I'll Never Give Up!

[matticus01]

oh my god that was beautiful

I dont want this to come to an end

Oh well update soon

[amz89]

Yah his staying

oh it's ending

well more soon please

[Channy!!!]

lol.. nah I'm not finishing the fic yet, just Jack and Martha being a happy couple may be ending...

[matticus01]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO channy you cant...noooo :(

They are meant to be, meant to be I'm telling you

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

[amz89]

I was thinking that but I wasnt sure lol.

Um at the start is that the present in the Fic? Because it says 6 months earlier?

Does Martha Change?

[Barbara]

Yay he's staying!

I can't believe Tony is still going to leave. He should stay with his son. He can't keep running away.

Love the end of the chapter! They said "I love you".

I really don't like the preview , Channy!

More please.

[valli]

Jack's staying! Tony is really weird that he really thinks that he can just walk away from his son just because he can't handle the pain

Jack and Martha are so adorable They said "I love you"

Not liking the preview Channy

More please!

[*purple*star*]

Thankfully Jack is staying, hope Tony decides to stay too!!

Aww Jack and Martha are the cutest ever!

Chany please dont let Jack and Martha end......

More please!!

[Channy!!!]

I was thinking that but I wasnt sure lol.

Um at the start is that the present in the Fic? Because it says 6 months earlier?

Does Martha Change?

Yes you're right, at the start Martha dancing at the club that is the present, I'm just telling the story of how she got there now.

[amz89]

Yah i knew it she shouldnt of changed does jack drive her away??

More soon i cant wait