Barbara Posted December 18, 2007 Report Posted December 18, 2007 I’m way too nice to you, because here’s another chapter I have a feeling that you’re going to dislike me soon Yes you're nice to us, that's why we like you. Although after reading this chapter, I'm not so sure. Martha better be ok! The gorilla... I thought that was funny lol. A man with too hairy arms, that's gross! I loved the dream until Martha died. It'd better not be a sign! Jack's in love. Tony's reaction... I hope the police will find her in time. Martha'll probably be even more scared than before. More please.
valli Posted December 18, 2007 Report Posted December 18, 2007 I’m way too nice to you, because here’s another chapter I have a feeling that you’re going to dislike me soon Yes you're nice to us, that's why we like you. Although after reading this chapter, I'm not so sure. Martha better be ok! Aww you like me Well, at least for now. Without giving away too much, when I said that you're going to dislike me, I wasn't talking about this chapter, but the next
Barbara Posted December 18, 2007 Report Posted December 18, 2007 So it's going to get even worse. That's just great!
valli Posted December 18, 2007 Report Posted December 18, 2007 So it's going to get even worse. That's just great! It's going to get much worse...I'm just very evil, right?
Barbara Posted December 18, 2007 Report Posted December 18, 2007 You're evil! Ok, it's going to get much worse. But this story'd better have a happy ending!
valli Posted December 18, 2007 Report Posted December 18, 2007 You're evil! Ok, it's going to get much worse. But this story'd better have a happy ending! Don't worry, the story isn't over by a long shot, so there's no need to worry *she says knowing that she had something completely different in mind* Ok, maybe you can't be sure that there's going to be a happy ending...
Barbara Posted December 18, 2007 Report Posted December 18, 2007 Don't worry, the story isn't over by a long shot, so there's no need to worry That's good news! Ok, maybe you can't be sure that there's going to be a happy ending... I don't like the sound of that! I'll shut up now. I'll have to wait and see.
vale4eva Posted December 18, 2007 Report Posted December 18, 2007 Im slightly .... scared/confused The parts in italics, are they bits from the future, or are they just in Jacks mind of his fears/hopes for the future? Great chapter And, you can never be too good to us Please let her be ok! Update soon
valli Posted December 19, 2007 Report Posted December 19, 2007 The parts in italics are not from the future (even though Jack hopes so ), they’re just a dream.
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