Martha! Could anything more have gone wrong on their way to the prom? Glad they finally made it.

Can't believe Kim is helping them.

More please.

[pamy]

Chapter 31: graduation

She was verry nervous. She looked in the mirror. She was wearing a blue dress and her hair was in curls. Today it was her graduation day. Her brothers would arrive any minute now. She was nervous but also sad. This was the one day she had wanted to share with her parents. Tears appeared in her eyes but she didn't want to cry. She knew they would have wanted her to be happy.

Jack walked around the room. He was as nervous as you could possibly get. This was it. Their graduation. He had waited for this day for years and now that it was here he felt kind of sad. It meant that his high school days were over. It meant that he and Martha wouldn't be in the same class next year as they went to college. He sighed. He had to admit that what made him feel the worse was the fact that Kim was not his friend annymore. He closed his eyes. Kim had stopped being his friend the day he changed. But he couldn't help but think he had given up on him.

Tasha looked in the mirror. She knew that just outside Irene was standing waiting for her. She looked in the mirror again. Her graduation day. High school was finally over. It meant no more school, at least not for her. College had never been someting she had concidered. But she was with Robbie now and she had to admit ever since she had started to date him she had thought about college. She smiled when she heard her brothers voice come from outside.

Robbie heard his brother and sister bicker outside. He didn't know what was going on, probably somehting stupid. He looked around the room to make sure he hadn't forgotten something. Graduation day. He had never thought he would get here. Let alone that by the time he got to this moment Tasha Andrews would be his girlfriend. He smiled. Time to go.

1 hour later

Martha was wearing the blue sort of dress over her clothes. She looked around. Searching for her friends. Searching for Jack. Two strong hands grabbed her and pulled her backwards. She turned around. Jack. She smiled she had know since the moment he grabbed her. She never felt safer then with his arms around her. They turned around when they heard their friends approach. The four of them were laughing and making fun.

Kim stood in the corner of the room looking at them. He felt a sting in his hearth when he saw his former best friend standing there. It was as if Jack didn't care about anything anymore. Like all those years of friendship meant nothing. It was true he had not been the best of friend. But you just don't trow a friendship away do you? Slowely it begin to dawn to him that maybe by attacking Martha he had gone to far. If only he had never been so stupid.

Carla saw Kim looking at Jack and felt bad. Somehow she felt guilty, she knew it wasn't her fault that Kim was like this. But maybe if she had never cheated on him he would have gotten back to acting normally. He wouldn't have gotten this far off track. Yet she had seen him change over the year. His only problem that in fear of losing his best friend he had attempted to hurt the one person he thought was keeping Jack away from him. Martha. And in doing so he had lost his best friend. The cruel irony of life.

'We almost have to go.' Jack smiled at Martha. She looked nervous. They all were nervous. Robbie laughed. 'I just got to aks. Who was the genious who came up with these clothes? I mean come on I am wearing a dress!' Jack burst out in laughter. Tasha and Martha laughed to. 'Seriously. Think about it, especially as a dude, do you want to be wearing a dress or this hat the day you know people will make pictures of you? WHo's bright idea was this?' Nobody answered his question. The only answer he got was laughter. He didn't mind.

'Natasha Andrews!' Tasha got up and walked to the front. She had never thought this moment would come. It had taken so long to actually get here. Let alone get her degree. She looked around. She saw everybody clapping. Her eyes looked for one person though. Robbie. Ok. Maybe she looked for Dylan to. Smilling she got of the stage.

'Jack Holden!' Jack got up and walked on the stage. He saw everybody cheering and clapping. He knew that everybody knew him. When he got his degree he looked at the crowd. In the back sat his dad and his brother. His eyes searched for Martha. He saw her smile at him. His eyes kept going over the crowd and finally rested on Kim. How did they get this far? How?

'Robbie Hunter!' Robbie walked to the stage. The people that were clapping now did it out of politness. THe truth was that people only knew him because he was Tasha's boyfriend. He looked at the back. His mum, Matilda, Henry, Kit, Scott and suprisenly Dani were clapping and screaming. He smiled. He didn't need anything else.

'Kim Hyde!' Kim walked to the stage. He had always thought this would be one of the best days of his life. But he had lost. He had played a dangerous game and he had lost. And the coust had been his best friend. Maybe he could ever win him over. Maybe. His eyes rested on Jack. Jack didn't look back.

'Carla Lewis.' Carla walked on the stage. She was happy. High school was finally over. She looked at the crowd. Her friends were cheering. Even the cheerleaders were. Her biggest suprise came when she saw Kim cheer and clap. Maybe there was hope for him after all.

'Martha Mackenzie!' Martha got up and walked up the stage. High school was over. It seemed weird. She had always thougt she would graduate in queensland. Instead she did it here. At summer Bay high. She looked at the crowd. She saw Tasha and Robbie. She saw Carla. Her eyes rested on Jack and he smiled at her. Her eyes kept looking and finally found her brothers. They loved her she was sure of it.

And then she saw somthing in the back. She never told anyone. She wans't even sure if what she saw had been real. Maybe it had been a figment of her imagination. But she liked to believe it was truth. There in the back stood her parents. Smiling at her. Martha smiled back. When she blinked they were gone. Forever. A single tear rolled over her cheek.

[Barbara]

I just reviewed two chapters and I already get an update! I'm happy!

They all graduated. Congratulations!

Hope Kim is going to change now.

Martha's parents are watching over her. They'll always be around, especially on special occasions.

More please.

[pamy]

Chapter 32: I love you

They were sitting down. Finally all the names had been called. Finally it was over. Everybody jumped up and started to scream. All the hats flew in the air. Everybody smiled. Everybody was happy. Martha cheered to. But somehow she felt bad to. The fact that her parents weren't there hit her more today then any other days. But she was happy to.

Jack trew his hat in the air. He looked around. He saw Martha standing there. He smiled. She looked happy but he could see she wasn't. She smiled at him but he could see it in her eyes. He walked to her and put his arms around her. He didn't know if that would make her feel better. But he could try.

Tasha smiled at Robbie. She had tried so hard not to laugh. But he had just fallen of his chair. She put her arms around him. Soflty she placed a kiss on his lips. She was perfectly happy. Robbie kissed her back. This had been what he always wanted. He would be gratefull to that teacher forever. He smiled.

Martha turned around and placed her head on Jack's chest. She felt better. She smiled at him. 'Hey. It's ok.' 'Jack. I...' He smiled and kissed her softly. She kissed him back. They got lost in the moment. It was as if they were the only ones on the planet. It was a magical moment. 'Hey. Who the hell are you?' Jack backed up and practicly jumped up. 'Macca!' Martha smiled at her big brother. She knew he was just messing with their heads. But Jack didn't. 'Should I run for it?' He whispered so soflty that only Martha could hear him. She smiled. 'Relax.'

'So do you have a name? Or should I just call you 'the dude I catched kissing my little sister?' 'I'm Jack.' Macca took his hand and shook it. 'Macca. This is George and that's my little brother Brian.' 'Nice to meet you.' Martha smiled and hughed her brothers. Everything was going to be alright now.

1 hour later

Every student of summer bay high was standing on the beach. Nobody knew who's idea it had been but someone had decided to trow a party. Robbie was mocking around with his brothers and sisters. All while keeping Tasha very close to him. Yeah, he was happy now.

Tasha was having so much fun with Robbie and his family. She had never thougth that his entier family could be as crazy as he was. She and Robbie had gotten the scare of their lifes when they had cought Beth and Tony kissing. But once they were over the shock, Robbie said that they'd be good together.

Martha was sitting with her brothers. Jack had been sitting with them till about a minute ago, but he had decided to go to his brother and father. She was happy. Her big brother George was talking about his newest girlfriend. Brian had brought the dog who was now running around on the beach. And Macca wanted to know everything about Jack. She was so happy. She felt so good with her family and her boyfriend close by.

Jack looked at Martha. He had never seen her so happy then with her brothers around. He smiled. He liked it when she was happy. He looked at his dad and Beth. It had not really come as a shock. His brother had cought them last week. He smiled. 'Jack.' He heard a soft voice behind him. He turned around. 'Hyde.' He debated if he should walk away. He decided it couldn't hurt to stay there for a couple of minutes. It was their graduation day after all.

'Hey. I know you're still mad at me but...' 'No excuses. Just say what you want to say and then leave me alone.' 'I'm sorry. I really am. I never thought I would lose you?' 'What did you think was going to happen. That I was going to find out jump up and scream Halleluja? Not likely to happen.' 'I know. It was stupid. Please.' 'Don't beg. It doesn't suit you.' 'Just listen to me.' 'No. I'm done listen to your stupid excuses. I just...' 'We've been friends for so long.' 'You should have thought of that sooner. Look I don't want to fight with you right now. In fact you're not worthed me gettin upset over.' 'Jack...' 'No. Not this time.' Jack turned around and started to walk away. 'Jack.' 'What.' 'Congratulations. You graduated.' 'You to. Congratulations. Goodbye Kim.'

Martha had seen the entier conversation between Jack and Kim. She saw Jack sit down close to the ocean. 'I'll be right back.' 'Ok. Don't be long.' Martha walked to Jack and sat down beside him. 'Hey. you ok?' 'I'm fine.' He smiled at Martha and felt her put her arm around him. 'You miss him don't you?' 'I never thougth I would actually miss Kim Hyde. Who would have thought.' Martha looked at him she wished she could do something.

She smiled at him and placed a soft kiss on his cheek. He turned to her and softly kissed her back. He smiled. Martha looked at him and smiled. She had to say it. 'I love you.' Jack stared at her. Confused. He really didn't know what to say. He really didn't know. 'I...I...euhm...' He couldn't get anything else out. 'It's ok. You don't have to say aynthing. I just. I thought I should. But it's ok.' 'It's not that I don't...it's just I don't really know....I just want to be sure when I tell you...That way I won't say something I regret later' He paused and smiled. 'Ok. That came out so wrong. It was supposed to sound more...' 'It's ok. Really. Let's go back to the others.'

[pamy]

Chapter 33: Last chance

Jack opened his eyes when he heard the birds sing. He hadn't slept really good. He turned around in his bed. The conversation with Martha kept going trough his head. She had told him it didn't matter but he felt she was just telling him that so he wouldn't feel bad. He really did care about her. He really did love her. He just wanted it to be the perfect moment when he told her.

Martha opened her eyes and looked around. She smiled. She had told Jack what she felt yesterday, and although he really didn't know what to say, she knew he felt something for her. Maybe it wasn't love yet but it was definitly going that way. She got up and walked to the living room. She knew Brian was sleeping in Morags room. Her two other brothers were sleeping in the living room. Everything would be alright now.

Jack stood on the beach all alone. He was looking at his dad and brother who were surfing. It didn't happen a lot but today he really hadn't felt like surfing. He was still thinking about that godamn conversation with martha. If he had just gotten out of his words better. He smiled. At least she knew that he was just like that. He needed a little time.

Kim stood on the beach. He looked at Jack. He knew that Jack was mad at him and would probably never forgive him. But he neede to talk to him right now. 'Jack.' Jack turned around and saw Kim. He sighed. He really didn't feel like talking to him right now. 'leave me alone.' 'Two minutes. Just two minutes.' Jack sighed. He looked at him. 'Talk.' 'You know what tomorow is?' 'Your birthday.' 'I didn't think you'd remember.' 'You've been my best friend for thirteen years of course I remember your birthday.' 'Well I'm holding a party tomorow. And. You've always been there. I just...' 'You're invinting me to your birtday party?' 'And Martha to of course.' He sighed. 'I don't know...I'll think about it.' 'Ok.'

Martha was waving at her brothers who wer riding out of town. She had known they couldn't stay long but she didn't want them to go. There was nothing she could do about it. She turned around and started to walk away. The car was long gone. She smiled when she saw Jack sitting on the beach. 'Hey. What's wrong.' 'Kim.' 'What did he do?' 'It's his birthday tomorow. He invited me to his birthday party...you to by the way.' 'You want to go.' 'I don't know. He's...I've never missed one of his birthdays. But he doens't really deserve my friendship. He doesn't.' 'Maybe he has changed. I mean he's had months to think about this. Maybe he has changed. Maybe he really wants to make things better.' 'You think I should go.' 'Yeah. But I'm going with you.'

Jack walked to Kim. Better to get it out of him at once. 'Hey.' 'Hey.' 'Look...I've thought about it...Martha can come to right?' 'Of course.' 'And Tasha and Robbie.' 'Invited as well.' 'Fine. I'll be there. Tomorow your place at ?' 'Eight. Thank you.' Jack turned around and started to walk away. He stopped when he heard Kim call out his name. 'What.' 'I'm sorry. Your my best friend. I'm really sorry. Give me another change. Just one. Please.' Jack looked at him. He had been his best friend for so long. Maybe he should give him another chance. He seemed different. But he always seemed different. But thinking about it...you can't just trow thirteen years of friendship away without trying can you? He sighed. 'Fine. But this is your last chance Kim. Don't ruin it.'

The next night

Jack and Martha stood in front of Kim's house. Tasha and Robbie were just arriving. He looked at the house. He had been here so many times, yet it felt so wrong to stand here. Like he would do something wrong. He sighed. It was just his imagination. Kim really seemed to want to try. Martha looked at Jack. She knew he was nervous, worried, but she wanted to let him know everything was going to be alright. She took his hand and smiled at him. Everything was going to be alright.

1 hour later

Kim was sitting on the couch. He was looking at the crowd. There were many people there, but he was looking for Jack. He saw him standing there with Martha, Robbie and Tasha, apparently having the time of his life. He sighed. Those were his new best friends. Ever since he had met them, he didn't seem to exist anymore. He sighed. He knew he deserved it. But he just wanted his friend back.

Jack looked up and saw Kim sitting on the couch. He sighed. He had come here to give him another chance. Maybe he should go talk to him. 'I'll be right back.' He whispered in Martha's ear. Martha looked at Kim and smiled. 'you want me to come with you?' 'No. Not really. I mean. I think I just.' 'I know.' She placed a soft kiss on his cheek and smiled. 'Go.'

Jack sat down nex to Kim. For a while he said nothing. He was hoping Kim would start the conversation. He really had no idea what to say. Kim seemed to be having the same problem because he said nothing. 'Nice turn up.' 'Yeah. Never thougth I knew this many people.' 'Hey. You're Kim Hyde. Everybody knows you. It's you that doesn't know them.' Jack said it. As soon as it came out he regretted it. Just a little. It had come out a lot harsher then he intended. Kim looked at him but said nothing. He deserved it. 'Plus it's a party. Their teenagers. They like parties.' 'She seems very nice.' 'What?' 'Martha.' 'She is. Look. I know that I'm not really being nice right now but, it's not going to get better over night. It needs some time.' 'I know.'

4 hours later

Martha ran out of the house crying. What Kim had said had hurted her a lot. He hadn't really meant it as a bad thing. But it had hurted her just the same. She knew that he was drunk. When your drunk you say and do a lot of stupid things. She remembered that she took a shower with her clothes on. But it hurted. What he had said had really hurted her.

Jack ran out of the house after her. He couldn't believe Kim had actually said that. Ok it wasn't really an insult. But it had hurted her just the same. He should have never brought her there. Kim was bad luck. Even when he was trying to be nice. He ran after her and stopped in front of her. She was crying. He hated seeing her so upset. 'I'm sorry. I should have never brought you there. Never.' Jack put his arms around her and pulled her closer to him. He placed a soft kiss on her head.

She felt his hearth beat. Tears were rolling down her cheeks. She never wanted him to let her go. He pulled her closer to him. If she felt better when he was close to her he would make sure he was close to her. He would do everything for her. He placed a soft kiss on her hair again.

[pamy]

chapter 34: over

He opened his eyes. His head was hurting like hell. He moved around a little and tried to get up. The sudden movement made his head spin. Quickly he lied back down. After a couple of seconds he tried to sit back up. He looked around the messy room. Suddenly he remembered his party from last night.

'Kim. You're awake.' 'Carla?' 'You feeling better?' 'What are you doing here?' 'You were pretty drunk last night? You remember what happened?' Kim shook his head and got up. 'Tell me I did nothing stupid.' 'Wish I could.' Kim looked at her. He didn't need her to go on. 'Tell me I did nothing to screw up my last chance. Tell me I did nothing to Martha.' 'I can't. I don't know what you did, but whatever it was you upset her. She ran out crying.' 'Oh god. Kill me please.' Kim fell back down his head in his hands. 'You really don't remember do you? Well here's the good news. If you run into Jack he might actually kill you.'

Jack turned around. He opened his eyes. He looked at the clock next to his bed. It was early, like six in the morning. He turned around again. Closing his eyes he tried to sleep. He couldn't. He sat up trying not to remember anything. He still couldn't believe this had happened. This was all his fault. He should have never given Kim another chance. He lied back down. Closing his eyes he remembered something. Something that happened manny years ago.

Martha walked around the kitchen. She picked up her glass of water and sat down on the couch. She tried to forget everything. She had told Jack that he should give Kim another chance. She wished she hadn't. A part of her was telling her that Kim had been drunk. You do stupid things when your drunk. She knew that. But the problem with Kim was that he had done to many stupid things already. She shook her head. She guessed it was a good thing Jack didn't know what Kim had done the last time he was drunk.

Tasha fell down on her couch. This was unbelievable. Just when you think that Kim is going down the right track, he does something like this to **** everyone off. She shook her head. She had only met Kim a couple of years ago. He had seemed so nice. But he changed over the years. At first she had thought it had something to do with his mother. But she had been so wrong.

Robbie was looking at the prom picture and the graduation pictures he got yesterday. He smiled when he saw how happy they were. He couldn't believe that this was happening. Why was Kim like this? He had to have a reason. No person is just like this for no reason. It didn't really matter. He looked at the picture of him and Tasha. He still couldn't believe they were actually together.

Jack stood on the beach staring at the ocean. He wasn't really awake. After he had woken up this morning he hadn't been able to get back to sleep. He closed his eyes. 'Holden.' He heard a soft voice come from his right. Opening his eyes he saw Kim standing there. 'Get away from me.' 'Jack listen to me.' 'No.' 'Look I don't know what I did last night. I can't really remember. But I was drunk and whatever it was I was really sorry. But it was...I was drunk it wasn't my fault.'

Jack looked at Kim in disbelief. He couldn't believe he was actually trying to defend himself. He shook his head. 'That's it. You were drunk. That's all you have to say for yourself?' 'Listen to me man. Whatever I said to her, I didn't mean it. I was drunk. Look it's not even as bad as the last time...' Kim stopped. ****. That had been stupid. 'The last time? You mean when you got her drunk on the trip? What did you do to her?' 'I. I was drunk. I thought she was getting you away from me. I wanted her gone. I thought if you would see it then you would want nothing to do with her. It was obvious you liked her even for me. You were the only one who didn't see it. I didn't think it would...' Jack was getting impatient. 'What did you do to her?' 'I got her drunk with the intention of making her want to...' 'Sleep with you.' Jack shook his head. 'I got her into the hallway away from everybody. Then I started kissing her. But she didn't want to, she really didn't, so I let her get away.' Jack shook his head again. He was trying his best to remain calm. But he couldn't. He hit Kim again. Hard. That was the third time this year he hit him. Not good.

He started to walk away, but was stopped by Kim once again. 'Listen to me. Please. I'm so sorry.' Jack looked at him. He couldn't believe he had ever considered giving him another chance. He didn't deserve it. 'Get away from me. It's over. Our friendship is over. Never come back. Because the next time I see you, I might actually kill you.'

Jack walked away from Kim. He didn't look back not once. He saw Martha standing with his back to him. Staring at the ocean. He put his arms around her weist and pulled her close to him. He placed a soft kiss on her hair while she rested her haid on his chest. This was perfect.

[Barbara]

3 chapters again!

Martha loves Jack and he loves her too even if he can't say it yet. How sweet!

Jack gave Kim one last chance and he ruined it. And he makes it even worse by teling him about what happened on their trip. He'd better stay away from Jack and Martha.

Maybe Carla can help him be nice again. She seems to be around Kim a lot and she is nice.

More please.

[pamy]

Chapter 35: Silence

A month has passed since Kim's birthday party. Jack hasn't talked to him since. He still misses him. But he is not willing to be friends with him again. Not after everything that happened. He looks at Martha. He smiles. He loves her. One day he will tell her. When the perfect moment comes by.

Martha sees Jack smile at him and she feels her inside melt. He always manages to do that. She's still suprised that he can have so much power over her, just by smiling to her. She smiled back. This was perfect. She felt great with Jack by her side. Like she could take on the entier world. She hoped this feeling would never end.

Tasha laughed. Robbie was lying in the dust before her. He had tried to do something crazy again, but it had backfired and now he was lying on the ground. She couldn't help it. She was laughing with him. He was so funny. God. She was so greatfull for being with him. She loved him.

Robbie fell hard on the ground. That hurted a lot. He looked up and saw Tasha standing in front of him. Great. Just what he needed. His girlfriend to see him like this. She was laughing. He felt better, she wasn't laughing with him. Not really anyway. Smiling he jumped up and kissed her. This was perfect.

Kim was sitting all alone at the table. He had not gone close to any of them for a month. He just wanted his best friend back. It's true what they say, you don't know what you have untill you've lost it. 'Hey. What you doing here all alone?' Kim looked up. Carla. He used to hate her. But over the last month he has come to appreciate her a lot. He smiles. 'Hey. Just thinking. I really screwed up didn't I?' 'Yeah.' 'I'm not getting him back am I?' 'I think you're going to need a miracle for that one. A big one.' Kim sighed and looked trough the room. 'Look. I know you didn't really mean to do it. But I tried to warn you. Jack wasn't going to give you chances forever. You know that.' 'Yeah. Just wish I had realised that sooner. I guess it's my own dum faul anyway.' 'Why?' 'Well I told him I kissed Martha.' Carla laughed. 'That's just stupid. There's no other word for it.' 'Tell me about it.'

Jack had his arm around Martha's shoulder. Robbie and Tasha were walking next to them. 'I'm telling you that was one boring movie.' 'You don't have to tell me. I was there to remember!' 'What are you talking about.' Martha looked at him in disbelief. 'It was a beautiful.' 'Well of course you think it was beautiful it was a romantic movie. You like those.' 'Well I liked it to.' Tasha smiled. 'Well duh, you're a girl. Girls like romantic movies. Plus it's a movie with Orlando Bloom. I mean you like those.' 'Well I'm sorry. I loved the movie. It was like Martha said beautiful.' 'Give it up mate. We're not going to win this one.' 'Oh.' Martha placed a soft kiss on Jack's lips. 'Tell you what. You two can pick the movie next time.'

Jack was driving. Everytime he looked in the mirror he saw Martha sit behind him. She smiled at him. Yeah he was happy. He had never been so happy before. He smiled. Martha saw Jack smile and felt great. This had been what she always wanted. This was great. She was so happy. Nothing could ruin it.

Tasha looked at Robbie. He was sitting next to Jack. They were arguining about the music. She smiled. Robbie was crazy. So was she. They fitted perfectly together. She loved it. Robbie turned around and smiled at Tasha. Beggin her to go along with his choice. She smiled at him. She loves him. And he loves her. Nohting could ruin their lifes anymore. Kim wouldn't dare.

'No come on mate. Turn that song of.' 'Hell no Jack, I like it.' Martha laughed. 'I'll settle it.' She changed it to another station. 'Yeah. That one.' Tasha smiled at Martha. Perfect. Jack laughed. 'Come on girls.' 'No.This one. No arguments.' 'You caved. I can't believe you caved that easily mate.' Jack laughed. Suddenly he stopped. 'What the hell?'

Jack looked trought the window. That was not good. A car was coming directly for them without slowing down. Not good. Martha looked to. That was weird. What the hell was the car doing? Tasha looked so worried. She didn't want to say it out loud. It was Robbie who said it out loud. 'Ok. What is he doing?' 'I don't know. But it's not good.' 'Hey he's going faster. Jack watch out!'

Jack turned the wheel. Trying to get away from the car. He wasn't fast enough. The car hit them anyway. He tried to stop the car but it wouldn't stop. The car spinned out of controle. He could hear Martha scream. He wanted to take her hand and make her feel better. But he couldn't. She was to far away. He felt his hearth break. He would never be able to tell her he loves her. Never.

Martha screamed. The car spinned out of controle. She wanted Jack to hold her. To tell her everything was going to be alright. But nothing was going to be alright. There was no time for anything. She closed her eyes. Was this the end?

Tasha felt the car spin and she screamed. In the distance she could hear Martha scream to. She wanted to hold Robbie. She wanted to tell him she loved him. But it was to late. For that and for everything else.

Robbie didn't scream. It was as if he had no voice anymore. He could hear Tasha scream. He wanted to calm her down. But there was nothing he could do or say. He closed his eyes. This couldn't be the end could it?

The car spinned out of controle of the road. Eventually the car hit a three and spinned some more. Ending with it's four wheels in the air. For Martha, Jack, Tasha and Robbie there was only darkness.

Kim walked to his car. He wanted to go home. There was nothing he could do here. Not without his friends. 'Hey Kim.' 'Carla? What?' 'Euhm. Ok. The last bus just left. I've got no ride home.' Kim looked at her. It was weird. Once he would have laughed it off and told her it didn't matter anymore. But somehow it mattered. 'Get in the car.' They rode off in complete silence. Mainly because they didn't know what to say. Kim looked in the distance. He could see fire. That was not a good sign.

Martha's head hurted. Actually everything hurted. Slowely she started to realise that that was a good thing. If she was in pain that meant that she was alive. And if she was alive she could open her eyes. Slowely she opened them. She was upside down. Slowely she looked around.

Tasha opened her eyes when she heard a voice say her name. 'Martha?' 'Yeah. You ok?' Tasha tried to move and screamed out in pain. Everything was hurting. Her ribs. Her shoulder. Her arm. She looked at her arm. She was covered in blood. Beside her she could hear Martha scream in pain to. This was not going to end well.

'What is that?' Carla looked out of her window. 'I don't know. Maybe a car crash.' 'Let's go see. Maybe we can help.' Kim nodded but said nothing. This was not good. Slowely he put his car to a stop and walked out. 'Wait is that...' 'Jack. Do you have a cellphone Carla?' 'Yeah.' Call 911. Now.' But Carla didn't need him to say anything she was already dialing. Without thinking about it Kim ran to the car.

Kim started pulling at one of the doors. He was suprised at how easily it came off. 'Hey. Martha.' Martha looked at Kim in surprise. She was suprised to see him, but she was also happy to see him. Mainly she was happy to see help. 'You ok?' 'My leg.' Kim looked at her legs. Her left leg was covered in blood. There was no way she could walk on it. 'Ok. Calm down I'll get you out.' Kim slowely got her out of the car and ran away from it. He put her down and ran back to the car. He was back in three seconds with Tasha.

Kim opened the passagers door. Robbie was still unconscious. He tried screaming at him, but there was no movement. No matter what he tried Robbie wouldn't wake up. It took him a long time to get Robbie out of the car. Nobody noticed the flam that was coming dangerously close to the gas of the car. After a while Kim had dragged Robbie to where Martha and Tasha already were.

Tasha crawled towards Robbie and tried to wake him up. He wouldn't wake up. He couldn't be dead. He couldn't be dying. She needed him. She loved him. She placed a soft kiss on his forehead. 'Wake up. Please. Wake up.'

Martha looked at Tasha and felt her pain. But right now all she cared about was Jack. He wasn't there yet. She wanted to see him. Feel him close to her. She wanted to know he was going to be ok. A sudden explosion made them all jump up. The car burst out into flames.

The flames of the car gave everything around her a golden shine. As if things were great. No. This couldn't be happening. Jack was still in that car. Kim was still in that car. Carla dropped the phone on the floor. Tasha burried her face in Robbie's clothes. Martha sat there in shock for a couple of seconds. Then she screamed. 'JAAAAAAAAAAAAAACCCCCCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!'

But all that followed was a deafening silence....

[Barbara]

OMG! There were in a car accident.

Kim has changed a little. He's giving Carla a ride and he's rescuing the others.

Hope Robbie is going to wake up soon.

An explosion! Jack and Kim are still in the car. They can't die!

More please.